MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139 - Page 6

Aray haan ek baat kehna tu bhool hi gaye u played he imagery so well.I was feeling like Im present there and seeing everything with my own eyes.When u described their feelings it was like I m inside them and was feeling wt they were feeling. It was like I m seeing the worlds from their eyes.Hats off to u Girl.

nyc update fiza!😊
eagerly waitin 4 MN's meet!😳

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Ok! First of all...i know that it was a very longgg update bt still!!!! i wanted to read more ya...

uff!!!!!! i was like nhiii!!! yeh yeha kyun end ho gaya...

now i dont know bt mujhe ek update chhaiye hi chhaiye woh bhi jitniii jaldi ho saktey mostly in this week plzzz 😔😔
thanks alot dear.. so glad u are liking this fftht much in just 2nd part... yaad dila diya kero mjhy update kerna i have written it quite much so i can update it... sorry i was late this time

God!!!!!!!!!!! i sooo loved it API...🤗

it was Awesome!!!

loved it to d coreee

loved it lodsss

Gosh! it was sooo captivating i mean u glued to the part to see what happened..😆
thanku so much dear

i sooo loved d way They Both Felt for n abt Each Other...

n already loving this caring lil Bro Samrat...

Their convo was really cute!

loved it a lottt

n Gosh!!! i sooo wanna read more n moreee

n wow!!!! Flowers waise ek pal ke liye i felt its Him..😆 bt i know itni jaldi thodi a jayega 😆

bt gosh!!! i m dying to read abt their lunch!!!
thanks alot
ya kinda frm mayank atleast
lol... itna free maat hoa mana fairytale hai per itni bhi nhi hia ki woh barat lay ker ghar ajay ek din mein

n hayeee...pura resto book waise karna hi hain...unke khudka jo hotel hain...hayeee

u know srsly!!! i felt like reading a Mills & Boon novel...

i loved it sooo much!!!

u r doing Awesome job like alwaysss!

n m already loving this...

loved it lodss

loved it to d coreee

love u lodsss API 🤗🤗🤗

ps: 😆 Thank u 😳 bt u know my API ROCKED more than Any One...😉😳🤗

pps: plzzz API...😔 i want an update asap!!!!!!! plzzz love u lodsss 🤗🤗🤗

thanks alot dear
for such great comments and compliment... glad u liked it

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

totally different concept. beautiful. mayank is so soft person

thanks alot dear for calling it different.. thank u... yes he is a very much...

Originally posted by: gopi06

awesome updt fiza
loved sayank bonding
waiting for mayur lunch meeting
cont soon
thanks for the pm

thanks alot dear
glad u liked it
thnks

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Amazing update di..loved it.
Nupur is really shocked..lol..waiting fr there lunch date 😉
Sayank bonding is adorable
Cont.soon

thanksa lot dear

ya she is ... no body knows her whereabouts and this man is making her shocked...
thnku

Originally posted by: clustersofstar

loved this update

thanks alot dear

Originally posted by: Humayra

Awesome update. Loved sayank bonding.

Waiting to know about mayUr lunch date.

Update soon.

thanks alot dear
glad u liked it
will cont soon

Originally posted by: crazymayurian

osum

thnks

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Lovely Update !!

thnkuu

Originally posted by: shafyyy

wow..

That was awesome part..

Fuza di...

Loved the bonding of Mayank-Samrat

and also their convo..

Samrat is really scared for Mayank...

Well i am quite liking the character of Nupur...let's see..what happens next.

well

thnsk dear glad u liked it so mcuh
thanku for liking them
yes he is .. and u will get to know why he is...
thnku so much hope u cont to do so

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

ye to sach mai fairytale banraha hai
interesting ...

loving it
cnt soon

yup it is
thnk dear

Originally posted by: drmaha

omg omg omg i cant even words to describe how mch i love this ff... this really makes me feel amazin...

i was so engrossed while reading and didint evnn realised whn this end...

thanks jani for such a beautiful ff 🤗 🤗

i love samrat convo ahahahha.. how sweet of him how mch he cared for his bro and maynak ahhh he is sweet...

loved it

pls pls pls update it soon ...

thanku so much dear glad u liked it tht much
yup they have a sweet relationship
thanks for ur comment

Originally posted by: MyInspirationz

Interesting update, Fiza.. 😊

thnks alot dear

Originally posted by: kirti123

nice part

really interesting 😊

thanks alot dear

Originally posted by: Irum.

Loved Sayank 's bonding.

Its very beautiful.

In first update Mayank was feeling disgusted around a prostitute it shows that he is a gem and that is why Samrat is worried for his brother.

After passing one week Mayank wants to meet Nupur .He has already fallen for her.Thank to sirf ek bahana hai j os k dil ne banaya hai.Bt how did he came know her adress.

Nupur is also feeling change and good.After ages she is FEELING something.She did what real Nupur wanted to do ,her soul is still pour and untouched.That is y she stopped him.

Some times I think k ek prostitute yeh q nahi kehti k os ki izzat loot gai.

Jb k jb kisi aam larki ka rape hota hai to who kehti hai k os ki izzat looti gaye hai.Its just not physical bt psychological and emotional.That is why I say that Nupur's soul s untouched bt Mayank has made his way to it by his...hmmm...yeh tu baad main pata chaley ga.

Pardon for errors.

thanks alot glad u liked it

mayank is not a saint one thing tht i want to tell u all... yet yes he has certain limitations too...
samrat is worried why .u will get to know in next to next part...
she cant say tht ... sumhwere she chose it.. no matter wht are the circumstance .. u have to or u have chosen it as a profession...
ya ture its more emotional yet it is phycical too... it is atimes just phyical...

Originally posted by: Irum.

Aray haan ek baat kehna tu bhool hi gaye u played he imagery so well.I was feeling like Im present there and seeing everything with my own eyes.When u described their feelings it was like I m inside them and was feeling wt they were feeling. It was like I m seeing the worlds from their eyes.Hats off to u Girl.

Have u ever written for Akhabr-e- Jahan or Digest.U should yaar.U write so so so good.

thanku so much dear...
im so glad to read ur compliments it means alot

abt the publication... i actually donot know who to contact them or to send things in... so i never tried to ...

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

nyc update fiza!😊
eagerly waitin 4 MN's meet!😳

thanks alot dear
glad u liked it

thnku

Originally posted by: Ria..

very nice update
Loved it

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thanks alot

will be updating 2day hopefully
just need few mins

Hi

I m actually really very happy to see all ur response her.. im just loving it… never thought u all will like this ff .. tht so in second chapter… im really honored… thanku

Rpld to u all

And to all u people… here cums a romantic beautiful date… enjoy