MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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To burn with desire and keep quiet about it is the greatest punishment we can bring on ourselves."
? Federico Garca Lorca, Blood Wedding and Yerma

Chapter: 3

Reaching at the place and waiting for her on lunch he was actually thinking what in all he is getting himself… after how long he has done that all… maybe eternity and what make him believe she will like this all cheesy things….

He hasn't done this evr with Esha….. after just once as tht was a completely waste of his efforts... she was more of the material than any little thing.. Though this wasn't the little thing to book the whole floor of the five start hotel.. to make it as he like cosy and peaceful.. making people mute bribing them..

Yet for Esha it was wht went into her pocket was worthy not wht he spend on making her believe he is in this . gosh when he got so blind that he overlook all that was infront of him, her tantrums, her always diamonds and cars and land demands that the he fulfill so easily.. she hardly ever thought of making him feel good… through out there relationship he always thought that mayb she is more intimate and her expression definitions are different as when ever he said she isn't with her.. for his pleasure… she will try to make him oky going out physically rather than emotionally..and that was never is area of interest ..it was like he was too not interested in getting so much intimate with her.. as first u have to be strongly connect emotionally to make such step… but than wht he overlooked was the fact that even in all this it was her desires that she want to fullfil and not his.. her frustration when he always make her believe that he doesn't want her to go like this for him, was not because he was respecting her but was because she desperately wants it….

He is irresistible man.. he chukled and his thought straight went to the night when nupur kissed him.. he slight rubed his fingers there, it was strange feeling…. Seduced by a girl…lol… he was.. and here is he waiting for his ms seduction to cum…correction Mr Sharma..she isn't ur girl..

He has taking the risk of entering the unkown zone.. and why he is doing so he don't know… he has strange pull.. curiosity to know that girl… no matter how low is at her profession but is so so high at the moral …ethical level… strange mayank Sharma saying a call girl ethical… when he hates hates it to core when girls use there body to get erything they desire in life..

But sumhwere she has made him believe she hasn't done that to full fil her desire… there were no such thing as desire in her eyes… those eyes were empty and cold.. cold aa ice… yet fire when they touch ur soul..

He sigh and looked at his watch… it 2 pm and she is late.. sigh seems like girl love to make him wait…. But he didn't even got know when this hour passed thinking about her… and he still wasn't denying the fact that he is making things trouble sum for himself… she was complete wrong girl, a complete wrong way and a completely wrong thing he is going.. all n all that will lead him to great mess he knew… but once in his life he want to taste the mess, he wants to be sure it's the mess or its only the way to make the mess picture perfect….

Time passed and hr more and than an hour more.. 4 pm and he was sure she isn't gonna show up… have she got his msg .. he knew she did… the largest courier servies of the country is one of his legacy and if they do it to the boss they all are fired…. Yet why than she didn't showed up.. is she okay or not…

He took his thing and placed handsome amount of money on table.. asked the waiter to pack sumthing and drove to the most quiet places of the city.. hardly populated.. he wonders how she mange to cum to the city maybe eryday from there…

Knowing her details isn't even a question.. he is Mayank Sharma…the Mayank Sharma.. the top10 richy rich of NY…. with in the effect of his 5 wriggling worms he can get all he want to.. and the address was piece of cake for his men… nothing it was…

Stepping out of his car, he took the bags and went to the elevators.. he checked himself in the mirror in that.. and than sigh .. what he is actually doing ..why all of a sudden he is behaving like a 18 years old love sick first date teen… he is 30, and has earn everything in his life.. he got everything in his hand… from a fashion house to construction business to logistic…. Sharma's are god of there world.. nothing is in this world is out of reach to them… yet wht he always seek is little peace and that is out of his life always….

Taking a deep breath and preparing himself to face her.. he rung the bell and waited for the door to open impatiently.. he doesn't know what he must expect form her when she see him here… he even donot know wht he is expecting from the hrs cuming next in his life….

The door knob turned and those eyes sneak through the side of the door… and they poop out with this sight of him… her mouth was left opned and she was giving him all the wrong calls.. if just she knew wht he do to him behaving like this

All day she was looking at the flowers looking at her back.. asking her what was in her tht she didn't showed up to his lunch date…the Sharma date…and evrytime she knew the ans… she has nothing to show there… . And with evry pasing min she was feeling like how must it felt to be with him on a date, wht he must have done, how he will treat her..

She cant help yet to imagine all that, a beautiful ambiance, a candle light dinner… ya at lunch ..soft music and slow dance.. wao.. she laugh its isn't one of her favorite movie… its life.. and her life is nasty.. nothing such pure soft and beautiful happen in it…

In all that the door bell rung and she was now getting scared… nobody cums to her house… and now courtesy Mayank Sharma tht alien sound is ringing again…

As soon as she opened the door she cant believe he is standing right there in fornt of her… in black formals.. he was the most gorgeous looking man eve she has seen… easily giving complex to bretty( Brett pit) and more over was given hard time to her not to show that she is drooling on him.. but wht he is doing here was a question to ask..

Mayank: that is mean very mean.. showing not on date keeping a gentleman wait for 3 hrs.. and now when he came up to ur house ur even not opening the door… very bad Ms nupur…

Nupur: huh… she moved in fornt of him and the door automatically opens..

He took this opportunity first to look at her from top to bottom… dress in all fare tales princes top and tracks.. she was looking the most cutest and innocent girl on this earth… she looked at her slef.. wht a disaster she is … atleast infront of him… a Greek god and a maid… wao… but that isn't her fault … she doesn't know he will cum here… his thought process gave him all the time to move in…. moved in without her permission ..and she was stunt to react …

Mayank: close the door I m in..

Nupur: wht are u doing here….

Mayank: trying to finds same plates and spoons…

Nupur: wht are u doing at my house..

Mayank: this isn't good nupur… u should have atleast asked me sum water coffe tea.. or altteast how I am.. and here ur asking me wht I m here

Nupur: cause that's exactly what I am concern about… what are u doing at my home..

Mayank: stop arguing and help me.. cum here…my stomach is cursing me with all the bad.. where u will like to have ur food.. here or in the lounge

Nupur: mayank I m asking u sutmhing

Mayank: its irrelevant … and where I can find the glases.. I thing this counter is perfect…

He was completely ignore her question and was busy arranging things on the counter of her kitchen ..he took out the food placed it on it.. lighten a candle making it look more than perfect.. he smiled looking at things

Nupur: mayank stop doing all this… who allowed u to cum here… and why u got my address…

Mayank: oops my mistake.. we need two chairs.. please lady u stay here I will get them…he said like a perfect gentleman and brought two chairs and placed them opposite side…

Nupur: mayank this isn't done…

Mayank: now its perfect.. cum on .. he forward his hand to her… and that made her blown..

Nupur: stop it mayank… WHt the hell u want… why are u here….

Mayank: he sigh and turned to her.. and move towards her… why u didn't came to lunch

Nupur: cause I don't felt like showing up there.. why should i

Mayank: I was just … oky .. so if u cant cum I can

Nupur: no u cant… u cant cum at my house without my permission…it doesn't go this way

Mayank: than how it goes…

Nupur: sigh.. mayank I work… we interact just for business… tht is it…

Mayank: okay so this was the after deal courtesy lunch what the big deal… common…

Nupur: ur not getting it at all… nobody can cum to my house like this… its not ur guys any freaking hotel room where u can do what so ever u want to .. I donot allow anyone to impose anything on me here.. its my world …so why the hell ur here

Mayank: Nupur why ur acting so… I just came here to have lunch with u..its just that.. I just want to talk to u… spend sumtime with u

Nupur: why is tht so.. and tht is wht I am saying its not that why.. I walk in to people and move out… thts it.. n if u want me again. U give me a call … but not for dates n fun …just for work… my kinda work…. Why ur not getting it…

Mayank: it wasn't a date date… I was just asking sum hrs tht it

Nupur: n why it is so

She was pissed off with her self and more with him.. why he needs to be this freaking innocent and handsome with the correct amount witty ness to blew her away and to top the all … he know how to bluff too… and this all is not done… not at all done… her work is despicable and it has made her mechanical… she goes in to make others feel good and cum out and that is were everything stop … all he was doing was not only freaking her out but was making her weird …it was making her believe it can be felt

Mayank: cuaee.. cause I just felt like… it feels nice…

Nupur: I don't offer this service at home Mr Sharma . I just talk business ..i don't spend time with people talking.. I get payed for every single pleasure I gave them… talking certainly don't cum in it…

Mayank: nupur what has gone into u… why are u behaving as if im doing sumthing indecent or forcing u.. its just simple lunch ..that it..

Ahh..God some one please tell that it's the simplest things in her life that she isn't allowed to do.. there nothing simple in tht…

Mayank: okay wait… I wont waste ur time.. he took out his cheaque book and sign it.. fill the amount tht u want to.. for giving me ur an hr…

This burned her more.. more than he thought this burn her… she was nevr offended with the names the wh**e the all the things she was… she knew she is and she has not denials to it.. but than she still in all this has a respect as individual atleast at her this house…

Nupur: I donot want to… u may leave… and please donot try to get personal… please leave…

Mayank: wht the hell it is.. he lost his cool..

After all he is mayank Sharma.. the great mayank Sharma… nobody says no to him..and this girl has been so unreasonable with him.. he was just asking to have food… not asking her to sleep with him… so whts the big deal with it.. he cant understand why she is overreacting

Mayank: im not asking u to sleep with me.. I was just trying to b nice .. but I thing u are not capable of digesting such

Nupur: mr Sharma ur absolutely right.. I m use to of sleeping around.. and im certainly not open to ur " nicey nicey things".. take ur money and leave… ur not allowed to enter my personal area… who gave the right to u.. I was there that night as that was my work.. night over .. u n I over… thts it…

Mayank: im not claiming any rights on u.. neither I have on u… it was just having u around made me felt so good.. it make me believe on sumthings that I lost my grip on… but here I can see u r just capable of giving ur body out.. maybe it was mistake asking u for all this…. Ur just what u r

Nupur: yes I m just a bloody pr***** and I just do the best tht I know tht is f***… all these thngs neither I allow anyone to get into …. Its business always I talk and I live…

Mayank : ya tht I can see… I think I should leave.. I mistakenly saw sumone else that night in u… I was hoping to have her here .. just want her few moments…

Nupur: poor u… please that way..

He moved towards the door…. Giving a glance to the flowers that were securely placed.. bang the door and left..

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pardon errors... n donot kill me

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
heyy awsm update fizaa...
thanx for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was beautiful fiza.
m actualy speechless.
dis update took me to other world.

i felt every bit of emotions potrayed in dis ff.

dis mayank n nupur is just best.
mayank so innocent,so cute n his gestures.gosh so lovefilld.i think he z in love with nupur.

n nupur is so mature.loved her to d core.pure from heart.life made her so strong.

i hope mayank will look to things from her POV.

well dat was a long coment unlike me.
but u realy have pushd havoc of emotion inside me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
awsome update fiza. fight of mayur. fear of nupur
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
That was Superb
loved it
Do continue soon:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
amazing updt fiza
loving this mature & strong nupur
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update..
MayUr had a fight :(
Hope they will sort it out soon..
Waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Wonderful update di...nupur is so mature...
Waiting for mayanks past to get unveil...but dont want to see nupur to sooth him just out of sympathy...
Both should fell in love.
Continue soon and ya loved ur writing style..simply superb.
Edited by --Ruchi-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
omg its an amzing update poor mayank ...how mch he did for nupur ut nupur uff wht she is is up to ?
update soon dear cant wait to see their interaction again:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
omg.. i didnt had expectd deir 1st date lyk dis!

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