MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
what a beautiful romantic date fiza 😆
but i loved it totally expected agar yeh sach mein beautiful and romactic date hoti tab jakta lagta😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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API!!!!!!!!!! pehle toh ap yeh batao ke apne isko Roamntic keh kar mera dil kyun toda???
pata hain i was like sooo happy ke at last Romantic date bt nhi yeha toh mera Dil...🥺
atleast ek warning toh dena tha 😔 hmph!

ohk...nvr mind!
it was Awesome update
Beautifully written
loved d way u write n Mayank a lottt
he is doing those things that he didn't even do for that bitch Esha :P n m sooo glad he didn't
i sooo hate that girl!!! yuck!!! she was sooo despo n disgusting!!!!🤢
thank god! he got rid of her its feel like she was with him for only Her benefits yuck!!!
awww...Nupur kyun nhi ayi!!! 😔
poor Mayank!!!
bt OMG!!! woh uske ghar tak pohoch bhi gaya..wah!!!
i though he wud call her may be bt no yeha toh koi aur hi scene hain! wah!
loved Mayank n his sweetness here a lottt
bt he is too emotional i think! sigh!!!!!
n at last yeh kya hua ladai!!!
😔 ab kya hoga n yeh dono phir kaha sath mein honge! sigh!!!!!!!!
Nupur had endured many cruel things in life..sigh!
want to read her past asap!!!!
why she is at this step of life n all! sigh!!!!!
felt bad for them!
at d ending when he saw those flowers i hope it left some affect on his heat...
waiting to see hw d story progress
loved it to d coreee
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗


ps: update soon plzzz 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
congo for new ff 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

it was beautiful fiza.
m actualy speechless.
dis update took me to other world.

i felt every bit of emotions potrayed in dis ff.

dis mayank n nupur is just best.
mayank so innocent,so cute n his gestures.gosh so lovefilld.i think he z in love with nupur.

n nupur is so mature.loved her to d core.pure from heart.life made her so strong.

i hope mayank will look to things from her POV.

well dat was a long coment unlike me.
but u realy have pushd havoc of emotion inside me.

thanks alot dear
im extremly hapoy to see ur such long comment and that so u loved it
loving the fact that u like the CS and liking them
yes he is kinda more edge of liking n love
let s
thanku so much ur words mean alot
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: vinan2050

heyy awsm update fizaa...

thanx for PM

thanks alot dear

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

awsome update fiza. fight of mayur. fear of nupur

thanku so much for liking it

Originally posted by: Maria.

That was Superb

loved it
Do continue soon:)

thanks alot dear
will cont asap
thanks alot

Originally posted by: gopi06

amazing updt fiza
loving this mature & strong nupur
cont soon
thanks for the pm

thanks alot dear
im so glad u like the CS
thanku
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Humayra

Awesome update..

MayUr had a fight :(
Hope they will sort it out soon..
Waiting for the next update...

thanks alot
yup they kinda had that...not actually
let c
will cont soon
thanks alot dear
thanku
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Wonderful update di...nupur is so mature...
Waiting for mayanks past to get unveil...but dont want to see nupur to sooth him just out of sympathy...
Both should fell in love.
Continue soon and ya loved ur writing style..simply superb.

thanks alot dear
glad u liked it
wonderful to know tht despite of wht nupur is u liked it...
mayank past doesnt have to much yet it will be in discusion after along time..
no it wont cum like this...
if she would hve been in sympathyize with him.. she wouldnt have done this today
they will fall.. sumwhere mayank has..
thaku so much... glad ur liking the style
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: drmaha

omg its an amzing update poor mayank ...how mch he did for nupur ut nupur uff wht she is is up to ?

update soon dear cant wait to see their interaction again:)

thanks alot dear...
glad ur liking it..
i think most of the people are wirte about wht nupur is upto
thanku so much

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

omg.. i didnt had expectd deir 1st date lyk dis!

i know.. but isnt it to early to end up in a date...
donot worry there frst will be sumthing mazay k
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: clustersofstar

what a beautiful romantic date fiza 😆

but i loved it totally expected agar yeh sach mein beautiful and romactic date hoti tab jakta lagta😆

thanks alot dear
hain nah
isi date dekhi hai khabi such great one.. n romance must have made u blush
this is the point its to early for the date
thanks alot
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: -Anila-

API!!!!!!!!!! pehle toh ap yeh batao ke apne isko Roamntic keh kar mera dil kyun toda???

pata hain i was like sooo happy ke at last Romantic date bt nhi yeha toh mera Dil...🥺
atleast ek warning toh dena tha 😔 hmph!
lol..meri jaan akar aj date hojati tu phir nupur k CS k kya hota.. she isnt into this for Mayank kinda person.. did nt u think she did right

ohk...nvr mind!
it was Awesome update
Beautifully written
loved d way u write n Mayank a lottt
he is doing those things that he didn't even do for that bitch Esha :P n m sooo glad he didn't
i sooo hate that girl!!! yuck!!! she was sooo despo n disgusting!!!!🤢
thank god! he got rid of her its feel like she was with him for only Her benefits yuck!!!
u will get to see her .. in sum later parts of the ff...
thanks for liking mayank
awww...Nupur kyun nhi ayi!!! 😔
poor Mayank!!!
bt OMG!!! woh uske ghar tak pohoch bhi gaya..wah!!!
i though he wud call her may be bt no yeha toh koi aur hi scene hain! wah!
loved Mayank n his sweetness here a lottt
bt he is too emotional i think! sigh!!!!!
n at last yeh kya hua ladai!!!
usko ana tha kya
haan woh us k ghar agay bechara aur us ko bahr nikal diya
glad u liked it
😔 ab kya hoga n yeh dono phir kaha sath mein honge! sigh!!!!!!!!
Nupur had endured many cruel things in life..sigh!
want to read her past asap!!!!
why she is at this step of life n all! sigh!!!!!
felt bad for them!
at d ending when he saw those flowers i hope it left some affect on his heat...
waiting to see hw d story progress
loved it to d coreee
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗

ab dekho kya hota hai will update soon
per abhi 2 days mein na ho shayd ... per try kero gi
u will know all this about her and all.. but let the lovestory start frst...
there things that a person like nupur wont be saying just like thtat...
thanks alot dear

ps: update soon plzzz 😳

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