Ariya FF: D techies Diary part14 page 56 18/03

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Heyaa Ariya fans,

An idea struck me ...it is basically Shree's point of view towards d whole story...
It will have a new character "Sharmishta " (opposite shree..)

Character Sketch :
1. Arjun suryakant rawte
2. Sameer rathore
3. Roshni
4. Shreekant sen.
5. Chotu
6. Sharmishta

Dun worry i have RIA Also ...
7. Ria (cant foget her , but her entry would b after 2-3 chapters)

It is gonna b a diary entry format ...so everything is in first person...

I wud Like to tell : please check d dates (on which d entry is written)



~~~Chapter 1~~~

28 April 2008,

Tomorrow will indeed b d best day of my life. I m gonna start a new life: which is full of adventures and ,most importantly, I will b involved in the world I like, my laptop. My parents always wanted me to start my job in IT industry, but I dun want to get myself involved in d industry. I always wanted to do sumthing just different.

See today by God's grace , I have finally managed to enter ETF, the emergency task force. Though I m an assistant right now, but its okay I will soon b dere technical expert.

I just want the night to end soon n I can go to office. I just know I will have d opportunity of working wid sum Mr. Sameer Rathore. I heard dat he is a very strict person .

It wud b interesting to meet my colleagues. I heard 2 more people are also going to join with me. Lets see how r dey, n I hope to rock ETF office.

God , please bestow ur blessings upon me . I hope dat I can b a very successful police officer soon.

S

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29 April, 2008

My day started at around 6. I didn't knew first day at ETF could be so tiring , but that 's what my job is. First day was a bit unusual . I reached 1 hour before the reporting time, because of my excitement. I scrutinized d whole place , d location of my headquarters. The surroundings are nice , there is a very nice canteen (so I can do Vella-panti with my colleagues, even though d chances are less).

Finally , much to my excitement , the clock struck 9. I headed towards d conference room, where I suppose to report. After 5 minutes, a man with a great personality, he was luking like a wrester , entered . Soon I introduced myself . He told me , he is chotu, a new recruitment , and would b working as a commando in ETF.

So I made a new friend today.

Very soon we were called in the conference hall. I wanted to know my rest of the team n who is d third intern ,who is going to report today.

Me n Chotu entered d conference room, it had a circular table in the center. There was a man sitting just in front of me , on other side of the table. My guess was right , he is My boss, Mr. SAMEER Rathore. What a personality Boss, he s just amazing.

Soon a lady n man entered . I gave them both a smile , as a gesture. The lady responded wid a smile in return, but d man didn't showed ny sign, (Khadoos kahin ka).

Soon Mr Sameer started d introduction session. I came to know dat d lady is "Roshni" (Wat a pretty name), She is d Research n development head of ETF.

The man was Mr Arjun Rawte , I have heard in my training days , dat he is a brilliant officer. I m going to learn a lot from him .

Just wen dere was a knock, n a girl came in hurriedly. Before ny1 cud have asked her anything, She started saying:"Sharmistha Banerjee, reporting Sir'..Sorry for being late '".

Rathore sir scolded her and that clearly gave me d impression , dat in ETF , I cannot b even 5 minute late. Most importantly , I came to know , that I have to work under 2 khadoos boss.

I was lucky because I was sent to Research department , along with Sharmistha . We both are going to work under Roshni ma'am . I liked roshni ji, n I hope she s a nice boss.

I am also feeling bad for Chotu, bechara Arjun sir k under kaam karega. God bless him or I shud say , Arjun sir bless him .

S



PS:Do tell Whether u liked it or not ...n should i continue wid d parts ...


I m waiting for d replies



Index:

chapter 1: (Pls scroll up)

chapter 2: Page 4

Chapter 3: page 7

Important Note : page 8

Part 4: Page 10

Part 5: Page 14

Part6: page 19

Part 7 : page 23 and page 27

Part 8: page 31

Part 9: page 36

Part 10: page 38

Part 11: Page 41

Part12 : page 46

Part 13: page 53

Part 14: page 56

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shrutisweety thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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bechara chotu working under arjun
it was awsome purva
so intersting it is
eagerly waiting for next update
continue soon
thanks for pm
Edited by shrutisweety - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fabulous start purva...👏👏👏
Roshni is there...now this is something really new...😃
loved the update
Shree under two strict officers...😆
waiting for the next part...don't forget to pm me the next part dear...
Edited by prava55663 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very interesting dear
so Roshni is alive?!
And well Arjun and Rathore are very khadoos boss😆
please continue😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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first ol in school days i wer thot dat diary entry shld contain 125 words only...si i think 29 th april posts exceeds the word limit so ur marks sry comments r deducted for it lolxx

n yea...story writing i mean diary entry is jat awesome n shree as
centre point of story ...grt...first evr fiction...making otjer etf members otht thn arjun n riya n rathore in centre...grt

awesome plss do continue...
n sree nice POV...keep rockin"!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey.. Amazing concept!! 👏

Would love to read more of this!! 😃

So, Shree's the narrator; couldn't have been better!! 😃

Looking forward to masti between the trio and their Khadoos bosses; oh and Roshni's there too.. 😃

Great going!! Good luck! 👍🏼

Thanks for the PM.. Update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: purecure

first ol in school days i wer thot dat diary entry shld contain 125 words only...si i think 29 th april posts exceeds the word limit so ur marks sry comments r deducted for it lolxx


Oh my marks deducted AWWW😭

But no problem as far as u liked it ...thanks

i always wanted to do sumthing wid Shree's character ...dats y i chose him 😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Roshni and Riya back...thats great news...
Amazing story line...from Shree's POV...very different!!
plz cont soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow that's a completely different concept ...
So shree is the narrator ...hmmm that sounds interesting ...
So even roshni is there and shree is gonna work under her ... N poor chottu he has to work under Arjun ...
Lookin forward to read the next update ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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super duper niceee... wohoo... 👏
this diary entry is something unique and great idea...
mazaa aa gaya...
and I can totally imagine Shree... agar tumhare badle wo likhta to bilkul aise hi likhta 😃

and wow.. u included Roshni... !! liked it verrryyy much... would love to see her as an ETF member... 👍🏼

p.s. - The thing I liked the most is that u started the diary entry of Shree from 28th April... 😆 ... and Roshni is my nick name
so by this way got a connection with ETF 🤣

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