~Unfulfilled Desires~A SwaRon SS

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi Guys!!

So, I have read lots of fanfics/short stories and oneshots on indiaforums and always had a thought to write something of my own, although I think I am a terrible writer and this is my first ever piece of writing on IF so please bear with me'😳

I seriously love what you guys write, it is really commendable, the amount of effort and time all of you put in to provide sheer entertainment for all the readers (including me!)👏⭐️

P.S- Just a quick intro, my name is Vedika and as you can see I am a huge swaron fan!!😆

P.P.S- I should really stop blabbering now!😆

Ok so heres the concept, hope you like it!😉

Swayam and Sharon

Two souls and one heart

Married by love or law?

Pure Love or Lust?

They have the deepest feelings for each other but why are their feelings locked up?

A journey through their deepest desires, agonizing secrets and the undying affection they share for each other away from the millions of question raising eyes of the world.

Nafrat ki rakh ke neeche, pyaar ki chingaari dabhi padhi hai

Aaj us chingaari ko, shola banne do

*Last dialogue from kmh2 😊

*Edit*

My awesome banner, courtesy Madhura😃


Hope it was at least readable' awaiting your comments and criticisms

Pls advise me to continue or not and also if you have any suggestions for the name of this ss pls pm me

I sincerely thank you for taking out time to read this

Regards,

Vedika

Index:

Concept-Above

Chapter 1-Pg 7

Note+Chapter 2-Pg 12

Imp. Note-Pg 18

Chapter 3-Pg 21

Chapter 4-Pg 50

Chapter 5-Pg 67

Imp.Note-Pg 71

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Posted: 12 years ago
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res

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I found the concept simple yet an eye-catcher u can include a hell lot of things into this to make it a super duper hit... if what I feel the concept is exactly like...

I found it interesting... U definitely shud try this out...

thanks for the PM
Edited by -shenz- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Vedika...Congrats for ur 1st work on IF...WOW...super awesome concept ...lovely intro...its super short yet so eye catching ...its an concept with so many possibilities...loved ur intro ...so interesting...👍🏼

Two souls and one heart

Married by love or law?

Pure Love or Lust?

They have the deepest feelings for each other but why are their feelings locked up?



loved the way u said...

Nafrat ki rakh ke neeche, pyaar ki chingaari dabhi padhi hai

Aaj us chingaari ko, shola banne do👏


This one is going to be interesting for sure..can't wait for the 1st chapter ...plz plz update soon😊😃😳
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -shenz-

res


-unres-
I found the concept simple yet an eye-catcher u can include a hell lot of things into this to make it a super duper hit... if what I feel the concept is exactly like...

I found it interesting... U definitely shud try this out...

thanks for the PM

Thankyou sooo much😃
Aleast someone liked it😆
Do you have any suggestions for the title??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -shenz-

maybe


THE UNEXPRESSED DESIRES

Thanks!
Will surely consider it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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U r welcum...

hope u find an apt title for this story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey vedika awesome concept...👏
would love to read further...😳
so do continue...
n that too soon...😊
will be waiting for ur next update...😃


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome concept continue soon
And thanx for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anindita91

hey vedika awesome concept...👏

would love to read further...😳
so do continue...
n that too soon...😊
will be waiting for ur next update...😃


Thanks😃
Will try and update as soon as I get a few more reviews and do u hv any title suggestions??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharuKR

Awesome concept continue soon
And thanx for d pm

Thankyou😊 any suggestions for the title??

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