~Unfulfilled Desires~A SwaRon SS - Page 5

Originally posted by: pratik54000

intro sounds super cool...do continue it...haterd followed by love is best to read...

hey nice to know your name finally vedika...thank you for always providing time to read my works...and ya from the intro i can say that you are an excellent writer...so dont say yourself to be a terrible writer...

pratik...

Originally posted by: arjuhiswaron007

Thankyou sooo much😃I'm a huge fan of your works!!

It means a lot to me that you actually read and commented on my ss!!

Oh god really you like my idiotic write ups...thanx a ton for reading them...but seriously i loved your intro...you will be way better than what i write...trust me...

Originally posted by: pratik54000

Oh god really you like my idiotic write ups...thanx a ton for reading them...but seriously i loved your intro...you will be way better than what i write...trust me...

Vedika i am not being modest re...and you have rightfully given high hopes and trust me itne sare swaron write up padte padte ab pata chal jata hai kya acha hoga aur kya nahi...so you will be way better than me trust me on this...i will not be disappointed at all..

Originally posted by: pratik54000

Vedika i am not being modest re...and you have rightfully given high hopes and trust me itne sare swaron write up padte padte ab pata chal jata hai kya acha hoga aur kya nahi...so you will be way better than me trust me on this...i will not be disappointed at all..

ha ha ha ha khari bhi utar jaogi dont worry... abhi tu update post to kar bas...

Originally posted by: pratik54000

ha ha ha ha khari bhi utar jaogi dont worry... abhi tu update post to kar bas...

Originally posted by: pratik54000

ok all the best than...

Hi Guys!!

First of all thankyou sooo much for the comments, likes and encouragement🤗

I have a small request, please can someone make a banner for this ss??? Pretty please😳❤️😃

If anyone is willing to do so, pls pm me asap so I can make a final decision on the name for this ss😊

Anyways, Here's the first chapter (It is quite small😳-but the length will vary from update to update) and also please excuse the bad hindi dialogues as my hindi is not the best😳

Lastly, All comments,likes and criticisms are welcome!

Love,Vedika

Chapter 1:

Alone. All alone. Sharon Raiprakash , once the most fiery persona anyone could come accross was never lonely, this catastrophe was caused only because of the person she loathed the most, or atleast she thought so, the one and only, Swayam Shekhawat. But as they say, waqt ko badaltey der nahi lagti.

Flashback-(Mumbai)

The happiest day of her life, she was going to be legally bound by marriage to the love of her life.

Kriya- Baaraat aa gayi! Aaj to jiju tujhe dekh kar khushi ke maare behosh ho jayenge!

Sharon blushing to the core, at the mention of her fianc

Neha- Oho.. Blushing and all you are!

Vishaka- Dude, leave her alone na

Kriya- Arre aise kaise chod doon, meri ek lauti behen ki shaadi hai aaj!

All the girls giggle like a bunch of seven year olds

But suddenely the bedroom door bursts open and'

Precap- Suspense!! (Thoda to tadpana banta hai na😆)

What yaar, update padha shuru bhi nahi kiya aur khatam ho gaya! 😭 Not fair yaa Vedika! 😡

And ur tadpaoing me by ur very intriguing end..I cant wait to find out who it is!!:^(] Jaldi update and please zyaada lamba 😛

Thanks for the PM.