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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Gr8 update 👏mahi i would luv to read further as i am already following It on fb
thanx fr d PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

WITHOUT PAIN NO LOVE

PART 7: MANVEER:::::::: <3 :::::::

Anya feels very awkward as ever1 was staring at her…

Anya: kya hai ese kya dekh rahe ho mene kuch nahi kiya….

Vijay: han to humne kab kaha ki tumne uday banna ko kiss kiya….

Suddenly an angry voice comes from back….

The person: UDAY DA….

Every1 get up and see the person…

Uday runs and hugs the person tightly….

Anya gets very jelous and angry obvio….but not knowing the reason…

The person pushes uday back and glares at him….

The person: Uday da hum apse bahot gussa hai….

Uday: sorry…so so sorry…hume kal jaroori kaam agaya tha…aap London se kab ayi…??

The person turns and face away… uday smiles…

Uday: kya aap apne uday da ko maaf nahi karenge???

The person: kabhi nahi…humse bhi jyada important kam tha….

Uday then looks at anya but she seemed to be lost in her own world…she was till stuck on the words…apna uday…

Anya's pov(point of view)

Who the hell is she???aur who uday ko apna uday kyun keh rahi hai…W*F…anya whats happening, ho gi koi Uday ki nayi chamak challo tujhe kya….

End of POV…

Uday looked back at the person….

Uday: sorry sweetheart…ab chalo hum tumhe sabse milate hai….

They go near the dinning table…

The person already knew niks and arman…

And points towards anya…

The person:Uday da ye kaun hai??

Uday looks at where the person was pointing and sees anya still lost in her thoughts…

Uday then breaks her chain of thoughts…

Uday: princess kaha khoi ho??

Every1 looks at Uday and are shocked to see him smiling flashing his 32 white teeth…

Vijay: wow kal toh sare akbar ki headlines hongi…"KHUSAT SADU YUVRAJ UDAYVEER SMILED…" aur use princess kyun bula rahe ho uska nam toh…

Uday cuts: han han hume pata hai uska naam….

Uday passes a cute smile to her while she is blushing a little…

Evry1 notices that…vijay starts singing…

"kuch toh hua hai kuch ho gaya hai ek do din (its actually do char din but vijay changed it…) se lagta hai jese sab kuch alag hai sab kuch naya hai.."

And vijay bhai is gonna continue with the song but the person interrupts annoyed…

Person: oh ho shut up vijay bhai..

Vijay stops all laughing…anya and Uday blushing…

Uday: vese princess ye hai rajkumari jaynandini…call her J…aur J ye hai anya…

Both give a half hearted smile to each other…

Anya: hi j…

J: hi anya….

Then she turns to uday…

J: uday da aap to hume bhul hi jaiye apne hume lunch par bhi invite nahi kia who to unnati ne…

Uday bites his lower lip….

Uday: I'm sorry J…acha agar hum tumhe lunch ke bad beach par le jaye toh??

J suddenly gets happy…

J: seriously Uday da…ur the best..

She says excited…and hugs him and gives him a kiss where anya had already given….anya gets super doper angry…

Vijay: oho j bhai ye apne kya kiya…

J: humne kya kiya…

Vijay: tumhare pehle kisi bala ne Uday ke cheeks pe kiss kia tha..aur tumne to sabot hi mita diye….

J: what????

Uday glares at vijay…anya feels relieved…vijay shuts up…

Uday: kuch nahi j ab chalo lunch karte hai….

All had their lunch and were about to leave…

Unnati: dada aap sab jaiye hum aur vijay ghar pe hi rukenge…

Uday was about to say something…but j interrupts…

J: oh fo Uday da kyun apne hi behen ke love life ke villain bana chahte ho aap??rehne dijiye na inhe akele….

Uday smiles as he was going to say something else but then decides not to say…

Hearing j all start laughing…Uday sees anya laughing and is lost in seeing her and vijay obviously notices this…

Vijay: han han uday banna apko bhi apke bandariya ke sath thoda time spend karne milega….

Anya blushes… unnati aarman and niks burst out in laughter….j is confused…

J: ye bandariya kon hai??

Vijay is about to tell..

Uday glares at him and he shuts up…

Uday: koi nahi hai j ye tumhara bhai pagal ho gaya hai ise shayad treatment ki jaroorat hai…hum ise ane ke baad achi treatment denge kyu vijay bhai??

Vijay is now scared he gulps as he knew if now he wont shut up he will turn into a punching bag…

Vijay: nahi nahi Uday bannna…hum thike hai…haye rabba ye kya ho gaya…uday banna sorry…humari toh shadi bhi nahi hui ab tak….

All burst into laughter….

J: oh ho uday da kyun humare bechare bhai ko dara rahe ho???

Uday innocently…: humne kya kiya??acha chalo ab hume chalna chahiye….btw j humne tumhare liye beach par surprise mangvaya hai…

J: surprise wow…humse to ab raha hi nahi jata chaliye na….

Then they all go on the beach in uday's jeep…

Uday and aarman sitting in front and all girls sitting back….

They reach the beach all run towards the beach except Uday and anya….

Uday comes next to her…

Uday: chale princess??

But anya doesn't seem to hear him…she was having some sort of flash back…

FLASHBACK….

Two kids sitting on the beach playing with sand…

Boy: tum ye castle kyun bana rahi ho??

Girl: kyunki muje pashand hai…(girl too small to speak clearly…)

Boy: par tumhare paas to khudka castle hai na..

Girl: han phil bhi mujhe banana hai…

Boy very mischievous….

He breaks the castle….and runs away…

The girl starts crying….the boy runs back to her….

Boy cups her face..:im sorry mujhe tumhe rulana nahi tha…

Girl is still crying…

Boy: acha chalo hum milkar castle banate hai….

FLASHBACK ENDS as uday shakes her to bring her out of her thoughts…

Uday: princess phirse kaha kho gayi???

Anya: han…Uday kuch kaha kya tumne…

Uday: han humne kaha ki chale?? Hum itne pyaar se puch rahe hai or tum ho ki….vese kiske khyalo mein khoi thi humare??

He leans a bit towards her but he pushes him back…

Anya: chal hat halkat vede kahike…

They both laugh….and then go towards the beach to join others…..

~mahi~

guyz do tell kesa laga i hope acha tha...

warna tomatoes bhi chalenge hehe...😡

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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
.It was amazing dear awesome work
And ahan i smell jealousy alot but it was cute
And well uday DA means brother like or what ??
Anyways jay ki entry was awesome and
Man i wanna see uday jealous as jay and udaybmake anayanjealous so she may just find a random guy and flirt with him and uday getting jealous at the beach only ahem that would be awesome but hey just a suggestion
But i would love watching that
Good job deary 👏 Well done and hey
Plzz give a precap plzz plzz plzz 😊
Nahi to remainder ki bochaar paaki
And hey im first yay
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
its so cute and amazing love da beach part totally n plz update soon n do pm me :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
awesome update dear:)pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
suprbbb!!!!!!!😊 anya jealousy wa sa treat to watch!!!!!!! manyata flashbackk wass soo sweeett,hope uday getas to know soon abt anya truth!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: pia.raha

suprbbb!!!!!!!😊 anya jealousy wa sa treat to watch!!!!!!! manyata flashbackk wass soo sweeett,hope uday getas to know soon abt anya truth!!!!!!!!


dear uday already knows that anya is his princess...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: AndreaBaid

.It was amazing dear awesome work

And ahan i smell jealousy alot but it was cute
And well uday DA means brother like or what ??
Anyways jay ki entry was awesome and
Man i wanna see uday jealous as jay and udaybmake anayanjealous so she may just find a random guy and flirt with him and uday getting jealous at the beach only ahem that would be awesome but hey just a suggestion
But i would love watching that
Good job deary 👏 Well done and hey
Plzz give a precap plzz plzz plzz 😊
Nahi to remainder ki bochaar paaki
And hey im first yay


thnks and would surely ad ur sugestion in upcuming epiz and ya uday da means dada ,
da is the short form of dada...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89

Lovely Mahi... it really was an awesome part.

Anya's jealousy bit was cute ☺️. Flashback of the beach was very sweet 😳.
Please update soon.
Thanx 4 the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
hey jst read all ur updateds its jst wndrful...m truely hv becum ur fan...jst amazing...ek hi din me tumne hme apna deewana bna diya...👏🤗5⭐️ to u...muaah..

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