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Posted: 12 years ago
pls pm me whenever u update😊
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Originally posted by: ninand

oh wow Ashley, you updated! smooth part.. and the subtle things that jog her memory, the very understated way she comes around to being Geet khurana again.. very well done.


I'll be looking forward to reading more MG from you .. actually the kind of Maans you create are so very elegant, alluring.. so even when you started that vampire story, i had to try very hard to imagine RIshabh , not maan..lol..

hope you keep going :)


actually i thought to leave this story uncompleted but that would be wrong for all those who want this to be completed, so i am trying to continue😊

Hard to imagine a story without maaneet in them either😳 but dd said that we guys should move on, so i am trying that😳...As vivan was a vampire before, its not hard for me to imagine rk as a vampire but i can never think maan as a vampire,but he may be an angel warrior😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
glad to c u back after long back!
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Originally posted by: Ashleydevlin


actually i thought to leave this story uncompleted but that would be wrong for all those who want this to be completed, so i am trying to continue😊

Hard to imagine a story without maaneet in them either😳 but dd said that we guys should move on, so i am trying that😳...As vivan was a vampire before, its not hard for me to imagine rk as a vampire but i can never think maan as a vampire,but he may be an angel warrior😉


no i cannot see Maan as a vampire either😆.. angel warrior sounds 'divine'😆.. but nah..I dont exactly expect you to pull MG everywhere in every story:).. and thanks for coming back for us and continuing this story..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi dear..swa u updated nw! welcome back! Thanks 4 da fab intense update! Geet better bt does nt remember! Maan happy n den sees Rasika! Well written! Update soon n do pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
update glad to see you back continue soon



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wow wht a surprise...

u come back...

am really very very happy...

its really very awesoem update...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 25: last part


Dedicated to my fans who keep pming to finish this story and especially to ''Basicquestion1'' the most sweetest of my fans🤗


Rashika sat there still like a statue watching Maan Singh Khurana go. Once a long time ago, she had come into the lives of khurana's and had tore their world apart and today Maan had destroyed her life. And now she was left with nothing. No husband, no friend, no daughter''.tears slid down her eyes'''''''''''.

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5 years later

The sun was rising slowly as Maan jogged back toward his house. When he passed through the gate, his eyes went up toward the balcony where his eyes met geet's eyes. A smile broke on his face. He went inside and straight up to his room. He opened the door slowly trying not to wake up his children. He slowly moved toward the cot and peeked inside the blanket, a small baby was sleeping oblivious to the world. He gently kissed his 5 month daughter on head. Then, he went to bed where a 4 year old was snuggled into bed, sheets were twisted around him. He smiled and kissed him on head too. Then, he turned toward the door where his wife was standing smiling. He went to her kissed her lightly on lips ''good morning''. geet her eyes shining with happiness and contentment hugged him ''good morning''.

Maan slowly ran his fingers through her hairs as he sunlight spilled into the room brightening everything on his path.

Maan, ''geet lets go to hoshiyar pur?''

Geet,'' okay.''

Maan laughed.

Geet loving the sound of his laugh said,'' why are you laughing?''

Maan,'' no question, simply okay.'' He put his chin on her head,'' every guy I know complains that their wives never listen to them and I feel so lucky, my wife never argues.'' He teased her.

Geet smiled dulled a little remembering the time when she hadn't listen to him and then that bomb blast, she hugged him tighter, she always wanted to stay with him. ''men they are never happy'' she teased him back.

Maan,'' but I am a very happy man.'' He pulled slightly away and raised her hand to him, kissing the spot in her palm where he had burnt her a life time ago. ''geet.''

Geet,''hmm''

maan ''you forgave me nah for what I did to you.''

Geet,''in love, there is nothing to forgive.''

Maan,''you love me so much, I feel humbled by it.''

Geet raised her eyes to him and said nothing. Her eyes speaking volumes. ''I love you''he whispered in her ears. Geet savoured the words thanking god for her happiness, together they watched their children sleeping and maan feeling that may be happily ever after actually existed'''''''''''''''.

THE END
Edited by Ashleydevlin - 12 years ago
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hi😆
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Thnk u thnku thnku shooo much for updating this story ...



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