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Originally posted by: koko_chetna

chapter-13




recap: kriyansh bathroom scene- swaron mall scene...martin + swaron+ kriyansh bantering.. "they " r coming fiasco..




m: yipee 'THEY "r coming...

sw: ya after such a long time...

r: yeah finally !! am going to have a partner...

sw: yeah ...partners in ur crimes...!!

r: u r such a jerk swayam...!!

all the while sharon was listening to them..whereas kria seemed to be lost somewhere...

sh: who r coming??

r: well my cousin brother n swayams sis ..they r married to eachother n they stay with us...both are lawyers...

sh:wow...thats wonderful ..hai na kria???

(no answer)

sh: kria??

(no answer)



v: yeah..neha tum bhi kuch seekh lo kria se..

n: what??

v:ummnn.. nothing

all laughed at him..





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chapter 14+ 15(next post)
chapter-14



recap: all mysteries out...krisha's confrontation..

The morning was new but the problems were old, the new morning just brought the new hope and energetic fighting spirit to shoo away those troubles..



r: what??

kria was about to leave wen he grabbed her n holded her wrist n turned it at her back...he was pressing her to him

r: so i am cassonova??

k: yes u r !! now leave my hand its hurting...

r: no way!! u cant say anything to me like this...

k: oh really?? u r cassanova n always be...

r: n u know what u r such a irritating person..that i cant stand u..

k: am not irritating

r: yes u r n i dont want any drama in front of anyone ..so come soon in the dining room...

he left her hand n walked out of her room...soon kria joined everyone...they were all praising her 4 making such a tasty breakfast..but kriyansh never glanced at eachother...








chapter 15

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chapter-15



recap: maria invited to breakfast...
after breakfast all the girls including maria sat in krisha's


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chapter-16




recap: 🤣 matrimonial site🤣



sharon was standing in the balcony looking at the sky, kria

n wiped her tears...while kria noded like a small kid...





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chapter-17




recap: 🤣 matrimonial site🤣



swayam entered in his cabin panting...
"uff aaj toh hadh hi ho gayi..."

he saw sharon standing n looking out of the window glasses of the building...

sw: ummm miss ghai...

sharon came out from her thought...

sh: oh!! tum kab aaye??woh am sorry...i was just thinking...

she looked down avoiding to look towards him...

sw: hey its ok..waise yeh jaan kar khushi hui ki tum sochti bhi ho...


soon kriyansh reached home...n went to their respective rooms..
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next morning...

m: HEY BHAGWAAN!!!

martin shouted at top most of his voice...n this was enough to wake up everyone...all gathered in the living room..this was the first time they woke up before their alarm rang...

all: what happened martin??








phew!!

precap: not thought yet...



ps: so two chapters back to back...phew!! this was hell writing...so long n mind u i want long comments...i know this is lame chapters..
critisicm is invited.. any suggestion...??

i tried my best to handle each n every character..plz say if anyone feels anyones scene less...

plz remove this id koko_chetnaif u dont want any updates

have a nice day

love
crazysky (chetna)

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Originally posted by: koko_chetna

chapter-18




recap: neha pregnant...kriyansh media...swaron n shivam..



kria pov:
rey pov:
swayam pov:
sharon pov:

jo kal hua wo aakhir tha kya??life mein itna sab kuch??ek saath?? achanak se??
gosh kuch samajh nahi aa raha..reyansh se shaadi karne ka mera decission sahi toh hai na..??kal tak mai abhishek ki
fiance thi par ab reyansh ki..!! universe ji kya life di hai aapne ..i mean..mean?? kisi bhi cheez ka meaning hi to samajh mein nahi aa raha...itna confusion?? n ab neha ki health ...??cool down kria cool down...mujhe reyansh se baat karni hi padegi...

karna toh padega dude..baat toh ab karna hi padega baatcutter se..neha ki is haalat mein hum use itna bada shock nahi de sakte...aur kal jo kuch hua wo ekdum se ho gaya mujhe khud samajh mein nahi aa raha ki maine aise kaise kria ko apni fiance keh diya woh bhi media mein..n agar main woh sab nahi bolta toh aaj ke newspaper mein abhishek n kria ki news print ho jaati ...yeh kria mujhe itna kyu affect karti hai...

affect to main bhi reyansh se hoti hu...pata nahi kyu..kal jab usne mujhe fiance kaha toh mujhe itna bura nahi laga..while jab bhi abhishek mujhe fiance kehta tha toh aisa lagta tha ki mai apna sar deewar pe maar du..

sar deewar se marne wali baat ho jati agar kria se puch kar usse fiance kehta...woh kabhi ready nahi hoti...

reyansh ke mere itne paas khade hone par mujhe uncomfortable mehsoos nahi hua...but abhishek ko dekh kar itna disgusting feel hota hai...

disgusting toh mujhe feel hota hai..jab bhi woh ganda insaan kria ki taraf dekhta hai mann karta hai..uski aankhein phod du..n kria ko apni bahon mein chupa lu...

just then rey jerked himself..
"did i just thought that??" par kal jo hua...party ke baad...hope our decission is right...


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kal joh hua ..woh aaj se pehle kabhi bhi nahi hua...
i mean main itna angry n jealous kaie ho gaya...?? sharon toh sirf shivam ke saath bas dance hi kar rahi thi ...toh why i felt like someone stabbed me..why i felt shivam will steal sharon from me..."wait a second..!! sharon mere paas kab thi..??uff yeh ladki mujhe definetely pagal kar de gi...

PAAGAL!! theek se gussa karna bhi ni aata...swayam ne kal jaise shivam se baat ki ..waise usse pehle kabhi baat karte nahi dekha ..jab shivam se usne mere saath dance karne ke liye pucha toh shivam ka chehra dekhne layak tha...but i wish ki kal ka time wahi par tham jata..swayam ki bahon mein...itna sukoon mujhe bahot dino baad mila...

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pheww!!

precap: little bit of flash back n hope a new entry..kria in new avtaar..more fun from next chapter


ps: read the note above...
i know this chapter was boring one n lame one..i myself is not satisfied with it n this time i dont expect much comments n likes..as i myself is unsatisfied.. but just take this as filler... i know less swaron but from next chapters swaron too will play vital role...
if u dont tell me whats the defect in my ff thats bothering u ..i cudnt correct it so feel free to tell me...

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Originally posted by: koko_chetna

chapter-19

recap: newspaper carrying news about kriyansh..swaron n kriyansh thinking about eachother

swaron n kriyansh were still thinking about eachother..at different place..but about eachother...

swaron flashback:

shivam n sharon were dancing with eachother...her hands were on his shoulders..while shivam's hands were on her waist..

she didnt liked it being so close to him..swayam was watching all this..but suddenly shivam pulled sharon more close to him..he was getting extra close to her..sharon was feeling disgusting but faked small smile on her lips..

swayam could read the feeling behind her fake smile.. before shivam could get more close to her..swayam made his ways towards them..he tapped on shivam's shoulder from back...

sw: may i have the pleasure to dance with the lady??

before shivam could say anything sharon heavenly chirped in between

sh: offcourse swayam.. shivam is such a good hearted person ..he wouldnt mind it..right shivam??

shivam was perplexed ..on one hand he wasnt willing to leave sharon on the other hand he didnt want to spoil his so called good impression in front of sharon..he unwillingly agreed..

sh: offcourse not swayam..u may have the lady...

sw(in mind): "u can have the lady" toh aise keh raha hai jaise iske baap ka maal ho...

shivam smiled n left the dance floor..

sharon took a sigh of relief on seeing shivam leaving... swayam extended his hand towards her for dance which she gladly accepted..swayam pulled her towards him n gripped her waist possessively...sharon felt somewhat odd but she could feel the warmth in his embrace...

soon light was dimed n couple song was played..sharon placed her hand on his chest n they swayed with the music..

sw: sharon are u all right??

sh: hmm..thank u..

swayam smiled n said " its ok..."

sw: sharon usne tumhe hurt toh nahi kiya??

sharon just noded in no..

sh: waise tumhe kya hua ... i mean tum itne protective...??

sw: woh nothing..kria told to take care of u thats why...

sh: so tum kria ke kehne par yaha aaye..??

sw: nahi woh rey ne...

sh: achha..but...

sw: sharon will u stop interogating me ...

sh: kya hua swayu ??

sw: sharon i dont like it...

sh: but i like it...

sw: sharon...

sh: swayu...

sw: uff...u'll never mend ur ways...

haan??

with that he pulled sharon more closer n both swayed with themusic..

swaron were lost in eachother's eyes...

flash back over...

"it feels too good to be in arms of swayum..nahh!! 'my swayu"...

"it feels too good to hold her in my arms.."

sharon smiled unknowingly sitting on her bed ..where as swayam too smiled lying on his bed ..both were thinking about eachother...the time they spent together..

any suggestions n criticism is invited...feel free to say anything..

love

crazysky

(chetna)