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Posted: 13 years ago
Well the update,was really awesome. Loved,it to the core. I was bit busy for past few days so I couldn't comment regularly. Don't stop ongoing me. Love you guys a lot
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hii.. I read u'r ff ishq jhagra manzil..frm thread 2..just luv it alot..u'r an awesum writer..i want to read it frm d frst start.. Can u give me d link..plz..dying to read it frm start,plz..rqusting u..
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chetna please update next part
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Originally posted by: Asha_ArSha

loved the update

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waiting for ur update...
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Amazing updte...luved it..
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till 7 pm (indian time)
sorry 4 late update hell busy...

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Edited by koko_chetna - 13 years ago
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chapter-19


recap: newspaper carrying news about kriyansh..swaron n kriyansh thinking about eachother


swayam , sharon , kriya & rey were still thinking about eachother..at different place..but about eachother..

swaron flashback:

shivam & sharon were dancing with eachother..her hands were on his shoulders..while shivam's hands were on her waist..

she didnt liked it being so close to him..swayam was watching all this but suddenly shivam pulled sharon more closer to him..he was getting extra close to her..sharon was feeling disgusting but faked small smile on her lips..

swayam could read the feeling behind her fake smile.. before shivam could get more close to her..swayam made his ways towards them..he tapped on shivam's shoulder from back..

" may i have the pleasure to dance with the lady??" swayam asked in his gentleman voice

before shivam could say anything sharon heavenly chirped in between

" offcourse swayam.. shivam is such a good hearted person ..he wouldnt mind it..right shivam??" Sharon asked in her most sugar coated voice

shivam was perplexed ..on one hand he wasnt willing to leave sharon on the other hand he didnt want to spoil his so called good impression in front of sharon..he unwillingly agreed..

" offcourse not swayam..u may have the lady.." shivam said sweetly

" "u can have the lady" toh aise keh raha hai jaise iske baap ka maal ho.." swayam thought

shivam smiled & left the dance floor..

sharon took a sigh of relief on seeing shivam leaving.. swayam extended his hand towards her for dance which she gladly accepted..swayam pulled her towards him & gripped her waist possessively..sharon felt somewhat odd but she could feel the warmth in his embrace..

soon light was dimed & couple song was played..sharon placed her hand on his chest & they swayed with the music..

" sharon are u all right??" swayam asked in concern

" hmm..thank u.." Sharon said

swayam smiled & said " its ok.."

" sharon usne tumhe hurt toh nahi kiya??" swayam asked looking into her eyes

sharon just noded in no..

" waise tumhe kya hua .. i mean tum itne protective..??" Sharon asked hiding her smile

" woh nothing..kria told to take care of u thats why.." swayam said

" so tum kria ke kehne par yaha aaye..??" Sharon teased

" nahi woh rey ne.." swayan voiced faltered

" achha..but.." Sharon said

" sharon will u stop interogating me .." swayam rolled his eyes

" kya hua swayu ??" Sharon teased

" sharon i dont like it.." swayam stated

" but i like it.." Sharon said

" sharon.."

" swayu.." Sharon said warmly

": uff..u'll never mend ur ways..haan??" swayam shook his head

with that he pulled sharon more closer & both swayed with the music..

swayam & sharon were lost in eachother's eyes..

flash back over..

"it feels too good to be in arms of swayum..nahh!! 'my swayu"..

"it feels too good to hold her in my arms.."

sharon smiled unknowingly sitting on her bed ..where as swayam too smiled lying on his bed ..both were thinking about eachother..the time they spent together..

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vicky was sitting beside neha on bed and stroking her hair.. whereas neha was sleeping peacefully beside him.. he kissed neha on her forehead..he was about to go but neha held his hand..

" neha tum soyi nahi??" Vicky asked

" so rahi thi bas abhi abhi jagi waise care to tell me whats bugging u??" neha lightly traced her fingers in his hairs

vicky smiled at her as his wife knows him very well..

" kuch nahi bas hamare baare mein soch raha tha.." Vicky said pulling neha more closer

" kya??"

" yahi ki itna sabkuch hamari life mein ho gaya ..like i didnt ever thought i'll become daddy so soon.." Vicky smiled

" vicky kya tum khush nahi ho..??"

he took her hand in his & intertwined them with his..

" no stupid..!! today i feel i am the happiest person in the world..this feeling is so special..i dont know what to do.. how to react..i wish just to be beside you forever.." vicky snuggled more

unknowingly few tears trickled down from his eyes..neha could say nothing .. she was overwelmed by seeing vicky's happiness..she just kissed his forehead..and a few tears escaped from her big eyes..

"thank you for coming in my life.." Vicky grinned

" thank u for completing me.."

they both smiled through their tears..neha wept his tears..n spoke

" u know what i am double happy.."

vicky swept her tears with his knuckles..n said

"mujhe pata hai kyu but neha i want to say something.."

" i know you are tensed about rey & kria na??" neha asked

" no i am just thinking about u.." Vicky said

" yahi na ki i should not expect much from them.."

vicky just noded in yes..

" i know vicky ..they are ready for marriage for the sake of property but believe me they will soon understand their feelings for eachother.." neha said thoughtfully

" i know..but i just want to tell that i guess rey and kria will decide to do contract marriage..i am just saying this to you in advance so that u'll not be shocked.. at their announcement.." vicky informed her

neha smiled at vicky..

" i know they will do that.." neha assured

" but how u??" Vicky asked

" vicky u r forgetting i am also a lawyer by profession..i can very well see the probability of future.." neha smirked

" yeah !! i know.. i know.. very sexy lawyer.."

neha lightly slapped him on his arms..to shutup..

" yeah who have a hot husband.."

vicky pecked her once more on her lips..and was about to withdraw himself back but neha pulled him closer and kissed him passionately.. vicky soon joined the kiss..

they both smiled..

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rey was in his balcony & kria in her room sitting on chair..

kriya & rey flashback

after party..

"rey plz mujhe yaha se le chalo.."

he held her wrist very softly but protectively and dragged her along with him passing away from reporters and crowd.. he led her towards his car,opened the passenger seat door for her..he himself sat in driver's seat and started the engine..he was uncertain about where to take kria..probably home was not the best option at this time..

"rey plz mujhe yaha se le chalo.."

meek words of kria were echoing in his ears .. he wasnt sure where to take kria at this hour of time.. but one thing was sure ,the tone in which kria said this line was neither a comand nor a demand but he could feel the vulnerability in her voice.. those words were merely wispered by her in meek tone..

rey was still driving at a medium speed on the calm night calm road ..the ac of the car was turned off .. instead he pulled down the window glass.. it was a moonlight night .. kria just closed her eyes and her head was on the side door taking support .. the wind was playing with her hair and the moonlight striking on her beautiful features of her face adding to her beauty..

her face was shimmering like a dew on a velvet lotus petal in moonlight..

rey was mesmerised to see a flawless beauty beside him.. he was lost in her face, but sudden horn of a car passing by, made him come back from earth..he abruptly stopped the car..causing a jerk due to which kria opened her eyes..

" kya hua??" kriya asked

" kuch nahi.." rey answered

he tried to start the engine but failed..he turned to kria & said " let me just look"

he stepped outside of the car..n opened the bonnet to see the defect..

kria too came out of the car..she leaned on the car's door & stood with folding hands across her chest thinking about something..

rey peeped towards her..n saw her lost in her thoughts..he thought she is sad because of the today's incident..

he tapped on one of her shoulder & said

" kria i'm really sorry ..i know aaj jo kuch bhi hua..i mean mujhe tumhe fiance announce nahi karna chahiye tha..i am really sorry.."

he was ranting his sorry mantras when kria placed her hands on his mouth..

" hey its ok & thank u.." kriya said gratefully

" mmmnnmnm.." rey again started

" haan??"

then she looked at her palm..she slowly removed it from his lips..

" thank u kis liye??" rey asked

" tumhari wajah se us abhi se meri engagement break ho gayi.. isliye.."

" toh arent u sad??" rey smiled

" no way..i am happy..infact super happy.." kriya said

" ummnn kria??" rey said

" what??"

" actually.. mujhse engagement ka matlab tum jaanti ho?? like kal ke newspaper mein..i mean.." rey tried to say

" reyansh its ok ..i know tum kya kehna chahte ho..yahi na ki kal ke news paper mein hamari engagement ki news chap jayegi & hame shaadi karni padegi.."

" yes.."

" toh tumhe shaadi nahi karni..??" kriya asked

rey was shocked at her straight forward question..

" i know whats your answer ..your answer is my answer too.. lets do contract marriage?? what say??" kriya asked looking here and there but at him

" i think you are right we can do contract marriage.. instead of bearing eachother whole life.." rey said

" seriously reyansh i also cant bear u .." kriya narrowed her eyes

" same here darling.." rey teased

" whatever.." kriya frowned

" one more thing"

" what??"

" car broke down we have to take lift.." rey stated

" ok.."

rey was constantly trying for lift but it was of no use..

" kya reyansh tumhe lift bhi maagna nahi ata??" kriya mocked

"tum toh jaise expert ho na lift maangne mein??" rey commented

" r u challenging me..??" kriya asked in challenging voice

" if u think so then yes i am.."

" oh really..??"

kria stood up..while rey leaned on car's door..

kria heard some cars sound she stood up & signaled for lift..but to her bad luck no one stopped their vehicle..

rey couldnt stop laughing..

kria glared at him..then one lorry came that side..

kria tried to stop them but it passed she literally shouted "OYE" & on the top she whistled ..the lorry instantly stopped & it came back in reverse gear..

rey was shocked to see this new kria.. he was shocked & surprised ,his jaws touched the ground..kria went to the lorry driver & said something..

she came near rey & closed his mouth..she dragged him by holding his hands & asked him to sit in the lorry..the lorry stopped near their house..n the lorry driver bid goodbye to kria..in return of which kria gave him a flying kiss..the lorry went ..kria was about to go inside the house but rey stopped her ..

" what was that??" rey asked

" what??"

" that flying kiss.." rey commented

" oh that i told him that u r my husband & u r suffering from cancer & if u die i'll marry him.." kriya simply shrugged

" WHAT??"

" shut up u r not gonna die so soon.." kriya patted his shoulder dramatically

" wait a min & that word "oye.." & u know whistling??"

kria just smiled at him & ruffled his hairs

flash back over..

rey was smiling in his balcony when kria came..

"reyansh.."

rey was still in his dream..kria came close to him & whistled in his ears..that shocked him..he was clearing his ears to sooth it & shouted

"you idiot gal..cant u just calmly shook me"

" i tried but god knows what were u thinking..that too when u dont have so much brain.." kriya said carelessly

" shutup & tell me why are u here??" rey shouted

" oh i just wanted to tell u that can we tell the truth to our family members.." kriya answered

" u mean about contract marriage..??"

" yes.." kriya nodded

" i was thinking the same as by seeing how sharon reacted that day i think we should tell them truth.." rey said

" hmm..so chale..??"

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at breakfast table..

all were present..

" martin why did u cook so much sweet sweet things in the breakfast..i want to eat something spicy.." neha frowned

all were looking at neha as if she exploded a bomb..

" why all of u r looking at me like that?" neha asked

" baby u only told me that u wanted something sweet in breakfast.." martin answered

" ya i told u but now i wanted to eat something spicy.."

just then kriya & rey entered..

" guys we have to make an announcement.." rey said

"what??" swayam asked

" ya..??" Sharon asked sipping her juice calmly

" guys we will marry but that will be contract marriage.."

kriya & rey expected a huge explossion but everyone got back to their work of serving themselves..

" r u all ok..??" rey asked unsured

" we all knew it would come..so chill & have breakfast.." vicky said in normal tone

" neha are you ok??"

" yup kria i knew it..vicky already told me this would come.. so i was already prepared for it & am glad u both shared it with us instead hiding it.." neha assured them

" ok fine guys lets have breakfast..OYE vicky pass me sandwitch.." rey said

sharon & neha were shocked & even all were shocked by hearing the word "OYE" from rey..

" partner, from where did u learnt that word??" neha asked

"oh it slipped from my mouth ..i heard it from kria..last night.." rey chuckled

hearing this neha & sharon instantly hugged kria..

sharon chirped " yay our old kria is back"

all were confused ..seeing this neha said "till now u've seen sweet kria now u'll taste salty kria.."




pheww!!!
its over...
precap: entry of new character...n havoc 4 kria...


ps: ok guys plz hit like button n give comment n plz tell me how was kria's character i tried to change a bit..i am not cvs na to bring everything sudden ,...i'll gradually change her character...
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Edited by chetna_yogini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

:Res:

::Unres::

Swaron dance was amazing..

Cheevam...no mods here...🤣🤣..

Disgusting fellow...poor Sharon had to dance with that creepy!!

Swayam helped her out and the way u explained their dance was awesome.

I always adores ViHa only in ur FF more dan even d show n other works of IF seriously.

Coming to Kriyaansh,

Rey held Kriya protectively by her wrist...I liked to read d line.

The words of Kriya was really good.

'Oye' and 'whistle' are my favourite part.

Contract marriage...interesting!!

Loved the sweet and simple Kriyaansh convo.

Neha two in one mix of tastes...Im loving it!!

Loved ur update as usual.

U rock chetu..



Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...

new character??? massi kyunki bas ab that person can only create havoc...

salty kria mujhe bhi dekhni hai...

update asap...

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