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shruti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

hey update next part
waiting to read
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MANALI MANKEEKAR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

CHAPTER 22

Within a hours Samrat , Shaurya get along well wit ETF Team .. Like bichade hue yaar mil gaye. Here Choti Maa felt proud on her Sameer whn she knows abt him all , hw he solve cases , hw he handle ppl , Choti Maa's eyes fill wit tears whn she know Sammer nearly escaped frm death in 3 cases. She hold his hand & ask him

Choti Maa : Beta ye sab karna jaruri hai ? Hamara matlab hai yaha tumhare apne log hai , apni ek duniya hai , aaj tumhare paas paison ki koi kami nahi , sab kuch hai yaha , To , to phir kyu apni jaan ko is tarah se tum zokhim (risk ) mai dal rahe ho? Ye sab chod do & vapis aa jaao yaha..

Sameer : (Takes a deep breath ) Choti Maa hum samaz sakte hai aap ki bhavna yonko ( feelings ) aur aadar bhi karte hai aapki baat ka. Lekin ye sab unka hai mera nahi . Aur mai aise logo ke saath nahi reh sakta jo hathyare hai , jinhe sirf apni shan , shukat , kul aur parmpara ke aage aur kuch nahi dikhta . Vaha mai jo bhi hue apne kaam se hue , kam se kam log mujhe ek hathyare ka beta to nahi kehete, apni behen ko khush rak sakta hue , use ek healthy atmosphere de paa raha hue , yahi mere liye kaafi hai.

Choti Maa : Vo to sab thik hai beta , par mere Sameer ka kya ? Mujhe mera vo hasta khilkhilta hue Sameer vapis chayie. Tumne sab ko khush rahkha par apni khushi ka kya beta , apni zindagi ka kya , kya isi tarah ghut ghut kar jyoyege tum ? Hum ye nahi dekh sakte , hum khud Bade Bhaisa (Rathod's father ) se baat karenge .

Sammer : Nahi aap unse koyi baat nahi karnegi is bare mai ...

Choti Maa : Par beta..

Sameer : (Cuts her in mid-way ) Apko hamari kasam .. (& goes frm thr)

Sameer Rathore just wips his tears & walk towards the His Mother's room bt stop suddenely , whn he founds Shaurya standing thr & open her room. Rathore goes near to him . Sharya already open d lock & goes inside room. As soon as Rathore enter her room he feel her frangnce still thr. Shurya just look @ room all furniture keep clean. All her belongings like her comb , jewellery box etc. all things placed thr opproriate place , like she still cme & use ths all . Rathore eyes fell wit tears. Shurya started to cry madly. Rathore goes near to him & placed his hand on Shurya's shoulder. Shuarys lift his his gaze & found Rathore in front of him. He hugs Rathore & sobbing.

Rathore : (Try to control himself bt finally burst into crying.)

Shurya : Bhai sa , agar aaj vo zinda hoti to baat kuch aur hi hti na , hamesha sab ka khyal rakhna , sab ke bare mai sochna , unhe sabki pasand napasand yaad thi , vo kabhi kabhi kisi ka janmdin nahi bhulti thi.

Rathore : Ha . vo hum sab ke liye sab kuch thi , ek badi behen se jayda vo maa thi hamari ( & Rathore look @ her big portait )

( Rathore's big Di ) (Suhani Rathod)

Rathore feels tht she still smiling on him. Rathore rembered tht incident whn Thy attened weding of his Di's best frnd.

Sameer : Di ham ghar kab jaaenge (Eating his fav Samosa)

Suhani : Kyu , kya hua ?

Sameer :Di mai bore ho gya hue , chaliye na, plz.

Suhani : Are abhi tak shadi ki rasme bhi nahi hoi , aur aise kaise jaaye?

Sameer : Di... (irritatdly call her)

Suhani : Acha baba ruko , mai dekhti hue ki vidhi shru hone mai kitna time aur hai ? Aur Chutki kaha hai?

Sameer : ( ponited his fingers towards ice-cream stall)

Suhani : Ha mai to bhul gyi thi , ki memsaab aur kaha jaa sakti hai (She murmed to herself & goes to ice-cream stall) (She found one little girl who is abt to 6 yrs old eating ice-cream happily , her mouth filled wit ice-cream) (Suhani smiled to herself & goes to near her. )

Riya : Di ... aap

Suhani : Ha mai (Started clean her face wit tissue)

Riya : Di , aap ko pta hai , inke yaha khane mai , Sitaphal ki Rabdi hai .

Suhani : (Wit fake anger) Tumhe kaise pta , abhi tak khana bhi nahi laga.

Riya : Vo maine Papa ka naam leker pucha to use uncle ne bata diya. (She said innocenctly)

Suhani : Sona aise nahi karte.. Chalo yaha se aur Sameer ke saath hi rehena kahi mat jana , mai abhi aati hue. ( She vanished in crowed)

Weding starts Suhani enjys weding , while Sameer & Riya gets boring . Suhani notices ths & take thm to food stall. bcoz food stall already started to serve. She filled filled two plated wit food.

Sameer : Di sirf do plate...

Suhani : Ha . ek mere liye aur ek tum dono ke liye..

Sameer : Nahi Di. mai iske saath nahi khaunga , ye sirf iski manpasand chhezon khati hai aur baki mere liye chod deti hai.

Suhani : (Smiles @ her little brother. ) Sameer aisa nahi kehete , vo tumhari choti behen hai na.

Sameer : Choti , Di ye 6 saal ki hai pure 6 saal ki..(Look angrily @ Riya who already started enjy her food.)

Suhani : (Ruffles his hair ) Acha baba tumhe jo bhi chayie tum mere plates se le lena ab khush..?

Sameer : Di plz mere baal mat bigadiye na..

Suhani : Acha baba thik hai , nahi haath lagaungi tumhare khbsurat baalon ko..

After food Sameer wondering in weding hall. Suddenely he heard big noise, He look back & found all ladies crying , including his Di.. Sameer dn't like tears in his Di's eyes & goes to her & starrted dragging to her.

Suhani : (Go wit him in one corner ) Kya hua Sameer , kuch chayie tha?

Sameer : Di , aapko kisine kuch kaha ?

Suhani :Nahi to ...

Riya : ( Holding her frock ) To aap ro kyu rahi hai? ( she ask innocently)

Suhani : (Smiles @ her siblings question) Isiliye ki hamari dost hame chod kar jaa rahi hai , apne ghar..

Sameer : Apne ghar ??? To ye kisa ghar tha.. ???

Suhani : Are mere buddhu ram , ye bhi uska hi ghar tha , par shadi ke baad ladki ka ghar badal jaata hai , us apne pati ke saath jana padta hai.

Riya : App to nahi jaayngi na hame chodkar?

Suhani : (Bents down lillte to match-up Riya's height ) Ha hame bhi jana hoga , ek din tum bhi chali jaayogi meri laado..

Sameer : (In deep thinking )

Suhani : Kya hua ? kya soch rahe ho ?

Sameer : Yahi ki hamari jane ke baad , Masa & Babasa khyal kon rakhga?

Suhani : (Look @ him questionalingly ) Kyu tum kaha jaa rahe ho ?

Sameer : Mai bhi to apne pati ke ghar chala jaaunga na , shadi ke baad ... ( He ans innocently )

Suhani : (laugh @ his brother ans )

Sameer & Riya : Di , aap has kyu rahe ho ?

Suhani : Vo isiliye ki tum apne pati ke ghar nahi jaaoge , apni patni ko ghar leker aaoge.. Vo yaha hamare saath hamare ghar mai rehengi.

Sameer : Acha ... To aap aur Riya kyu jaayegi? aap bhi mere saath rahiye na . mai hamshe aap ka saath dunga.. kisi na aap ko tung kiya na to mai uski haddi pasali ek kar dunga.. (he said aggresivley)

Suhani : Nahi Sameer. aisi baate nahi karte , hamne tumhe kitni baar kaha hai..

Sameer : Sry Di.

Riya : Sry Di.

Suhani : Are aapne kyu sry bola ?

Riya : Vo bhai sa ne bola na.. (Riya always copies her brother)

Suhani : Acha thik hai..

Suddenely one person comes thr & inform thm tht thy should go now , bcoz Maharani called several times for thm.

Suhani : ( Nodded to tht person ) Kaka ab jakar gadi nikaliye , hame aate hai.

Suhani : (Turn towards Sameer ) Sameer tum hamesha hamare saath rehoge na ?

Sameer : Ha Di.. I promise u.

Sameer Rathore thinks he cn't keep his promise, Everything is changed tod , if he not gng to meet his frnds tht day . He feels tht somone stare on thm & sees Samrat also standing thr wit teary eyes.

Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 12 years ago

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shruti

@shrutisweety

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

wow yaar
rathod is so emotional
i loved the part
send me pm when u wil update next part

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Samrat goes to thm & abt to speak thn suddenely thy hear someone's voice.. Thy all wips thr tears & locked room , goes direction towards d voice.

"Dhan na dhan na dan na

Dhan dhan na tannna taan naaa naaa naaa... "

(Thy see Riya standing on staris & sings a song )

(jhula baho kaa aaj bhee do naa mujhe - (2)bhaiya goud me uthao naa aaj mujhe (Wit tht she goes to Rathod)kad sey hu badee mann sey chhotee mai
aaj bhee man lo naa jid meree) - (2)
(She hold his shoulders frm behind & lookk @ his face frm right to left) jhula jhula...
jhula, jhula jhula

(too khushee toh karar toh bahar hai
dam sey tere hee toh ghar peh nikhar hai) - (2)
( Riya dancing thr & Shraurya sings to her )
mai shor sharaba dhum karungee, thumak thumak nachungee
(Riya dancing childshily )chanchal koyal ke jaise mai toh chahek chahek jaungee
( Riya gng here & there ) sare rang dhanak ke mai chura lungee - (2)
ho o tare palak ke tod laungee...
(She said to her three brothers)
chup chup ke meree hansee naa udana
(She stole d glance @ Arjun who smiling @ her ) jhula baho kaa aaj bhee, jhula jhula, jhula jhula...
jhula baho kaa aaj bhee do naa mujhe
bhaiya god me uthao naa aaj mujhe
kad sey hu badee mann sey chhotee mai
aaj bhee man lo naa jid meree
(She hold Samrat cheecks & pull thm playfully. ) jhula baho kaa aaj bhee do naa mujhe
(Riya sings again ) too khushee toh karar toh bahar hai
dam sey tere hee toh ghar peh nikhar hai...
(Samrat sings for her )
ek nahee, do nahee, tin hain bhai, tino jaise mere sipahee
( Riya goes around towards thm , & dancing circling around thm ) meree shararat meree tabahee bacha le khuda
lekin inka gussa aisa, gad gad gadje badal jaisa
( Riya waves her hand to show sky falling ) phir barsaye pyar bhee vaisa, o mere khuda
(Riya nw shows like raining ) motee hu mai inn aankho kaa
(Riya goes to Rathod & turn around to face him )
phul hu inke bag kaa
(Nw she goes to Shaurya & Samrat ) jhula baho kaa aaj bhee do naa mujhe
bhaiya goud me uthao naa aaj mujhe
kad sey hu badee mann sey chhotee mai
aaj bhee man lo naa jid meree
(Rathod hold her frm her Arms , while Shaurya hold her frm waist & Samrat hold her legs & thy give her zhula) jhula baho kaa aaj bhee do naa mujhe
bhaiya goud me uthao naa aaj mujhe
(too khushee toh karar toh bahar hai
dam sey tere hee toh ghar peh nikhar hai) - (2) (Nw all three proudly brothers sings )

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Sreeparna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

OMG di thank you so much for updating it,I was so waiting for it 😊
whats happen to Suhaani?? 😲 waiting eagerly..
the last song of riya & his brothers was so adorable 😳
waiting for Ariya & Meera-Rathod moment..great update 👍🏼 & thanks once again 😃

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

wonderful and thank for such a long update

loved the way they remembered the past

n geet as their elder sister😳

n finally loved the romance between meera and Rathore

and whats more, Meera has finally been accepted😊

Edited by haruhi26 - 12 years ago

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

CHAPTER 23

Meera standing @ door & looking Riya's dance. After dance all clapp for her. Meera comes to meet Choti Maa. She knows Choti Maa frm her childhood bcoz of Rathore & Riya. Meera comes to Chiti Maa & touches her feet for blessings.

Choti Maa : Are maaf kijyi ga beta haumne aap ko pehechana nahi.

Meera open her mouth & Riya hurridly out Choti Maa ye Meri " Maauu' matlab Meera hai..

Choti Maa : Are Meera Beta kitni badi ho gyi ho tum ? Bahut khubsurat lag rahi ho.

Meera : Dhanyawad ..

Samrat : Hey Mauuu , tum abhi tak aisi ho?

Meera :Matlab kya hai tumhara ?

Samrat : Mujhe to laga tha ki ab tak tumhari shadi ho gyi hogi , aur tumhe 4-5 bachhe hoge , jinki naak bhi tumhari tarah beheti hogi.

Meera : Samrat , chup karo tum , mujhe baccho ki itni jaldi nahi hai...

Samrat : Kyu kya buddhe hone ke baad shadi ka irrada hai ?

Riya : Agar itni hi jaldi hai to tum khud kyu nahi kar lete shadi???

Samrat : Haye , mujhe to kitni jaldi hai , par mere ye dono bhai hai na , jab tak vo ghodi nahi chedenge & mere is Riya ki shadi nahi hogi , tab tak meri shadi kaise hogi ?

Riya & Meera: ( hit his arms ) : Chal badmash..

Nw its lunch time , everyone gather around table for lunch , expect Rathore.

Riya : Mai abhi bhai sa bula ke lati hue.

Meera : Nahi Riya tum ruko mai bulakar laati hue..

Riya : K.

Meera : (First goes to Shree's room thinking tht Rathore is wrking thr , bt found none. "He must be in his room "she thinks & goes to his room. She abt to enter room whn she remebered thr passinote love-making scene in front of her eyes. she stops thr , bt close her eyes & stpe in his room.

Rathore standing near d window & looking somthing .

Meera : Ahamm ( just cleard her throught so , he knew tht she is here)

Rathore : (Look back ) Oh Meera , acha hua tum aa gyi.

Meera : (Worridly goes near him ) Kyu kya hua ? Tabiyat to theek hai na ?

Rathore : Nahi , bilkul theek nahi hue mai .. Pta nahi kyu ekdum khali khali lag raha hai is kamre mai , mere bed bhi ab mujhe acha nahi lagta. (Talking wit fake sadness )

Meera : (Dn't notice ths & cups his face )Kyu kya ho gaya hai aap ko ?

Rathore : Kyu tumhe nahi pata ?

Meera : Nahi to...

Rathore : (sits on bed wit one leg folding & pulled Meera towards him )

Meera : ( She landed on Rathore's lap nw. ) (Meera want to get up frm thr , bt Rathore hold her tightly ) Choda Sameer , plz

Rathore : Nahi ...

Meera : Plz..

Rathore : Pta nahi tumne kya jadu kar diya hai Meera , ki ab mera bed bhi mujhe yaha akle sone nahi deta. (& comes forward to her )

Meera : (Knows his intention & blushes )

Rathore : Are ab kyu sharma rahi ho , us din to bada mujhe...

Meera : ( keep her hand on Rathore's mouth & hugs him )

Rathore : (Break d hug & ask her ) Mai tumse naraj hue.

Meera : kyu , ab maine kya kiya ?

Rathore : Samart ko kya keh rahi thi tum ?

Meera : Kya ?

Rathore : Yahi ki tumhe bachhon ki itni jaldi nahi hai... Mujhe to baba jaldi bacche chaiye.

Meera : Kya ???

Rathore :Ha . aur vo bhi 4-5 , par ha mai nahi chahta ki hamare baccho ki naak tumhari tarah hamesha beheti rahe... (smiles naughtly )

Meera : Jaao ... (Hits him on his chest )

Here on table all waiting for thm . Choti Maa goes to look for thm , she goes near to Sameer's room & found somone talking thr , so , she wait thr . bt after 5 mins noone cme outside , so she abt to knock door , bt she found door is half open, so she peep in. & shocked wht she saw. Sameer siting on bed & Meera sits on his lap & hugs him. Sameer smiles @ her & caressing her hair . Choti Maa goes frm thr some unknown fear develop into her.

After 10 mins Rathore & Meera cme for lunch..

Chotu : Sir kaha reh gaye the aap , kitni bhuk lagi hai mujhe...

Rathore : Ha chalo chalo ab khana khaalo..

After luch Meera Sitting on zhula in d hall , Rathore & his team goes back to wrk. Samrat goes to his room while Shaurya goes to meet his frnds.

Choti Maa : Meera , jara hamare kamre mai aana ..

Meera : ( nodded her head & goes to her room )

Choti Maa : Darvaja band kar lo..

Meera : ( close d door behind her)

Choti Maa : Tumhare aur Samer ke beech mai ye sab kab se chal raha hai ? (she ask her directly)

Meera : (scared ) Aap kya bol ...

Choti Maa : (Cut her ) Tum bahut ach se samaz rahi ho.. Dekho Meera vo tumhara dost hai , dosti tak to theek hai , par tumhe use dur rehena hoga.. Tum janati ho jab ye baat khulegi tab kya hoga , jab Bade Bhai sa aur tumhare Babuji ko pata chelega tab kya hoga?

Meera : (Eyes filled wit tears ) Choti Maa .. hame ye nahi kar sakte...

Choti Maa : (Goes to her & hold her arms ) Ye tumhe karna hoga ... Tumhe kamzor nahi bana hai ... Mai nahi chahti ki Mere bete ki zindagi barbaad ho jaaye , Mai Suhani ko kho chuki hue par ab Sameer aur Riya ko nahi khona chahti.

Meera : ( Crying badly ) nahi Choti Maa itni badi saza mat dijye hame , hame nahi jee paaynge unke bina ,. plz hum unhe nahi kho sakte..

Choti Maa : ( wipe her tears ) Mai samaz sakti hue Meera , par sab kli bhale isi mai hai ki tum use dur raho , uski acchahi ke liye.

Meera : Choti Maa agar hum unke saath nahi honge na , to vo tut jaaynge , bikhar jaaynge , hum jaante hai unhe.. itne saalo ke baad paaya hai humne unhe , ab kaise chod de? Aur khas kar ki jab ab vo sirf hamare hai aur hum unke to unse dur jane ka matlab hi nahi hai.

Choti Maa : Kya ??? Sirf tumhare matlab ??? Kahi tum dono ne kuch ulta seedha to ???? (Look @ Meera worridly )

Meera :

Choti Maa : Ham kuch puch rahe hai , chup mat raho , javab do ... tum dono ke beech kuch..

Meera : (Noded )

Choti Maa : ( leave Meera & touches her forehead shockingly) (She now sees thr future clearly & scared , she wipe her tears. ) Meera

Meera : Ji

Choti Maa : vada karo humse ki tum Samar ko hamesha khush rakhogi

Meera : (look @ her astonishdly ) aap..

Choti Maa : Ha hum tum dono ke saath hai , agar hamara beta tumhare saath khush hai to thik hai.

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: KiSha13
OMG di thank you so much for updating it,I was so waiting for it 😊
whats happen to Suhaani?? 😲 waiting eagerly..
the last song of riya & his brothers was so adorable 😳
waiting for Ariya & Meera-Rathod moment..great update 👍🏼 & thanks once again 😃

Hey thx dear 😊

plz dn't thx me.. 😊

Suhani stroy will revelead shrtly...

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

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Posted: 12 years ago

#199

wow yaar this is amazing...finally rathore and meera are going to be one soon,,,,,,,,,

i'm so happy

love to read the romance of rathore ...so naughty...

hey i feel so sad after reading the sis of rathore ...

this update is just fabulous...i love the song which riya sing

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
wow yaar this is amazing...finally rathore and meera are going to be one soon,,,,,,,,,

i'm so happy

love to read the romance of rathore ...so naughty...

hey i feel so sad after reading the sis of rathore ...

this update is just fabulous...i love the song which riya sing