*Sooraj's Pledges to Sandhya*

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.Ami.

@.Ami.

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

Along with all of you my all hope is on Sooraj that he'll help Sandhya to overcome from this trauma. I decided to pen down few lines on behalf of Sooraj to Sandhya. Lemme know how effective they're:-

~ My Lovely wife -- Sandhya ~

With each little heartbeat I do hear
I'll fall in love with you my dear
And each day I hold you in my arms
Our precious bond shall arise like a charm.

And each tear drop that you shall weep
my soul shall cry with you until you sleep
and as you grow and learn to speak
I'll lead you, with every step you keep.

I'll nurture your tender soul with my care
and feed your hungry body with love I bare
When you go out to battle the mighty world
I'll be there every twist, turn, or twirl.

I'll let you stand on your own, always nearby
I always be your loving soul-mate, till the day I die.

~ Underneath the Shadow of my Wings ~

I'll hold you underneath
the shadow of my wings
Keep you securely tucked
no matter what life bestows

And through each season
of your precious life
I'll assist you to balance
any torment or discord

I'll turn your mortal pain
to laughter and joy
I'll turn your mortal grief
into comfort and rejoice

I'll turn your anguish & sorrow
into hope for a new tomorrow

I'll hold you underneath
the shadow of my wings
Keep you securely tucked
no matter what life bestows.

*See how peacefully baby Sandy is sleeping in Sooraj's divine arms...*

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UMDU

@UMDU

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

Such beautifully written lines. Wish and pray that Suraj says these words to Sandhya on Monday and makes her sleep in his arms giving her all the comfort that she needs. I who has been waiting for centuries for DBC to happen do not want to see it happening on Monday. This is not the time or place for it. They must be shown to draw immense support and understanding from each other in this environment of pain which has led to the shattering of dreams. Your poem really brings out the depth of Suraj's love for his beloved. A day does not pass by when the level of literary talent in the forum does not cease to amaze me. God bless you Ami and may you get all the happiness in the world.Your poem has touched my heart.

Edited by UMDU - 13 years ago

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LovePraja

@LovePraja

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

U've expressed d emotions so beautifully Ami. These words r like music 2 our ears n specially Sandy. Hope Sooraj conveys all dat u've written, coz dat's exactly wat he feels 4 his wife.

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preeti73

@preeti73

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

Amazing Ami...

One of your best poems uptil now...👏👏👏

Not enough words to appreciate your poem...

How beautifully you have portrayed the heartfelt emotions of Suraj for his beloved...I hope they show that blissful and soulful heart to heart talk Surya should have...

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Fatima

@Fatima_Q

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

Very nice Emy...👍🏼...Love your shayirana andaaz...

I especially liked this part...

And each tear drop that you shall weep
my soul shall cry with you until you sleep

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ASHERI

@ASHERI

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

It's sooo nice👍🏼

I also wanna suraj to tell these words to sandy on monday...And wanna see sandy sleeps in his arms just like in ur pic...

Here my fav part...sounds like really suraj's telling it...

And each tear drop that you shall weep
my soul shall cry with you until you sleep

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Saibal Routh

@SAIBALROUTH

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

Wow, beautiful poem Ami di. Such soul touching lines, well-composed diction.

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Deebz

@Deebz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

You are making me cry again Ami. May everyone find such love in his/her life!🤗

Amazing!!

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seelaks

@seelaks

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ami_dabh

And each tear drop that you shall weep
my soul shall cry with you until you sleep
and as you grow and learn to speak
I'll lead you, with every step you keep

*See how peacefully baby Sandy is sleeping in Sooraj's divine arms...*

I liked the poem 👏 very much Ami especially the above lines where Sooraj proves to be a true soul-mate.

Aww !!! I love the picture too ❤️