SwaRon OS: Love doesnt have any counts (note-PG14) - Page 5

Originally posted by: tanukaswaron

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Awesome os pratik !!

beautifully written 👏 Oh monster thank you so very much you know your comment always means alot to me

the whole story was really nice , sharon the arrogant diva with her own reasons as to why she is like this and swayam loving the real sharon . Comeout from the dreamland story abhi baki hai boss

u described sharons emotions very well . Thanks for saying this because i felt i was not upto mark with expressions this time.

swayams and sharon confessions were written amazingly . 😊 Thank you 😊

the tittle of the os was so apt for the story . love can always give u a second chance .

loved it.❤️ Ya in stories love can always give you a second chance you know but in real life one would have to think heheheheh 😆😆

keep coming up with such fantastic os's ... I will try to as you know i am lazy bones and writing is not my comfort zone

thanks for the PM... Anytime Monster teri comment muje padni hoti hi hai toh PM kaise nahi bhejta😆😆😛😛😛

"SwaRon OS: Love doesn't have any counts" umm..a new SwaRon OS! yippee! so is it a OS based on the current situation or a OS which has it base borrowed from some historic SwaRon scene or is it something else? would it be a Humorous OS/ a depressing OS/a romantic OS? what could probably be the concept? these are some of the questions which i had in my mind when i read the title of your OS. i was intrigued to find out the content. as i read the whole OS i had these answers with me:

Originally posted by: Karen_sharon

Heya Sweet Pratik...

How r u??? Talking about d os i think it was really fantastic..luv d way u write ur works...plz update ur Swaron FF soon i am waiting eagerly for d nxt part!

Thanks for such a beautiful OS on SwaRon!:-)

Karen

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

Pratik! 🤗 Nivi 😳

I must say, you are a marvel yourself. 😎 oh thats really a big compliment for me dear

While reading this OS, I just got glued to my laptop screen 🤓 and irritated when somebody disturbed me. 😡 hahahah dont worry that somebody would have some work dear and wow i really didn't know my writing can hold you or matter of fact body...thanks really 😊

This is amazing! Oh wow 😊

I really liked the way you started out with explaining all the minute details in Swayam's room and the way he slept. 😆 Oh thanks that was the idea because the story had to move to a serious note so some light moments to begin with

And the names Rey addressed Swayam with were simply hilarious! 🤣 i am glad i was able to get that smile on your face Nivi

A very light-headed yet powerful conversation they shared! ya thats ReYam for you they are unique unke serious topic ke convo bhi kisi ko bhi hasa sakte hai

The way you conveyed their love lives and especially the "Munjarilal Babu" was amazing and highly commendable. 👏 Ohh thanks you liked that Mungerilal part...actually mungerilal is an iconic TV character who was famous for dreaming hahah 😆😆

I was literally laughing out hard when Swayam got to know that making Sharon and Swayam practice / rehearse together was Kria and Rey's joint plan. 😆😆 hahaha bechare ki band baja ne ki puri planning already kar chuke the kriya aur Rey

Then comes the Dance Rehersal..

Well, I must say, you portrayed Sharon's feelings and emotions flawlessly when she went back to her old days remembering her old self and compared Swayam's touch with that of Arav... because swayam had this for pure feeling for sharon which only Aarav had for her previously so that love was passing on to sharon with swayam's touch

Obviously Arav and Sharon shared true love, otherwise who will change herself? Agree with that without real attachment nobody changes for any one

And, when the intense eye-lock came, I fell in the Swayam-Sharon dreamland! Are abhi to itni badi story baki hai dream se bahar aaja Nivi😆😆

But that slimy Raj came in between, I felt like slapping him million times for ruining with romantic moment and make his face go blue-black! 😡 - Oh bap re ye to mini volcano yaha bhi hai ek God please save Raj🥱🥱

But then I guess it was needed, thankfully some sense knocked into Sharon's head and she broke-off with that loon. Are Sharon ko bhi bahana chaiye tha uss ko Ass kick karne ka😊

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Then came the heart-to-heart conversation between Swayam and Sharon, though mostly Swayam spoke and Sharon pondered! Ya because swayam was speaking what was going on in her heart to kya karti bechari diva😳😳

The moment Swayam had said I had loved you from the day I saw you and collected all the pictures of yours which came in magazines , firstly I was expecting a blow from Sharon. 🤔 Agar koi aur situation hoti to sharon would have blowed swayam but ye to majnu us ke heart ko already touch kar liya tha so she knew vo sahi me pyar karta hai usse

Thankfully that did not happen! Are apne OS mein violance dalna mana hai ye Rajshri walo se wada kiya tha maine hahahahah 😆😆

And when Sharon went back home and ruminated, self-talked, I was simply mesmerized. 😲 Ya because she needed sometime for self realisation

I loved the way you penned down all the emotions she faced and especially when she self-confessed that she loved Swayam deeply! Ya trust me that was the most difficult part for me to write

And the way she got restless and decided to call Swayam was so Sharon-like.! 😆 hahaha thats our diva usko jo chaiye vo usi waqt chaiye hota hai

The confession was the cutest part of the ONE Shot! Thank you i am really happy you liked it

And the way Sharon interrupted Swayam mid way his sentence of death and said We will die together ! thats what true love is, and to die is the most haterd truth of human life...

Aw. Is all I could think! Aww i am thinking same after reading this mind blowing or i should say mind blasting comment nivi

So, at the end of the bible, I would say Pratik, you are an awesome writer which I did not know about and have beautiful writing skills. 👏 Nivi please yar chane ke ped pe mat chada mai to ainvai wala writer hu yar...

Keep writing whenever you find time, because you are a Gem!! I will try to write more for all of you please bear with it😛😛

And one thing that hurt me the most was, why did you not PM me about this wonderful creation of yours? 🥺 Are i made very few PMs only to those who i was sure will read...and the reason for less PMs is every body is upset and I really dont wont to force anybody read my work, Is bar ke liye forgive karde next time you will be in PM list...😳

Anyhow! Amazing Work Dear! Thanks😳

Keep it Up! As you say I I Captain

I must say, a very beautiful Thank You cum Good Bye One Shot for Shantanu and Sneha! 😉 ok i am really gald to read this, because this was just meant for this cause😊😊

Keep Writing and Do PM me the next time! :D I will try writing but are you ready to bear my stupidly idiotic updates... and ya will surely PM you now

-Nivriti

Originally posted by: Rutu

Firstly loved the Reyam bond, partners in crime Aha!! Loved the start, Swayam dreaming about Sharon, well not surprising and did Rey call Sharon volcano😆 and Swayam calling Sharon's BF gonchu🤣 I liked it when Rey was giving gaali to Swayam every now and then! And aww Sharon got impressed with Swayam in their first interaction session only now thats the charm of our Majnu bwoy😳 and how empty she felt when she had to leave Swayam while dancing because of that 🤬 Raj!!

Swayam loved her long back,but never confessed.Sharon's pain was beautifully described and how well could Swayam decode Sharon! And the title goes well with the story. So to put up it was just awesome👍🏼

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

Awesome os
The storyline of this os is very beautifull n it touched my heart
Love is the feeling which have no bounds it happen suddenly n change our lives.It can destory a person n make someone lives their life happily
U show both sides of love
After aarav's death sharon made a shell around her n on other side swayam loved her from 6yrs without meeting her...
Both their feelings were described amazingly...:)
loved it