Sandhya Se Naraaz SS- part 3 page 5-updated 11 OCt - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Just read your two parts in one take..

It's beautifully written.. I liked second part the most.❤️.

Woh Woh...😆

Waiting for 3rd Part....

Regarding your Hindi, well it's quite good. Not that horrible the way you've mentioned it..👍🏼..Just keep on learning Hindi.. You'll get grip over it pretty soon! You seems to be quick learner.


Edited by ami_dabh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW!!! So romantic Razia... ❤️ Suraj ji ka narazgi, Sandhya ka manana... Feeling like the old DABH!!! Please continue soon... And ur hindi is not that bad... So dont worry... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely update Razia, thanks for this part. I am glad to see SurYa all romantic and understanding each other beautifully, now you have made me restless, eagerly waiting for your next update. 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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2nd part also good...liked it...

continue next part whenu have time...v r here to read...
and i dnt have any rights to say abt ur hindi...bcz myself is so pooor in hindi...
but i tell u ur hindi is sood...
one day i will write in hindi and kill everybody in dabh forum...with my hindi...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Keep updating 😛
Waiting for Next Part ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update👍🏼 Suraj ji ka narazgi is soo romantic...please continue😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice SS...
waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you all SO much for such hearty comments.. I will ,well no i am writing the third part now, and yes i know i said i would have done it since 2 weekends ago,but college has started back for me and i am soo soo busy..I got free-time today...and i am so upset with this Meenu issue so i decide let my imaginations go written.>>>third part up next..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sandhya's hair is now touching Suraj,she has become all ''shy-shy" and trying to avoid the situation looking all over. With this Suraj decides to take an advantage. He gets his left hand and places it slowly around Sandhya's back waist,now leaving Sandhya startled.

Suraj silently giggles and now locks Sandhya on him. Sandhya is so surprised and about to stutter looks around and shouts ''Bhabo!!". Suraj now begins to laugh so hard while Sandhya is trying to look out her self.

Naah Sandhya ji,itna aasan nahi hai'Galathi ke hai toh sazaa milagi hi" ' says Suraj.

Sandhya goes on Leken Suraj ji,aise kesey hosaktha hai,yeh kaise saza hai.

Thik hai Sandhya ji,toh yeh saza nahi hai,toh phir chunlo,mere liye neeche jake gajar ka halwa bana lao yah phi raise hi letha rahi yeh.

Suraj ji, - Sandhya shyly shys away about to place her head on Suraj's shoulder when she screams out " Ahhh chuwwa(rat) " and she starts kicking about too, but that Suraj also startles up and stands upright on the bed.

Sandhya takes her chance and runs away from Suraj,and Suraj catches her cheat. Sandhya ji yeh sab kya hai!

Suraj ji,pyaar mien sab kuch jayez hai! [J].

She runs away and Suraj runs behind her. They both bump into each other and Sandhya hugs Suraj really tightly and says Suraj ji,mujhe maaf kardijiye,meine aapse bohot kuch chupa ya hai,jo mien chupana nhi chaati thi,liken haalat ne mujhe majboor kardiya,please mujh'"

Sandhya aap aabhi bhi yeh baat par atki huwi hai,ab jo hua jaane deejiye,Haan chupaya tha,leken meri kasam aagye,beenati hai aapse kuch chupana mat,and they hug tighter.

Sandhya is left in thoughts,she is thinking,kya mein Papa ka sapna ke bare mien bata dena chahiye,yaah phir nahi?? Kya karoo??

Sandhya,Sandhya!! Suraj is now shaking Sandhya,kya hua,kahan kho gayi hai Sandhya'

Sandhya- Aap ke baahon mein Suraj ji!! Suraj smiles and the hug tighter and Suraj places a kiss on Sandhya's forehead.



Tell me how you all like it!! And so sorry for mistakes and such a delay. I will put the last part some time,i will see, but i wanted Sandhya to tell Suraj about her dream herself,so i will put that in my SS,soon.. TC

Raz

Edited by _naksh_raz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ami_dabh

Just read your two parts in one take..

It's beautifully written.. I liked second part the most.❤️.

Woh Woh...😆

Waiting for 3rd Part....

Regarding your Hindi, well it's quite good. Not that horrible the way you've mentioned it..👍🏼..Just keep on learning Hindi.. You'll get grip over it pretty soon! You seems to be quick learner.


Aww Ami(still dnt know ur name) Thank You soo very much...Hope you like this 1 part i just posted also

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