Sandhya Se Naraaz SS- part 3 page 5-updated 11 OCt

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello Dabhians!!How are you all today?I can't stop to think of what will happen next,its so scary!

Anyways,its me Razia again,not active as usual because classes have resume and I don't even have time for myself!! Anyways since we didn't have no,none,not-at-all scenes with SurYa today..or this week'I have decided to do a ''chota saa' Short Story. Hope You all like it.

So enough of my bhakbhak'Lets get to the point now.😃

The scene starts from (lets imagine please) after the whole issue is solved and SurYa are home in the room. Suraj is clearly upset so is Sandhya.

Though Suraj is devastated and also feels ashamed and hurt because he thought as innocent as he is, He gave a job to Rajkumar. He cannot believe that the fact of his own mistake due to trust,today he could have been responsible for many many deaths, and who was the target Chotu and Chaturi!! Anyways,he isn't feeling as bad as he did because at the end he did help his wife in catching Rajkumar when police took CHaturi and Chotu on their hands. Even if he had to run very very far from the mandir. Anyways as tired as he was,he was more upset with the fact that his wife knew this all and didn't think him worthy enough to share her feelings and worry with him. He thought that now that both of them loves each other nothing will be hidden and that the wedding vows would have been of some importance. He looked at Sandhya who was across the room from the bed where he was sitting. She also looked lost as she looked through the window. For a moment he lost his anger and was thinking what she would be thinking of right now.

On the other hand, Sandhya was in her own world. A million thoughts was running through her mind. She was happy that the culprit was found,she was happy that her husband got Rajkumar. She on the other hand she was upset,very upset. She felt bad that for Suraj more than anyone else. Who had so much trust in Rajkumar and who had done this to him. Forget that all she was even more upset that she hid all this from Suraj. She didn't think he would've been upset. But as she entered the room a half hour ago he seemed like he was paying no attention to her. She looked across to see Suraj quickly looking off. She smiled to herself thinking,''I got you''.

She went to the bed and said,''Suraj ji,aap aagaye?Acha hua,mujhe aapke bina sohnahi paati,aadatsi hogayi nah.''

Suraj thugged,he turn his side away from Sandhya and began to put his blanket on him. Sandhya looked a bit upset but didn't stop herself. She looked at Suraj and placed her hand on his shoulder,Suraj was pretty surprised but still kept his self in control.

She continued.'' Suraj ji,aap mujhse naraaz hai?Sorry'' putting her hands on her ears. ''Mujhe pata hai ke aap''' Sandhya ji,aap sojhaye,raat bohot hogayi hai,aur ..sojhaye Sandhya ji,moving Sandhya's hand away.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Index:
Part 1 - page 1..
Part 2 - Page 3

Edited by _naksh_raz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice SS and you have nicely depicted Suraj and Sandhya's feelings. 👍🏼SurYa pain in show and here as well 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful SS Razia. Waiting for next part.! U've captured their feelings into your words.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice fan fic ...waiting for the next part
u really spoke the mind of suraj
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice ss.pain here also.plz write happy part in next.continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice ss👍🏼 waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Picture Perfect , the Right Emotion of SurYa which we used to see in show was as same Described in ur Writing , SS Made me to Assume like all it has Happened in show .
Ur Post has got a Very Sensul Emotion of SurYa.
Keep Writing , Looking forward for Next SS Continuation
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice SS, please continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome FF
Waiting for next part
Do post it soon

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