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Posted: 13 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: roberoi

Thanks again for lighting up the day...


You are superfast updater and me a superfast reader 😆



I really want this should happen in serial too...

I hope we will see Smart Shiv & Anandi. 👏


B V CV 's have be reasonable & realistic. If they are showing their leading lady is Sarpanch & male lead is Collector they are bound to be cautions. They should n't have showed them stupid.

Lets pray...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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finally jagya gets caught
great update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: blushing



I really want this should happen in serial too...

I hope we will see Smart Shiv & Anandi. 👏


B V CV 's have be reasonable & realistic. If they are showing their leading lady is Sarpanch & male lead is Collector they are bound to be cautions. They should n't have showed them stupid.

Lets pray...

Aditi... awesome update... Yes. i would love to see the same happpening in the Show.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update dear. Loved it.😊 I so want this to happen in d actual show. Ab is ghanteka drama kuch jyada hi badh raha hai🤢 I love to see him suffer 😡. & your OS just made my wish fulfilled ha ha, its simply superb👍🏼.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 5


At CH Shiv is getting ready for Dinner. He is eagerly waiting for his lady love. Door bell rings he ran towards door. Anandi is with makhan. Makhan puts all bags in kitchen & left.

Aap sara samaan lee aaye. Lekin main aapse kaha tha na ki Bheem Singh se kahyehga. Aap khud kyun leke aaye.

Bheem Singh jee ko kuch kaam tha. Isi liye main Makhan kaka ke sath lee aaye. Chalyeh.

Haan pehale aap.

They enter in kitchen. Anandi took out all stuff from bags. Shiv keeps staring at her lovingly. Anandi ask him to give her some bowl. Shiv still niharoying her did nt reply her. Anandi looked at him & touched his hand.

Suniyeh khahan kho gaye aap.

Jee kahin nahi. Kuch kaha aapne.

Jaane dejeyeh. Lagat hain khaana bananeke naamse aap chinta mein khoo gaye.

Nahi nahi isi koi baat nahi hain. Main kyun chinta karne laga aap hain na mere sath.

Anandi looked at him & smiled.

Both started cooking. Anandi tied apron around his waist.

Ab kya karna hain.

Aap yeh sabzi kat payenge ?

Haan bilkul.

Aaram se katiyehga. Jald bazi mat kejeyeh ungali kat jayegi.

Haan. U don't worry sweetheart.

Anandi was surprised to hear that word from him. Shiv bites his tongue. He started cutting veggie.

Anandi was preparing daal. Shiv cut all veggie. Anandi was pleased to see result & Gave him thumps up. Shiv was happy to be appreciated by her. He helped her in tadka daal. Both are doing things together. Anandi is showing him how to make sabzi. He carefully listened to her. They are done with daal & sabzi. They gave each other hi fi. Now its roti's turn.

Aap kya khaana pasand karenge Anandi asked him. Mera matlab hain roti, puri phulaka ya rotla.

Well

Phulka thik rahega.

Thik hain. Main aata bund lete hunn.

Main madat karun.

Nahi aap nahi kar payenge. Thoda mushkil hoga.

Kyun aap hain na. Chodyeh main karta hunn.

Lekin aap kaise'.

Aap batayeh na. Main waisa hee karunga.

Anandi instruct him while doing her work. He is trying to follow her order. But batter becomes flaaffy. 🤣Anandi started laughing hard.🤣 Shiv looked dam confused😕.

Main aapse dheere dheera paani daal ne ke liye kaha tha. Aapne kitana saara paani daal diya.

Arre aapne kaha waise mainne kiya.

Ek min she said.

Anandi took it from him & started pouring aata on it. Shiv is standing right behind her. Shiv puts his arm around her. Now both are doing it together. (Imagine famous pot making scene of Hollywood movie Ghost. Of course that was super sexy sensuous. Here I need to control my mind since its Indian soap). Suddenly her paalu drop from head. Anandi was busy in aata. Shiv was feeling restless. He puts his head near to her shoulder. Anandi felt his touch near her shoulder. She stopped & stands still. Shiv couldn't control his emotions he move close to her neck & planted a kiss. Anandi closed her eyes. But she didn't move Shiv puts his hand around her waist like back hug. They lost with each other for some time. Shiv gets back his senses & he felt bit guilty. He loses his hug & walk back. Anandi turns back. Shiv couldn't make eye contact to her. He looked down. Anandi was confused.

Shiv gathers his courage said to her Mujhe maaf kar dejeyega Anandi jee. Mujhe isa nahi karna chaiyeh tha. I am so sorry. And he left from there.

Leaving Anandi with confuse /surprise in kitchen. She walked towards bedroom. Shiv was sitting on bed his head was down. Anandi sits beside him. She holds his hand.

Collector sahab aap iss tarah mujhese maafi kyun maangi.

Jee mujhe isa nahi karna chaiyeh tha. Anandi puts her hand on his lips.

Bass aage kuch may kehyega. Agar mujhe iss sabse itraaz hota toh main aapko bata dete. Kya aapko lagata hain ki main aapse naaraz hunn.

Lekin phir bhi'.mujhe aapne aap pe control.

Aap mere hone wale pati hain. Iss sach ko main aapna chuki hunn. Aapka mere kareeb aana mujhe aapke pyar ka ihsaas karva gaya.

Shiv looked at her with disbelieve.❤️ He turns towards her. Anandi had tears in her eyes.☺️ Both hugged each other passionately. 🤗

Edited by blushing - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26

Nice. good to read FF with smart Collector and Sarpanch.
Wish sometime this will happen in reel life!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Uff yeh mohabbat 😳 actually I was visualising all this and with your words it is really much easier to dream 👏 keep it up
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Posted: 13 years ago
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one of the best FFs i've read... keep it up!!!! *huuug* 👏 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Nice update👍🏼 Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
OMG...now this is really too good

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