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Posted: 12 years ago
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OO Rabba

Pyaar hai ya saja, aye mere dil bata
Tootha kyon nahi dard ka silsila

Koi na sune sisakti aahon ko
Koi na dhare tadapti baahon ko
Aadhi aadhi puri khwaishein
Tooti footi sab farmaaishein
Kahin shak hain kahin nafrat ki deewaar hai
Kahin jeet mein bhi shamil palpal haar hain
Ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
Dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
Ho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
Dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
Ho..O..O.. pyaar hai ya saja, aye mere dil bata
Tootha kyon nahi dard ka silsila

Ashram, Haridwaar?

She was doing her work unknown tat wat she was doing. She was listening to wat others were saying but nothing reached her heart. she was lost though active, lost in her won shell. Her heart not in her hand, her mind not in her hand, her soul not hers but the body was hers but now numb. Numb to feel anything but could feel the only one thing. She was so lost tat she did not hear the old lady calling her.

Old Lady: Geet.. beta?

Seeing no response the old lady neared her and kept a hand on her shoulders jerking Geet from her world while dropping the vessel from her hand making everyone to see her. Geet got scared and looked at everyone murmuring a soft sorry which was hardly audible. The old lady asked one of the woman to clean the place while she took Geet away. She could see Geet having a fear on her face from morning but could not understand wat it was. Many a times she asked Geet but she did not mention anything about her. the old lady took Geet away from the kitchen to a safe corner and made her to sit giving some water to drink.

Geet: Massi? m fine..

Massi: beta? I know tat you are fine.. but don't you feel tat you need rest.

Geet: Massi but there's so much work to be done.

Massi: Work.. I see?. But you know? you are not alone? being seven months pregnant you are not taking the care you need to take. You remember wat doctor said last time when you fainted.

Geet looked at Massi with tears in her eyes. Massi carefully wiped them and said.

Massi: Beta?. I don't know who you are and from where are you. I just want you to take care of yourself so tat the life inside you whom you love be safe. I have seen you crying all nights since you came here. I don't say tat don't think about your past but don't make it to affect your baby and risk this life inside you.

Geet: I know? but I need him? Massi.. I need him? I need him to know tat his ansh is inside me? I need him to love me like he did. But I cant have him near? I cant..

Massi: who is he Geet.. who is he who threw you away with this baby.. tell me his name Geet and I will make sure his comes begging to you.

Geet: I cant.. I cant.. never .. never..

Geet ran away crying holding her seventh month pregnant tummy. She was scared, scared of something which she learnt in the morning. Her heart was not with her nor her mind since the time she felt tat something is going to change today. She wanted to hide somewhere but she could not even go from here. She did not have any place to go, fearing for the life inside her she could not even thinking about running away?..

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The Khuranna?.. Raj and Naina Singh Khuranna were here at Haridwaar for fulfilling the wish of Savitri Devi Singh Khuranna. The wish to have the peace back in their life, the wish to have their happiness back in their life which has been away from them. Raj Singh Khuranna never ever believed in such things but today he had to come for seeking forgiveness for the sins which their son Maan Singh Khuranna has committed for the sins which he did by not stopping their son to cheat their DIL Geet Maan Singh Khuranna who was now all alone in this cruel world, to pray for her safety. Naina did not why she was having this strange feeling tat something good would happen here ever since she stepped inside this sacred place. She was getting restless by each passing second and for unknown reasons she would scan the area as if finding someone in the crowd. Raj had observed this strange behavior of his wife but knowing tat she would not answer he kept quite. They reached inside the temple well before the time when there was not much crowd and for a moment Naina felt she saw someone, someone very close to her. the moment she turned she saw a faint figure running away from the corners as if hiding herself. Naina did not know why and for wat but she too followed the figure while Raj was busy in his remorse but as soon as he found Nana missing he turned only to see tat she was running outside and ran behind. Raj called Naina and reached her before she could get lost.

Raj: Wat the hell was tat Naina?
Raj saw Naina looking at a particular place and upon not getting answers he once again shouted at her.

Raj: Naina??.

Naina: I saw her??. she is there?? she is here Raj?.. she is here??

Raj saw Naina pointing towards someone but when he saw no one was there but once again Naina said the same??

Naina: I saw her??. she is there?? she is here Raj?.. she is here??

Raj: there's no one Naina theres no one.

Naina: Nahiii?. I saw her? she is here Raj?.. My daughter.. My Geet?.. our Geet is here? she is here Raj?? I saw her running? she is here?..

Raj was shocked and looked at Naina and her eyes, her eyes had tat strange happiness which was missing since last six months. He knew tat this was not her dream or something but something beyond a truth.

Raj: Geeettt?..

Naina: she will go Raj?. She will run?.. hold her Raj?. Hold our Geet??

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zariya123 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update
yar why ur geet is always a victim of maan's rudeness
Edited by zariya123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: zariya123


lovely update
yar why ur geet is always a victim of maan's rudeness

is she dear
i reallly dont know
wait for it jhatka hain sab ke Iye...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Haayee!!!! Too painful.
Geet pregnant, but where's Maan????
Waiting for revealation of the dreadful past.
Plss continue soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start dear..intersting...
loved the update...
what maan did in the past???
and precap???what will be that shock!!!...
eagerly waiting for next part...
loved the writing dear..
please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
loved it...
heart wrenching though...
waiting for maan...
cont.soon...
amita5 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome start
did maan cheat on geet ?
how could maan leave her
precap what did geet see?
please update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
plz update the nxt part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
awesome a different os di
seems like something is there
which neither geet know nor maan's parents know about maan
as far as i analysed this there is something and may be due to that dadi got this attack
may be i m wrong but guess karne mein kya jata hai

continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
nice part
but i too feel maan has some problem which is unknown to geet and family
plz maan ko kuch mat karna,maneet ki mu dor karke dono ko pass le aana

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