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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 9

Geet was waiting for Maan outside the Doctor's cabin. She did not want Maan to be with her but her family forced her for tat and she had to agree. She was so lost in a couple who was soon going to be parents but still but the lady was not more than 5 months pregnant. Geet was just looking at the lovely couple. The way the husband was taking care of her small needs. The way he was holding her hand supporting her when she was sitting. The way he was talking and sharing his happiness of being a father was having a different affect on Geet. She was imagining her and Maan in their place when she was about 5 months pregnant. She had a smile seeing themselves enjoying the initial days of her pregnancy but soon was brought back by a tap on her shoulder. She looked and saw Maan calling her out but soon her eyes went to the couple and there they were no more. She once again turned to see Maan standing and than the reality stuck tat she never had those days in her life. She never felt tat happiness in her life when she always deserved them. She silently followed Maan into the Doctors cabin. The doctor asked them to go for an ultrasound just to be sure tat the baby was doing fine. Maan was excited as he would first time see their baby and was just talking and sharing his happiness unknown tat his Geet was far away from all this. he was so lost tat he did not realize tat his wife was not at all with him but lost in her dream, a dream where she was in her initial days of pregnancy. The doctor was done while she handed over the CD to Maan who just had happiness all over his face. He kissed Geet on her cheeks but she did not respond. He now realized tat she was lost but thought tat she was lost to see the baby with him.

He turned the car and headed towards their destination which Geet failed to see tat they were not heading for mansion but somewhere else. she was so lost tat she did not even realize tat she was with Maan. He was happy tat today he would take his revenge but in the most sweet and romantic way finally apologizing to his Jaan. He knew tat he had done a big mistake but today he wanted to set everything right unknown wat his Jaan was going through.

Maan (ST): I promised you na Jaan tat you will love my revenge and you wills surely love it. just few more minutes and than you will be in my arms.

They reached the place, a small farmhouse but well the class could be known as Maan had brought the best of the best cottage from Delhi just to gift to his Jaan for giving him the best gift, their angel. He stopped the car and slowly made Geet to come out by supporting her while Geet still lost. He made their way towards the entrance. He opened the door and went inside to see if everything was ready while Geet stood at the doorstep. Once he checked he came and made Geet to enter and made her to stand at the centre and next second there was a shower of roses, different roses with were her favorite. Geet was brought back by the soft touches of the roses. She felt nice and happy for a second but next second the reality struck to her. The reality tat she was thrown out by her husband, the reality tat her husband never trusted her, tat she was all alone when she needed him the most. She looked at him who was way too happy. She saw him kneeling down on his knees and than taking her hand in his.

Maan: I know jaan.. tat I was supposed to take my revenge for last night but I thought my revenge should be the best which you will remember for life long. This cottage' will be one of the best gift given to you by me where we will start our life together as parents. The life which we dreamt for our angel, for our love..

Geet just kept staring at him.

Maan: I wont say sorry Jaan as I know tat my sorry won't undo wat I have done. My sorry will not heal the pain which I gave but still I would ask for your happiness with this small gesture. I would be happy tat you accept this gift as my undying love for you.

Geet: So you are paying me for forgiving you.

Maan was stiff, her words pierced his heart while his ears were deaf with those harsh words.

Geet: Nice way Mr. Maan Singh Khuranna.. indeed the best way to ask forgiveness by bribing me. I really loved. Can you please tell me how much did it cost. You know I should be ready to pay for it when you change you mind like you did ask me wat you did for me like last time.

Maan: Geet'

Geet: No Geet.. Maan.. there is no Geet here.. she is dead long back. The person who is in front of you is the one whom you made to stay by saying tat you will leave your parents if I don't stay with you. she is one who does not want her in laws to suffer because her husband gave her the pain that she never deserved.

Maan: Geet' I was just'

Geet: or so you wanted to take revenge as I troubled you last night na.. such a great idea Maan.. to hurt the same place by giving the same pain again. I must say you are a true business man. But sorry m not the same Geet, Maan.. m not the same anymore. Why don't you just finish me off Maan.. why don't you take your revenge by killing me for troubling you whole night. It will free me from all pain Maan.

Maan: Geeettt'.

Geet: Don't shout' m not your property tat you can raise your voice Mr. Khuranna.

Maan: Please Jaan.. listen to me once na' please'

Geet: wat Maan.. did you listen to me.. did you give me a chance ever Maan. you think tat I came to London coz I loved you.. than m sorry.. tat love is no more there for you. it died the very same day when you made me believe tat you were with Pari' your best friend.

Maan: Jaan.. please.. I know' m wrong.. I never

Geet: you never intended to do it.. but you did. Tell me Maan.. how will you get my days back. How will you make me feel tat m having my love inside me. How will you bring my initial days of pregnancy when I needed to share my happiness with you. tell me Maan.. how will you make me feel special to believe tat I have been nurturing a life inside me. How will you fulfill my cravings for tat love which I did not get for my first 7 months Maan. tell Me Maan.. how will you bring me days back so tat I can share my happiness.. tell me..

Maan: I cant'

Geet: Than why.. is this all'.. why is this.. all drama Maan.. you can never feel wat I went through Maan. you know Maan seeing couples around I used to crave for you, crave for your one glimpse to tell you tat your dream is breathing inside me.. to tell you tat your angel is making me restless every night.. to tell you wat I felt when she kicked me the very first time' but you were not there.. you were never there Maan.. you were never there for me'

Maan: Jaan.. please.. calm down.. jaan.. breadth Jaan' please.. breadth'

Geet: don't worry Maan.. I wont die' I wont die.. just wont die.. I have to bear this pain na'. the pain which' my love.. my husband gave me.. Kash hum kabhi nahi milte Maan.. kash.. ki tat you never told Adi wat you felt for me' Kash ki I never expressed my feelings for you and kash ki I never agreed for this marriage'

Maan knelt down hearing her words. This was the first time she had confronted him after he got to know the truth. this was the first time tat she said wat she went through..

Maan: M sorry Jaan' m really sorry.. I know I can never undo all tat.. but I really love you.. I love you.. trusts me the words I said killed me every moment' the harsh behavior tat is showed on you killed me each second.. I died thousands of deaths each day away from you Jaan' m sorry.. I know' I did wrong.. please' I need you' I need my Geet.. Jaan.. I need my Geet who loved me' please Jaan'

Geet: m tired'can you please drop me home' or shall I go..

Maan saw her' and there she was standing close to him but was far away, miles away from him and his reach. He was scared.. scared tat he will never get her back.. her words and pain made his heart to die' while he slowly stood up to follow her.

Precap: Maan does things which he never did'

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Edited by sdlife19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome, brilliant, emotional part
maaneet confrontation and sply geet's out burst is very much needed
maan need to work more hard to gain the trust again
continue soon
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update!!
Finally geet let out all her pain to maan...
waiting to see how maan will win her back :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
fab update di

LOVE IT
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet confrontation with maan and geet pain surfacing do next soon



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Posted: 12 years ago
part 9
nice part...
poor them...
what happened to that Pari?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago


wow lovely painful update ji.. te way geet is craving for my maan and is lost in thought.. my maan is planning for surprise.. geet's each word pierced not only my maan's heart but mine too.. why god ur playing with my maaneet.. i cant see them like tis.. how hard geet made her heart to say those words to my maan..i love te update so much with heavy heart...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks dear...i loved the update today...it was more in lin with what I was expecting...
I want Maan to understand her pain and value of those vows which he took with her...
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was painful to c both in pain . Geet is correct in her place but maan babu buying a cottage or saying sorry wont do. he should erase the pain inflicted in geet's mind and haert . continue soon .
Edited by hermoso - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was amazing one..
Geet poured all her inner feelings to maan..
nw he came to noe the depth of pain he instilled..

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