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Posted: 12 years ago
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WITHOUT PAIN NO LOVE

PART 4: MANVEER:::::::: ❤️:::::::

Suddenly akash's head is pulled back and then the person started hitting him'

he had turned back facing his back towards anya hitting akash'

his friends left anya's hand and went to hit that person'

anya was very hurt embarrassed insulted depressed'.

she needed to cry out her heart'

she just stared at the person hitting akash and his friends'.

she looked at his face and says'

UDAYVEER'

Then crying more harder she runs into the jungle'

uday beat akash and his friends so badly that they almost fell unconscious and tried to run from there'

then he saw anya running towards the jungle crying'

and he runs behing her calling out her name'but anya didn't stop..

she ran and ran and finally stopped under a huge tree crying and panting'.

she sits down crying harder'.

uday had finally found her and was very hurt to see her in such a state'

Uday then slowly sits besides her and keeps his hand on her shoulder..

his touch brings her out of her thoughts'

she looked up at the person with her red swollen eyes'

it was uday'.he had came for her..she thought'

not able to control she started crying loudly'

Uday keeps her head and keeps it on his chest'

Encircling her in his arms and caressing her hair and cheek'

Uday wiping off her tears: shh' anya ro mat hum hai na tumhare sath..sab thik h ro mat plz'

Uday had an urge to kiss her comfort her but stopped himself'

He knew anya was not in a state to understand anything'

Uday: anya abhi bahot raat ho gai hai'hum abhi yaha se nahi ja sakte nahi to rasta bhatak jaenge'hum kal subah yaha se niklenge'

Anya said nothing'

she would stay there for as much time as she was encircled in his arms'

she felt safe' protected'

anya then moves back'

both have a deep eye contact'

anya: thank you uday'

uday was shocked to hear the word uday'

only his princess called him uday' evry1 else called him udayveer or uv'

uday:tumne humhe uday kyun bulaya??

Anya confused:matlab??

Uday: matlab ab dekho na sab mujhe udayveer ya uv esa kuch bulate hai'

Anya: oh'

she was trying to understand why was he shocked wen she called her uday she just casually did'not a big thing for her but definitely for uday'

anya: sach batau toh tumhara naam kitna bada aur boring hai'udayveer'isiliye meine Uday bulaya'

uday more shocked remembers the past'

6 years old Uday plzying with 4 years old manyata '.

Manyata(not able to speak clearly): Uday Uday meli baat shuno na'

Uday:tum hume Uday kyun bulati ho jabki humara naam udayveer hai'

Manyata: udayveel' shiii kitna bala naam hai'mein tho tumhye uday hi bulaungi..

Flash back ends'manyata

Anya shakes uday: Uday Uday tum thik to ho??

Uday comes out of his thoughts'

Anya: haye rabba tumhare hath se to khun beh raha hai'

She takes her napkin and ties it on his hand'

Suddenly Uday hugs her tightly'

Uday felt relieved after having her in his arms..he didn't knew why but his pain was vanished'

He felt nice...he felt the warmth of his body'.

Anya confused but doesn't stop him' this was what she wanted at the moment to comfort her'

And it very well did'instead of stopping she let her flow with the moment'.

After sometime Uday realizes what he was doing'

He moves back and found that anya had already fallen asleep in the warmth of his arms'

She was sleeping peacefully'.he stared at her with love'

Uday: pata nahi anya kyun par jab bhi tum pas hoti ho to esa lagta hai jese humhe humari khoyi hui manyata mil gayi'

He makes her sleep on his lap'

She was feeling cold..

He had nothing to cover her so he removed his t-shirt though he himself was feeling cold too'

(personal thought____THIS WAS LOVE..IN WHICH THE PERSON WAS READY TO TORTURE HIMSELF FOR TAKING CARE OF HIS SOULMATE'..)

He didn't care about himself' right now he was feeling only for anya'

He caresses her cheek and hair'.

He was not able to control his urge now' he bends down and kisses her 4head'.

Anya blushed in her sleep'as in she was seeing the same in dream as was happening in reality'

Uday laughs now at her innocent little face'

Anya in sleep turns in his lap facing her back towards him'

He sees the nail marks'he then touches her marks moving her hair aside..and sees another mark this was big a wound'.he then carefully sees that mark and was shocked'.

~flash back~

14 years back'..

Uday: manyata sword bahot sharp hai tumhe lag jaegi'

Manyata: nahi nahi nahi lagegi tum bas mujhe talwar baji sikhao'

They are having a sword fight and galtise Uday ki sword manyata ko lag jati hai'

The wound was bleeding' all family members present there'they take manyata in her room and doctor sahib bandages her wound'

Uday comes in manyata's room and sits besides her'

Uday: mujhe maaf kardo manyata'

He gives her a Cadbury which makes manyata very happy'

Manyata: its ok uday' mujhe pata hai tumne janbuchke nahi kiya'

She takes a piece of chocolate and keeps it in his mouth'.and both have a small hug'.

Since that day she had that mark on her for lifetime'.

Flashback ends'.

Uday gasps seeing that mark on her back'"princess'" he was shocked, happy, sad'various emotions running in his heart at same time'

He had tears in his eyes'

He decided not to tell her or any1 else her true identity atleast not for time being'

Uday was very happy'.: bandariya kahiki'.

He chuckles' and goes in sleep tired'.having his just found lost angel sleeping peacefully in his arms'.

~mahi~

guyz plz leave your precious cumments...

Edited by MAHI1198 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
awesome and lovely
the whole thing rocked
loved how uday saw the scar
loved the whole update and the beating of Akash
loved that u did not prolong it so much

please update soon
with a lot of manveer romance
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
COMMENT ON PART-3 N PART-4.😊
Sorry Mahi last time I forgot to read the third chapter.😳 Jus read both the parts together.😊
Fantastic, superb, wonderful n awesome updates Mahi.
UV-Manyata started to feel for each other☺️ but that Ba******d Akash😡 such a dirty man.🤢
UV beated Akash n his cheap friends, good.😉 Well done UV.👍🏼
Manvver Jungle scene was so so cute, loved it.😉
& Flash back scene of MANVEER Childhood.😛

6 years old Uday playing with 4 years old manyata '.

Manyata(not able to speak clearly): Uday Uday meli baat shuno na'

Uday:tum hume Uday kyun bulati ho jabki humara naam udayveer hai'

Manyata: udayveel' shiii kitna bala naam hai'mein tho tumhye uday hi bulaungi..

Sho cute.🤗 UV saw scar on Manyata's back.😲 So now he know Anya is actually his Bestie n Fiancee' Manyata.😲

I'm so excited to read the next chapter, Please update ASAP.😊

Thanks for the beautiful update n PM.😊

🤗 🤗 🤗


Edited by Vasishtha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
nice update mahi
m glad uday saw the scar !
waiting to read more update soon n thankx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Awesome Mahi...what a dramatic union👍🏼

How twistly UV found her Princess😉

Update soon and thanx for the pm dear🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Great update Mahima!
Good job!👍🏼
Edited by mahi0809 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
uday saved anya from akash.now she hassoft corner 4 him.uday realizes tht she is manyata.cant wait 4 anya 2 no that.plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Amazing Part Mahi
Uday found his princess
the flashback scenes were great
wonder what Anya will say when she find out she is princess Manyata looking forward to the next part
Cont Soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
its awesome dear:)waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
thankfully udat beat dat akashh!!!!!!! wen manyata called him uday and dat flashbackk was soo cutee,i was reading it over and over agn!!!!!! then their hug,and finally uday saw dat mark,and called her princess,dats was jstt lovely!!!!!!!!! do cntinuee soon and ofcrse pm me agn!!!!!!!😊

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