KR SS- Hitched *On hiatus*

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Just trying my hand on a (very short) SS.

Really hope you'll like it.😳

No reason to pick KR again, except that I have majority Kriyaansh readers.😊

But please feel free to just think of whoever you'll like.😉

KR SS

Hitched

"Rahul, why do you think Kria ma'am hates Reyaansh sir?" Nisha asked her best friend and lab partner, who was trying to identify a Paramoecium specimen in the microscope for the past 15 minutes, with no luck.

"Huh?" Rahul looked up with a frown. Where had that come from? he wondered. And that too in the middle of science class? Girls! He sighed. They can be so vague sometimes. Wait'.. Sometimes?... Ha! They were vague all the bloody time!

"Bol naaa'." Nisha probed. "What do you think?"

He sighed again. Knowing way too well that his best buddy wasn't going to shut up unless he gave his insights on the sudden, out of the blue and a very important matter between their science teacher and the school coach. "Hmm'. Well, I don't think she hates him. They just don't interact with each other enough." He shrugged matter-of-fact-ly.

"And why do you think that is? Have you seen how formal they are with each other? Hello, Good morning and most times, just a crisp nod. I don't think I have ever seen them even smile at each other. It'.. It makes me wanna puke!"

"Hold on. I don't get it." Rahul scratched his head in utter confusion. "How does their being cordial to each other affect your health?"

Nisha slapped her head. Guys! Even peanuts are bigger than their brains. "It's just an expression, duffer!"

"Oh."

"So?" She grinned slyly, that gave him the creeps. "Why do you think they are so cordial? Have you ever considered the fact that they could be highly attracted to each other and just trying to fight off the emotions?"

"Huh?" Was this girl crazy? He wondered wearily. Where did she get all that?

He sighed for the umpteenth time in the last 5 minutes. "How am I supposed to know that Nisha? But that's secondary. My prime question is'. why do you care? Arre, it's their life. Their emotions. Let them fight it however they want. Why should we bother? We are just their students. Plus, I was taught that one shouldn't interfere in people's personal matters. Now can we please indentify this amoeba shamps? I don't want Kria ma'am to think I'm dumb."

"Rahul, you are useless. You can keep trying but I'm sure Kria ma'am doesn't give a rat's ass about your so-called 'Crush'. She is a beautiful, grown woman and'. let's face it'. she needs a man! A good one' that can really take care of her. And I think Reyaansh sir fits the bill. He is just sooo'.. hawt!!" Nisha whispered, dreamily.

"Whatever." He mumbled and turned back to his microscope. Reyaansh sir? Hot?... Well, so was he!! He thought grumpily. He dint know why but he hated when Nisha went all gaga over their school coach. He was just a good looking man. What was the big deal about that?

"Oh I know what we can do!!" She clapped her hands excitedly.

He chose to ignore her as he jotted down some points in his notebook. But that didn't dampen her gaiety on discovering some- he was sure- weird plan.

"Let's get them hitched!"

Rahul had to hold back an urge to groan. Really? Like that is all that's left to do in life? "Yeah sure. Such a cakewalk." He scorned.

"But it is!!" She was practically bouncing in her seat. "Trust me, Rahul. All we need to do is get them to realize their true feelings for each other."

"Tch'.. Won't work." He shook his head. "You were right. She hates him."

She slapped his arm. "No she doesn't. You said so yourself. Oh common Rahul. Help me, help them discover their true love." She sighed, blissfully. "Oh, won't that be sooo romantic?"

Great! All he had to do was tear his hair out now.

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PS-

So what do you'll think?

Should I write more of this stupid story?😕

Do give me some constructive feedback.

Please'..😳

Will be waiting.

😊

PPS-

Inspired by a few of my sweet IF friends over a chat session regarding school days.😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Index


Chapter 1- above


~On Hiatus~
Edited by tish18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res.
tish di finally a new one
unres

Wonderful concept Tish di..
loved it..
Acha bache school mai teachers ka bhi link karate hai kya😆
yup bacho ka hota hai pata hai tears Sounds interstesting..

Acha Y do i feel somewhere Saurav is related to this inspi..*just a doubt*

And Di S u must continue on it..It really wil be a treat to cherish school memories back..

Edited by asmaju - 12 years ago
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me


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even though I am mighty pissed at not being first, here goes nothing...

I feel for Rahul! Aww poor guy.. Kitne bade jhamele mei fansne jaa raha hai... Heehheeeheee!!

But joh bhi hai, KR as teachers!! LOBH the idea!! Continue and do your magic!! Hehe!

Now I have two SS of urs to look forward to!! Yaaayyy!!

Keep on writing love!!

And yeah, Asma, YOU are cursed! Like Seriously! I wanted d first spot!
Edited by aria009hera - 12 years ago
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I hate you Asma!!! Like sacchi!!! U ll bear my curse for decades now!!
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Originally posted by: aria009hera

I hate you Asma!!! Like sacchi!!! U ll bear my curse for decades now!!


Aww di I love u like sachi mai..I never knew u werewaiting..Apko pata hia nah y did ui hurry up..

bachi ke exams hai cuse mat kiya karo plz*puppy face*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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always luvd ur all work tish...

Lykd it...

Do i need to say that...

Do continue it...

nd update soon...

thankx 4 d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Meee! ______
Daaamn, check out my swag! I'm on the first page!
So new story huh?
Thanks for giving me something else to threaten you over ;)
I actually like the idea of Kria and Rey being hooked up. And i'm excited to see how you'll make that happen!
The concept sounds promising and you're an amazing writer so I know you'll give us something kickass to read!
Continue soon babes! Or else I'll draw up another deal (:
Edited by Hot.Pink.Heels - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWESOME ...i loved the 1st chapter ... rey n kria are going to hv nice time together 😆 ...plz plz update soon ...😊
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unres... Oh god tishhh... When i read "HITCHED" ... I ws like... Wat...????? ... N then when i read d 1st line... I ws like... O god... Kya hoga tumhara... 😆 ... U writers cn jst fit kriyaansh in anything na... Kbi doctor.. Kbi racer... Kbi vampire... Wat else is left haan... 😛 ... Stilll i loved the concept... Lets see how nisha n rahul wil mke kriyaansh one... Waiting for d nxt update :)
Edited by akanksha_arsha - 12 years ago

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