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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
AWESOME!! The girl is Kriya for sure!!!
So break the suspense and update soon!!
Please!!!



Please!!!
Please!!!

And next time mujhe update se pehle pm chahiye!!i need to comment first!!



Edited by idiot_box - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Awesome !!!!!!!
loved it...
the girl is Kriya for sure...
precap was amazing...
update soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
am sure the girl is kria 😉
precap seems interesting ..
Pls continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
wow!!!!

super duper cool

n i liked the mask a lot

its sooo cute 😆

girl may be kriya ho sakti

or may be koi new 😕

well update next part soon

m waiting


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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Awesome os
Update Soon
Pm me the next update plzzz
Posted: 13 years ago
#46
A big thanks to all the readers i am so glad dat u liked my post really i am so overwhelmed from all the comments

i will surely update the next part till today if possible ..

once again thanks for liking my post

love all the reader

enrique(maggie)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
👏 AMAZING POST 👏👏👏👏👏
Posted: 13 years ago
#48
Hola guys d part f my ss I am so glad and overwhelmed dat u guys liked the 1st part so much so now without any further delay update de deti hu!!!!!!

Speakers on kar lo zara and please tell how did u like my narration of dance moves please……
Swayam was frozen to the ground after seeing the girl , he heard some girls coming towards the washroom so he ran away while he was in corridor he talked to him self..
Sw: agar she is back den y didn't she tell me once …? Y kriya (yes she was kriya all of the reader and commenter's wer rite she is back ) now he just came and stood near rey and rey asked him…
Re: dude vo ?...ladaki kon hai ?
Sw: vo..vo? (before he could answer the host announced the audience to come on the dance floor )
Now every 1 was with der partners sharon was with rey and was dam angry on swayam , now swayam was noticing

dat kriya was standing in 1 corner and was looking t rey with all her emotions and passion , which he ever noticed in

her eyes …so he goes near her and ask her for dance …den she says yes and she comes on dance floor with

swayam….
Dance gyan : ball room dance is done n 2 style in American and Latin style , this is a form in which 2 partners

show der passion for love in the form of dance and der emotions r showcase through dance…..
Song - I burst the windows of ur car…
Movie: step up!
watch this video for some better understanding

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tp33Bwjbgzw&feature=related


Now the partners wer standing in a stringt line opposite to each other a a distance (like just In the video) and they started dancing…..kriya came near swayam and every1s eyes wer glued to her coz her dress was quit hot and der was a strange girl dancing with swayam shekawat for the 1st time according to people ,now swayam placed his left

hand behind her shoulder and his right hand in her hand and den the question he asked , just popped her eye out of her eyes diameter ….

Sw: tum bhi to rey se pyaar karti thi na den y u left him?(kriya was shocked to hell after listening the question
but she behaved like she was nt kriya )
Kr: wat ye kya bol rahe ho? Kon rey..?
Sw: wahi jise tum itne deer see aakhe phad phad ke dekh rahi ho?
Kr: swayam ……(now she gave up as she didn't had the strength to lie to her best friend )
Sw: deekha nahi bol payi na jhoot?

Now he just turns her and they had to exchange the partners now she came near rey ….he just placed both of his
hands on her waist and wen he did so he felt a 1000 volts of shock ran down his body and he was looking into her eyes and he understood those big big eyes and was about to take his name but den he asked her?
Re: who r u?( by listening to this kriya's heart skipped a beat she thought he didn't even recognized her……)
Kr: mai….(before she could speak they exchanged the partners and she went near shivam she recognized him and
the thing she did shocked and amazed shivam and he didn't understood wat happened ?wen she came near him she just stamped his feet brutally and stood der without dancing and was looking t rey and was lost in his eyes ..as
even rey was looking at her and thought (y is she nt dancing with shivam …I guess har ladaki shivam se door rahana chati hai?and she smirked )

Now again they changed the partners she came near her best friend again and noow both wer dancing and swayam again with his interrogation …process..
Sw: did he recognized u?
Kr: no ?
Sw: now he just danced with her and both wer taking turns andhe bent her and she placed her 1 hand on his neck by seeing this nt only rey the whle collage was getting jealous they wer dancing like angels ...

now finally she came back to her love and now rey didn't wanted to leave her …. And he spoke only 1 thing which bought a big million dollar smile on her face ..
Re: baatcutter …..(wen he took her name a lone tear escaped from his eyes and he felt his heart had a big burden ….he felt heavy hear ted and was just looking into her eyes ….) now he didn't wanted to leave her so he made his

grip strong on her shoulder and den just lifted her left leg and bent a little back (1:19)
and kriya was breathing heavily and even she couldn't control emotions she just threw her both hands around his shoulder…and den he dragged her in dat pose only and
den she removed her hand and she was half lying on ground and he hold her from her neck...
Now both stood straight and they forgot that they had to exchange the partners and wer just looking in to each others eyes like never before….and for the first time in the whole nite she spoke her heart in and out .. And just took his name .
Kr: "REY" ..( by hearing this he should be happy but he was angry by the fact that y did she ditch me ?)
Re: (with full attitude ) ooo to its finally miss kriya ghai? Wapas aa gayi hai? ( he just pushed her and caught her 1 hand and turned her and asked her)
Re: kya dekh ne aye ho mai zinda hu ya nahi ? Tumarahe jane je baad ? ( he just turned her by pushing her from her waist and even he took a turn )

Now rey had a hard grip on he hand and squeezed it hard and from his this unfaithful action she should have screamed but she didn't which shocked rey….

he placed his hands on her back and both just did a step


and both wer just dancing in the same was they danced on rose day party aggressively but passionately, now he caught her right her hand and both swing part...

now both wer just dancing in der own world but rey was making his grip tight and even more harder ...now he pushed her in force and she turned and wen he pulled her back she came with a thug on his chest

and her mask fell down ...now every 1 was hell shocked to see her back and dat to dancing with rey in a passionate way which was taking der breath away ...

Now rey just lifted her from her waist in the air and bought her down..

and they ended in a really passionate way which was even new for them

...and den lights went off ..

and wen lights came back...

PRCAP : KRIYA and REY on the terrace...and den ...

keep thinking guys

please like it and do comment how i narrated the dancing part pleaseee bye love you alll enrique(maggie)

Edited by enrique - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Do I have to TELL that it was awesome??of course it was awesome!!It was mindblowing!!Loved your dance gyan especially!!Loved the way you described the postures in ballroom dancing!It was brilliant!And i loved the fact that Kria stamped Shivam's foot and didnot dance with him..serves Shivam right!!Haha!!..I loved the way Swayam was interrogating Kria...and the moment Rey said ''baatcutter''..i was like awww..anyway right now i am busy wondering what is going to happen between Rey and Kria at the terrace!!I hope Rey gets to know the real reason why Kria left him and their misunderstandings are resolved!Please update jaldi se!Im waiting for it eagerly!!Waise Swayam ko thoda zyada involve karna please mere liye!:P..And next time i will definitely comment sabse pehle!Pakka promise!and Maggie..you are the best!!:D
Edited by idiot_box - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
yipee me first...

*jumping like a miniac*

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