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Later at late evening Geet informed Anvesha that she is going home as she is very tired and entered the lift but before the lift closes Maan entered the lift'.. Geet wanted to go out but lift started''. But luckily or unluckily the light just went away leaving both Geet and Maan all alone in the lift'''..

The lift got stuck in between and Geet got too scared'. She started shivering'.. Maan realised that who was watching her and went near her'' She even without a second thought just clings to him'''. Maan hold her by her shoulder''.. Geet immediately hug him'' He realised that she was crying''

Maan: Geet relax''. I am there with you'' Relax the light will come soon''..

He took his phone out but there was no network at all''..

Geet was so scared that she did not leave Maan for a second''.. Maan felt some unknown attraction towards her'' From the time she has left his place he has started missing her'' Somewhere in his heart she has made her place but Maan was not ready to accept that'''

Geet was sobbing and Maan held her close trying to calm her''.. She was hugging him tight''' After sometime light came and lift started with a sudden jerk which made lose their balance and Geet fall taking Maan along with her''.

Geet: sorry'''

Maan got up from her making her stand''..

Geet: I am sorry'.. Who because of light'.

Maan: You don't have to be sorry'''..

Geet just walks out of the lift'''.. Maan goes behind her''.

Maan: Geet Geet'' Listen to me''.

Geet did not wait or listen to him'' She just started walking with full speed'..

Maan went and hold her by her arms''': Geet at least to me''..

Geet: What do you want me to listen'.. I have already said sorry to you'.. I told you it was just I got scared and did not realized that you were there''.

Maan: Geet''' Even I told you that I am not angry on you''.. I am sorry Geet'''.. I know I have said many words which I should have not said'''

Geet raised her hand and said: I know Maan sir I had no right to interfere in your house and thank you for allowin '. '''

Maan did not allow her to complete her sentence he just could not take it what she was talking''. He took her lips in his'' Geet was totally shocked and protested but Maan was too strong for her'' She did not respond to it''. Tears started flowing from her eyes'''. Feeling her tears Maan left her lips and looked at her''. She was just lost in what happen few minutes happened and reality hit her that they were standing near a parking space and looked around to see but to their luck no one was there and the light was also dim'.. The tears were just flowing continuously''.. She kept her palm on her mouth and kept on looking at him'''.

Maan whispered: Don't ever say that ever again Geet'''.. I am sorry Geet'.. Please Geet ghar chalo'''.

Geet: Yeh kya kiya aapne'''.. how could you do this to me'.. how'''

She just run away from there'''..

Maan: I know what you must be feeling'.. But I had no option to stop you from saying all this''..I will bring you back Geet''. I will'''..

Maan was standing still and Adi came along with Anvesha and saw Maan standing there'''..

Adi and Anvesha felt little odd as to what is Maan doing here'''

Adi went near him: Maan what are you doing here standing''

Maan looked at Adi all confused which made Adi and Anvesha more confuse''

Adi: Maan''..

Maan: hmmm'''

Adi: Maannn''. What??? Where are you lost???? You left office long back what are you doing at the parking lot'''

Maan: Ha Nothing''.. let us go'''.

Adi: I seriously don't understand him'' What is wrong with him???

Maan walked little ahead and again turn back'' Again both were surprised with his behaviour''

Maan: Anvesha'' Please take care of Geet'''..

Adi and Anvesha had a smile and Anvesha just nodded her head and Maan just walked away from there'''

Adi tried to talk to Maan about Geet but Maan kept on changing the subject'.. Adi realised that Geet moving away has affected Maan a lot'. He has actually started liking her but is not saying anything''..

On the other end Anvesha entered the house and went in search of Geet and found Geet all lost sitting in one corner of the balcony with tears in her eyes and was looking at the sky'.. Anvesha got worried and went next to her'''

Anvesha: Geet what happen??? Why are you sitting here'''

Geet was all lost in her thought''..

Geet looked at Anvesha and had more tears in her eyes''..

Anvesha: Geettt''.. kya hua hai''

Geet was not responding at all'.. Anvesha got really scared and thought for a while and decided to give a call to Maan'''

Anvesha was trying his mobile but was not reachable'''.. She called the landline no and Palak picked up the phone''

Anvesha was not sure whether to tell Palak about Geet's condition or not but Palak understood something is wrong'''

Anvesha: Palak is Maan sir or Adi there'.

Palak: Kya baat hai''' Why are you sounding so tensed''

Anvesha: Please Palak give the phone to Maan sir''..

Palak: Is Geet ok'''

Anvesha was looking at Geet and she realised that she was murmuring something'''

Anvesha: No Palak she is not ok''..

Palak: Kya hua Geet ko...

She was loud enough and her voice reached Maan and Adi who were discussing something in the room'''..

Palak: Bhai see na what Anvesha is saying''.. What happen to Geet???

Maan took the phone from Anvesha and screamed: What happen to Geet???

Anvesha: Please sir aap log jaldi ajaiye'. Geet is sitting at one place and not responding to anything''..

Maan kept the phone and all three left to come to Anvesha's house''..

Anvesha went near Geet and heard her murmuring''

Geet: I have to tell this to someone about Pari'.. What she has done with Dev''

Anvesha got alert and asked calmly: Geet what you have to tell''

Geet looked at Anvesha and Anvesha nodded saying: Bolo Geet''..

Geet: Who Dev never committed suicide'''.

Anvesha: What???

Geet was still sobbing: Ha when I came out of the lift and she remembered what happen between her and Maan and just stopped talking to Anvesha''

Anvesha was getting tensed: Geet please bolo'''

Geet: I was going to catch a taxi to come to home at that time I heard Pari was talking to someone on phone and I heard her saying that the way Dev was killed and everyone presumed it to be a suicide they will kill '''

Geet started crying more and Anvesha also had tears in her eyes and just hugged her'''. By that time Maan, Adi and Palak had also reached and heard what Geet was saying and had a shocked expression on their face'''.

Anvesha: They will kill whom'''.

Geet (softly): Maan sir'''

Anvesha: what??? But why???

Palak came running and hugged Geet'' Maan and Adi were shocked to see Geet in that condition''.. But they could not hear what she said at the end'''

Geet felt unconscious and that scared them more''.. Seeing no response from her'.

Palak: Geet Geet''''.

Anvesha: Geet please open the eyes'''.

Maan and Adi went near her and Maan took Geet in her arms and went to the room and in the mean time Adi called doctor''..

Maan was more furious at Pari for killing Dev and making Geet's condition like this'''.

Doctor came and checked Geet and said that she is in a heavy mental stress'' She needs a proper sleep'''.Doctor gave some medicine and left from there saying to take care of her'''

Maan: I will not leave that Pari now''.. She has done enough of damage'''.

Adi: Relax Maan'''.. First we need to take care of Geet'.. Why did she became so tensed'''.

Anvesha: I know the reason for that'' Maan sir is the reason for it''..

Maan: Me'.. I know I was the one who made her leave everything, because of me''..

Anvesha: No'.she is not upset for that she is stress because she fears that something will happen to you'.. the last word she told was they will kill''..

Adi: kya mai sahi soch raha hu'''.

Anvesha: Ya'.. Pari wants to kill you Maan sir'''

Palak was stunned to hear this when she had just come out of Geet's room'' Palak ran and hugged Maan''..

Maan understood the pain of Palak: Palak kuch nahi hoga mujhe don't worry''

Palak: Bhai I cannot lose you'.. I have already lost Mumma and papa''..

Maan: Nothing will happen to me'' You believe me right'''

Maan told Anvesha to take Palak to her room and make her sleep and he went to check on Geet''.. The tear marks were still there on her face'. It was hurting him from inside''..

Maan kept on looking at her, her innocence, her love everything and finally even he had tears and went out of the room''

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Edited by ana1411 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
update pari killed dev bi... geet condition poor and maan tensed for geet do next soon



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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update loved it
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omg...maan kissed geet...maan sooo shameless dat is...but i loved dat move of maan...maan should confess his love fr her...

awesome n beautiful update...


loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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