MAANEET SS HEAVEN IN HELL THREAD-1 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
awesome, brilliant part
loved it
maan is turning into devil
where geet-annie-guru scene war lovely
past is so painful
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
one side gurmeet become an epitome of love...
and maan epitome of hatred...
felt bad for maaneet and guru..
lovely update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
part 2
nice part...
OMG Guru, Geet and Annie were so cute...
and Maan has turned to an arrogant man...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Love it graphics
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
awesm
n loved guru-anni-geet bonding!!
do updt soon!!
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H2 - 3



AFTER 20 YEARS,


GOA, A SMALL 2 BEDROOM APARTMENT,

FEB, 22 2012, AT MIDNIGHT 11:58


Two girls, holding a cake in their hands and went to bedroom, were a handsome guy was sleeping peacefully.


two girls saw te time, and they started to count


Girls: 10.9.8...3..2..1

Both girls together went near that guy's ear and screamed

Girls : HAPPY BIRTHDAY GURU

YES TODAY IS OUR GURMEET'S BIRTHDAY

Guru got up with a jerk and shocked to see two devils of his life..

Guru : ANNI GEET, wat is tis,u devils


ANI



Geet and anni laughing seeing guru's face.

Geet : ok now stop glaring at us and cut te cake


They brought a cake and placed in front of him. Guru was surprised and stared to blow te candles. two girls starts to sing birthday song for him. he blow te candle and cut the cake and fed to anni first and then geet.they both fed hi . Geet smirks to anni and anni to returns to geet, and within a secs, Geet smash the cake on guru's face and started laugh. seeing GURU'S angry face, two girls start to run for they life.

Guru : geet anni I wont leave u

Guru started to chase them whole house. they both were running and enter to kitchen. Guru smirks at them

Guru : now how u both will escape from me,

He steps towards them, geet and anni was trying to eacape but guru closed te door, he was cuming to them

Geet : pls guru sorry, we wont do next time

Guru : we will see

He came near them, at the same time, flour box fell on guru's head and the flour spread on guru's body. Geet and anni seeing him like white bear started to laugh holding they stomach and guru seeing them he too started to laugh. Geet wents to guru and rubs the flour with her dupatta. Guru holds geet's hands and geet looks at him. both were engrossed in they eye locks.



Both were looking at each other with love. Anni who was watching them,

Anni : bhai, geet stop yar

Geet and guru came out of their lala land coz of anni

Anni : bhai wat is tis, ur became shameless romancing ur gf in front of ur sister, chi

Geet felt embrasseed and guru glares at her and then smiles

Geet : guru go and change and cum. we will be waiting for u in hall

Guru : ok geet

He lefts to his room to change. Geet and Ani arrange popcorn and coke .they put a dvd and waiting for guru. In room guru changed to new dress and cam to his bed and open his drawer , took a paper cutting photo and caress it.


Guru : HAPPY BIRTHDAY MAAN,. I miss u so much

He kiss that photo and kept te photo in te drawer . And took te chain from his neck and saw te letter M and kissed it too. And went to hall

Anni : bhai how long u will take, cum we will start te movie.

Trio started to watch the movie and cuddle to each other and slept. Geet and Ani on guru's shoulder, while guru holding them in his arms.

AT SAME TIME, IN DELHI,

A 25 year old guy who have strong masculine features, with M-shaped lips, well fit body with 6 packs, sleeping in his cosy bed, half laying in bed and half out of te bed holding a alcohol bottle in his hand..his phone was ringing and he got u and attend te call

Guy : what te hell ur doing

Person: '.

Guy laughs hysterically and roared at him

Guy : NO ONE CAN DENY MAAN SINGH KHURANA

YES that sleeping beast is is MAAN SINGH KHURANA


He got up from his bed and went to his washroom to freshen up, he was standing like greek god in front te shower. he took bath and came out ,



he wores his black color office attire and wears his rolex watch and his goggles and went out. A black mercedez car was waiting outside, driver opens te door for him and Maan enter and sat in back seat. te driver close te door and starts te care followed by two cares front and two care back full of body guards.


The car enter to one of te khurana's construction site. the car stops, driver opens te door and he step out with his style. Maan went inside followed by his guards and enter to te lift, it took him to the basement. he went inside, .there a 40 year old man was sitting in a chair with rope tied around him and he was bleeding severly. Maan came and sat before him.



That man : MR.KHURANA wat is tis, why u doing tis to me

Maan stares at him : don't u know mr.chopra


Chopra : u don't think that u will get wat u want.i will never sign tis papers.tis is my project, I got te tender thet why u are behind tis.u try for next time

Maan laughs : NEXT TIME? Wont exist in my dictionary chopra

Chopra : mr.khurana I have quoated tis project and I got it

Maan : wen MAAN SINGH KHURANA involves , no one dare to near him, how dare u take that against me

Chopra : wat ever u try u acnt get it mr.khurana.i will go to police, any how by now my wife have complaint that her husband is missing and police will soon arrest u mr.khurana, im too a big shot like u

Maan started to laugh loudly echoing te whole building. He drank some alcohol

Chopra was shocked : wat u mean

Maan smirks at him and nodes his head to Adi .

Adi turns te tv on, chopra was shocked to see, his wife was lying in te bed with half conscious and two mens were holding her and two mens were standing besides her and injecting some injections to her.

Chopra : Mr.Khurana psl leave her, wat u doing to her.pls

Maan : Mr.Chopra still I don't have any idea but seeing my men's eyes on ur wife I cant help it

Chopra : pls Mr.Khurana leave her, pls and started to cry

Maan stares at him and chopra tilt his head down

Chopra : ok I will sign

Adi gav te papers to chopra , chopra read te papers and shocked.

Chopra : wat is tis Mr.Khurana u ask only that project, but tis papers says that im selling my full property in ur name with my consent

Maan : wen my mens ask u to sign it will be went off with that project. but u made me too cum here, so ur paying for wasting my time for ur nonsense

Chopra : Mr.Khurana u cant do tis.

Maan : I can do anything Mr.Chopra

Chopra see te tv , how maan's men seeing his wife and one man cuming near to her.

Chopra : no I will sign, he signed all te papers and started to cry.

Adi took te papers and maan smirks at him

Chopra : I wont go to police

Maan : nothing matters to me

He stood up and went to his car, driver opens te care, before he enter Adi calls him

Adi : Maan

Maan stood in his place and turns to Adi

Adi came to him : HAPPY BIRTHDAY MAAN

Maan sees him and nodes : thanku Adi and he sits in his car and te car went off leaving ADI who shedding tears for his friend maan


KHURANA CONSTRUCTION,


Maan's car enter to kc, with sound horn. All members in kc got alert hearing te alert. Maan enter to his office with his MSK style. Everyone greeted him and he went inside his cabin without answering them. Maan enters his cabin and called Adi and shasha to his cabin




Adi and Shasha enter Maan's cabin and him.

Maan : shasha were is London projects

Shasha : here mk

Maan saw that: Adi wat about my tickets to London

Adi : yes Maan sir I hav arranged everything, next week u have to go to our London branch. Sir today u have to attend Mr.tandon's party

Maan : is it important

Adi : yes sir as he is our oldest client and close friend of ur dadaji and dadimaa

Maan : hmmm ok u both can leave

Adi and Shasha leaves Maan's cabin. After they left, Maan's phone starts ringing, he saw te caller's name, it came dadimaa , he took te call

Dadimaa : hello Maan were are u

Maan : in office dadi

Dadi : office , u didt meet me during breakfast

Maan : I had a imp meeting dadi

Dadi : HAPPY BIRTHDAY MAAN

Maan was silent : thanku dadi

Dadi : cum home early in evening

Maan was silent

Dadi : ok bye maan

Maan cuts te call and engrossed in his work.


GOA, ST.JOSEPH CHURCH


Guru , Geet and Ani enters te church and saw father was praying. They to joined him and after something father finish his prayer and stood up to see te trio standing there





GURU


Trio together : Gudmorning Father

Father : Gudmorning my childrens , HAPPY BIRTHDAY GURU

GURU : thank u father , he went and took father's blessings, father hugs him.

Father : now u became 25 years, wen ur going to make my daughter Geet as ur wife

Geet blushes hearing father's words and tilt her head down due to shyness, and guru too felt shy

Guru : soon Father

Father : no Guru I have decided that Geet's studies are going to finish , so im going to fix ur marriage next month

Guru : but Father

Father : no buts, wat Geet r u ready

Geet feels shy and hugs FATHER.

Ani : oh then my friend Geet will be soon my bhabhi

Geet : ani pls don't cal me bhabhi

Ani : then wat i will call u DIDI

Geet : Ani im not ur didi ur bhabhi

Ani : hmm that why I call u bhabhi

Geet show her fake angry and turn to other side pouting her lips

Ani : ok ok Geet and she wents and hugs GURU AND GEET.

Father : bus bus

Father : Guru u were involved in a case with police, did u trace that mens

Guru : yes father, actually then stops and saw te two girls looking at them

Father sense it : Guru lets go childrens are waiting for u

Guru : ok Father

They went inside te school , seeing Guru all childrens rush to him,

Childrens ; HAPPY BIRTHDAY GURU BHAIYA

They came and hugged him and shower with their kisses . They all drag him to te hall were their arranged a cake for him to celebrate his birthday . Everyone started to sing and Guru blow te candles and cut te cake , and fed to father and then all and disturbyted sweets to all.

Guru : ok children now u all go to ur classes we will meet in te evening

All : ok bhaiya and rush to their classrooms

Geet : ok Father we both are getting late for our colleges, we will meet u in evening

Father : ok my child

Geet and ani bid good bye to Guru and Father and left.

Father took GURU to his room,

Father : now u say GURU wat happen to that case

Guru : Father we hav found who is behind all tis

Father : who is that Guru

Guru : local goon Shankar lal

Father : wat ? but he is good man, he also gav som funds for our school

Guru : yes father he is good for pupil, then no one will knows wat he is doing in underground . but he is doing all illegals business secretly, he is main culprit in kidnapping girls and selling to foreign countries, that girls of age 15 to 18

Father : oh jesus now how u going to collect evidence against him

Guru : we are doing it secretly father, as one our man was spying him

Guru saw te watch : Father its late for my office, I will talk to u in eveing

Father : ok my son

Guru leaves . but stops wen father calls him

Father : Guru be careful

Guru smiles at him: yes Father and hugs him

Guru left, seeing GURU Father had tears in his eyes, as he don't hav family, but consider GURU as his own son, who he wants to do his last rituals for him.

DELHI, EVENING AT TANDON'S PARTY


Medias are waiting for TE MOST ELIGBLE BACHELOR OF TE WORLD, who is going attend te party. Girls are eagerly waiting to get a glimse of his look. Here cums te te man , MAAN SINGH KHURANA., his black mecerdez car came before te enterance and MAAN got out from te carr..medias surrounds him, but his body guards draws a circle around him and took him to the party.


Everyone started to greet him, he wents to te bar and order a drink for him



Tendon : welcome my boy, im happy to hav u here


Maan just shake hand with him and continue his drink. After sometime, music starts and group of girls started to dance. MAAN was watching them while sipping his drink , one girl came to MAAN and drag him dance floor. MAAN started to dance with them. All girls are falling on him . he smirks seeing his effect on girls.




After sometime he was sitting in couch with his drink , I girl apporaoch him, and sat on his lap and started to seduce him. MAAN smirks at her and smash his lips to her and started to kiss her.

Girl : MAAN cum lets go to te room

Maan stops and looks at her and push her down to floor and got up

Maan : ur fifty body wont satisfy my needs, and throws money on her , tis for trying u trends amd moves to his car holding te whiskey bottle.


KHURANA MANSION.

MAAN came out of te , his body guards were holding him, as he was not in normal, coz his excess intake of alcohol. Dadi saw him and ask te body guards to take him to his room.. after bodyguards left his room. Dadi went in and remove his shoes and make him to lie properly. Dadi sit beside MAAN and caress his hairs. She kissed him on his forehead

Dadi : HAPPY BIRTHDAY MAAN ,

Then she off te lights and closed te door and went to her room with tears in her eyes.

PRECAP : DADI CAMES TO KNOW ABOUT GURU AND ANI.


Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
it guru geet romance annie geet naughtyness maan partying but not crossing limits good



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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Fabulous dear waiting for nxt
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
ONE SIDE IS GURU - HE IS POOR BUT IS HAPPY WITH HIS LIFE
AND ON THE OTHER YOU HAVE MAAN - WHO IS RICH BUT UNHAPPY
WHO IS LUCKIER
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Posted: 12 years ago
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