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part 1
oh that was so cruel...
feel like killing that Rahul...
so Gurmeet and Annie are separated form the family...
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wt a sad start...

H2 - 2




A car was passing on the road and stops seeing two kids on the road, a priest came down and saw a small boy and girl on the road, he went and shake them. He ask the driver to bring water from the car, the priest smash water on guru's face.

Guru wake up with a jerk and scared seeing a man in white dress and holds ani tightly in his arms , and seeing him

Priest : son , wat u doing here

Guru scared and going backwards, priest holds him, and caresses his hair

Priest: don't get scare son, wat happen, wat u doing here

Guru felt som kind of love in priest, so he hugged him

Guru : they kiiled my maa, save me, they are there behind us

Priest : who are behind, wat is ur name

Guru (st): maa said not to say my full name: MY NAME IS GURMEET

Priest sensed that something happen to his family, so he took both of them to the car.

MORNING,KM,

Dadimaa got the news , she dropped the phone and falls on the couch: yash, meera

Maan : wat happen dadimaa

Dadi hugged maan and crying.

Dadimaa finished all the rituals and maan kept the haven on his parent's body, the whole khurana mansion surrounds in darkness

After 1 week, a police officer came to km

Dadimaa who was in her room, seeing her family photo and maan was lying on her lap.

Nakul : dadimaa police hav cum to see u

Dadimaa : ask him to sit, im cuming.

Dadimaa went to hall with maan and sit in front of te police officer.

Pc: we are sorry mam,

Dadimaa : its ok ,something imp u here so early in te morning

Pc: mam personally I hav cum here to inform that, I got te information about the person behind these

Dadimaa was shocked: what person, but u department said that it was an accident

Pc : yes mam, they hav been told to say like that

Dadi : who

Pc : RAHUL KANNA

Dadi : wat

Pc : yes mam, he hav killed ur son and daughter in law for his revenge, and framed as accident

Dadi : I wont leave him , I will file a case on him

Pc : no mam u cant do anything against him

Dadi : why , do u know whom u r talking to

Pc : I know mam, but im sorry to say these, as I hav studied through ur trustee, so I personally cam to say tis news to u mam. We cant do anything against that rahul. We don't hav any proof against him, he hav poorf that he was in London right now, and more over we got a news that he is searching ur 2 grandchildrens who can identify him, and mam one more thing, if u use ur power to file case, sure he will go to any extend, and mam u hav one more child to look after so better u think about maan.

Dadimaa was shocked and crying : yes rajesh ur correct, they hav left me, but I should live for my maan.., she wipe her tears

Dadi : r u sure tat my 2 grandchildrens are with him

Pc : we don't know clearly mam, but I got te information that after that incident, his mens went to search them , but I got a information from that place that some saw 2 kids with a priest,

Dadimaa : wat I will do now, were I will search them

Pc :u don't worry mam, I will search them secretly , as he was using some politicians power on police and closed ur file

Dadi : oh god why u doing tis to us, then I cant do anything against him

Pc: at present we cant do anything mam, but we should wait till he falls on our trap

Dadimaa : hmmm, thanku rajesh

Pc : its ok mam, its my duty mam, ok mama im leaving.take care

Dadi: hmmm

After pc wents, dadimaa collapsed on the couch, maan hugs her

Maan : wat happen dadimaa, why u crying

Dadi : everything finished maan

Maan : dadi don't cry, I hav promised guru tat I will look after u, wen he cums he will be angry on me, for making u too cry

Dadi saw maan and hugged him and thinks: wat she is going to do now. How she is going to bring maan in these surroundings, she hav to look after kc and maan..she was crying and she was her hubby so much. Seeing maan she got a strength, yes maan I wont cry, I will make everything back to normal..she hug him more to herself.

Maan : dadi who is RAHUL dadi, he killed mumma papa

Dadi didt say anything, she hugs him more.

AFTER 5 YEARS,

Now dadi was looking after kc, and now maan is studying,. She was worried for maan who became so arrogant. dadi gone to past,

Flash back

Wen she took maan to hostel 2 years back as she cant hav time to look after him, at first maan was so calm and obedient but days went on , he became arrogant as he sees his friends parents are cuming to see them, he became angry on everyone and everything.sometimes he will go to extreme, that he will beat te other boys and make them to unconscious . so te hostel management ask dadi to take maan back, dadi to thought that if he stays with her he will change and he took him with her. But now it became worst .

dadi (st); yash I failed to look after ur son , im sorry,

she is shedding her tears, wen bhatia came to inform abt her meeting and he sees her crying

Bhatia: don't worry maaji, all will became normal, now maan baba is so small, wen he grows, he will know his responsibility, don't worry maaji

Dadi wipes her tears and goes to meeting

DPS SCHOOL, DEHLI.

As today in school, parents day, so students should cum with they parents, as usually maan got irritated seeing others with they parents and he is standing all alone, some boys teased him as he don't hav anyone, so maan became angry and beat that boy., som teachers came and took him to class room, as his dadi was one of te trustee in this school, prinicipal was scared to complain him to dadi, maan took that as advantage and he does wat he wants

AT SAME TIME 5 YEARS AFTER THE INCIDENT,

IN GOA, ST JOSEPH CHURCH.,

The place was so calm and peace..it looks like god's place.the church's in charge was FATHER FERNANDAS, WHO WAS 40 YEARS MAN , looking after the church which includes orphan and school for orphan childrens..

A father came out of his room as he heard some noise, wen he came out he saw a small girl fall down from the swing and his brother rush to her took her in his arms, he stil remember how these kids came to these orphan

FLASH BACK,

After the priest took guru and anni to his car, he took them to goa. after guru came to goa, he didt go away from anni for secs too. he was holding her in his arms. Then slowly slowly he became normal and mingle to others,. At first priest try to ask about his family, wen guru was scared hearing about family, so priest stop asking him anything. Later he started to study in the school in the church and helped priest in his work in his free time, soon he became friendly to all. he look after all they needs, and teachs small childrens and look after his anni as his soul.

Priest was admiring guru and anni , wen some one called him he came back to present. He turns to look who called and saw his PA Michel was standing there( Michel was te PA and everything to priest , he love te childrens so much, he is living here, he was so fond of guru.)

Priest : wat Michel

Michel : father someone came to see u

priest : ok im cuming, he went inside his room.

Wen he enter his room, he saw a man was sitting and next to him, a small girl who can be 5 years old, with almond eyes pink chubby cheeks, looking like a baby doll in her white frock. He smiles at her, in return she gav her dimple smile to him

Man : hello father im rupandra handa , im friend of D'SOUZA who talk to u yesterday

Priest : ahh , yaa yaa he spoke to me yesterday, she is that girl

Rupandra: yes father, she is GEET HANDA , daughter of my brother mohindra, as he and his wife died in car accident , last month

Priest : why u cant look after her

Rupandra: no father as im going to settle in abroad and my wife doest want her to be burden, so I cant go against my wife's wish

Priest : rupandra signed these papers as saying, from today onwards im te guardian of GEET HANDA and u don't hav any relation with her

Rupandra sign and gave geet's bag to priest and went off.

After rupandra leaves, priest thought of D'SOUZA's words, how rupandar took all properties of geet, after her parents die in a car accident and decide to leave geet in orphan. He thinks how selfish these peoples are.

At the same Michel carrys geet and took her to play area , so that she will mingle with others. geet was sitting in the bench all alone and looking other childrens who are playing there..at that time some one touch her hand, geet turns to see who it was. A small girl came and sit beside her and holds her hand.

Girl : hai im anni, said in her baby language and smiles at her

Geet smiles at her : hai anni im GEET HANDA

Anni : hmmm wat happen why u sitting her alone

Geet : my chachaji said my mumma and papa went to god, and I should stay here

Anni : don't worry, see my mumma and papa too went to god, im here, she smile at her

At that time guru came there,

Guru : anni whom ur talking to

Anni : bhai see geet, her mumma papa too left her like us

Geet started to cry. guru went and sit beside her. and wipe her tears and said

Guru : wat is ur name

Geet : GEET HANDA

Guru : geet see good babies wont cry, wen ur mom and papa see ur like tis crying, they will feel sad naa

Geet node her head and wipe her tears with her back of her palm.

Guru : now ur good girl, see I and anni is there for u, we are one family ok

Geet smiles at him: wat is ur name

Guru smiles at her : GURMEET

Guru : cum we will go inside.

Guru carries anni in his arms and anni kissed his cheeks and in return he too kissed her. She holds geet's hand and start to walk , but geet stops him, guru look at geet

Guru : wat happen geet

Geet shows anni and extend her hands, like showing guru to carry her also like ani, guru smiles at her and carries geet in other hand, geet kissed him as ani did and showed her cheeks, guru kissed her,..guru walking to his room carrying ani and geet in his arms

Priest came to see geet, and ask Michel to arrange room for, but seeing te way guru carrying geet and ani, priest had tears in his eyes, seeing they bonding, he decide to make geet stay along with guru and ani.he thinks they got they family and smiles seeing them.

Priest (st) : why the peoples are so cruel to do like tis to these childrens, guru , ani and now geet, so many childrens. why god playing with these small buds, wat sin they did, coz of they families , they are suffering. he had tears in his eyes, and went to his room

AT NIGHT ,

Guru was feeding ani, that geet to open her mouth to guru to fed her, guru feeds her..after that they went to sleep, guru made geet in separate bed and went to his bed holding ani, after sometime, he felt a weight on him, .he opens his eys and see that geet also lying on him,he smiles at her and kissed her forehead and slept holding geet and ani in his arms. In this way these 3 angels started to live they lie in heaven..

Same time, in dehli Maan started to live his life in hell, changing himself as a devil.he started to hate everything.as dadi cant spend time with, she gives watever he wants.so maan thoughts, that he can get watever he likes with his money,..he is became a total spoil brat..he is not mingling with his friends and changed too arrogant

PRECAP : AFTER 20 YEARS.

past painfull rahul bast... gurmeet geet annie scene fab maan turning to devil