My FIRST EVER AR OS : SACCHA PYAAR.

Armaan : kya hua basket tum ro kyun rahi ho ?
Riddhima : armaan main bas humaare future ke baare mein soch kar dar rahi hoon.
Armaan : par kya hua hai basket ?
Riddhima : apple kal maine dad se poocha ki kya woh love marriage ko kabhi approval denge? Just generally.
To unhone kaha ki he would rather kill his daughters if they even think of love marriages.
Armaan : kya ? Itne modern time ke itne bade doctor hokar bhi how narrowminded he is ?
Riddhima : but apple main tumhaare bagair jeene ka soch bhi nahin sakti .(again started crying )
Armaan: toh kya main jee paayunga tumhaare bina ...
Par kuch na kuch toh karna padega.
Riddhima : par kya jaan.
Armaan tum bas dekhti jaao .apne apple par bharosa to hain naa tumhe ?
Riddhima: apni jaan se bhi jyaada..
NEXT DAY IN SANJEEVANI
Dr.shanky: armaan iss carelessness ke liye aapko 10 din suspension .
Armaan: sir but but ...ye maine nahin kiya ..maine iss pateint ka medication nahin change kiya sir ..



Dr. Shanky : armaan tumhare medication change karne ke kaaran hi yeh patient ke right side ki body paralyse ho gayi hai ..
Armaan: sir but..
Dr.shanky: shut up !
Armaan's eyes become red completely .
Someone stading behind the door with a cunning smile ...but who?

IN NIGHT
Riddhima called armaan
Riddhima : armaan ye kya ho gaya ?
Armaan: maine aisa kuch nahin kiya basket
main kya karun dr. Shashank toh meri baato ka vishwaas hi nahin kar rahe .main kyun kisi patient ki jaan lena chahunga...crying bitterly
Riddhima : main jaanti ho apple tum aisa nahin kar sakte but iss incidence ne toh humaare future ko bhi andhere mein dhakel diya hai .ab toh papa tumhe dekhna bhi nahin chahenge ..ab kya karenge
Armaan: basket tum fikr mat karo main kuch try karta hun .
Riddhima : plzz apple apna dhyaan rakhna .kuch aisi waisi harkat mat karna ..i love u apple .
Some body at the door .
Riddhima ...shout
mobile fell down from her hand it was her dad .dr. Shanky redialed the last called no.

And yes he came to know it was armaan
now life become hell for both armaan and riddhima

shanky trying to get ridzy married as soon as possible .
Then his mind struck on the person who made him aware about the wrong medication change by armaan and the person who took over the charge of patient and did his successfull treatment he is none other than Dr.siddhant modi.
Dr.shanky: riddhima kal tumhaari sagaai hai sid ke saath
Riddhima: but dad main toh armaan se pyaar karti hun.
Dr. Shanky: shut up!! I dont want to hear anything .
Riddhima left the place crying
Atul: yaar ammy kal ridzy ki sagaai hai sid ke saath
Armaan: kya ??
Armaan entered riddhima's house in full disguise in burqa
Apple sees his basket crying out her heart standing near window
then slowly he put his hand round her waist
riddhima softly said ''armaan ''
haan basket main hoon
ab tum meri baat dhyaan se suno tum choop chap sid se sagaai kar lo . Shaadi se pehle main apni begunaahi saabit kar doonga dr.Shashank Ke saamne aur main unse pray karoonga ki woh tumhaari shaadi mere saath karwaa de
Riddhima: armaan main aisa nahin kar sakti main sirf tumhaari hoon sirf tumhaari .main apni jaan de doongi
armaan puts his finger on her lips
Armaan: nahin riddhima aisa nahin kehte waise tumhaari jaan toh mere paas hai iss par sirf mera haq hai ...their forehead stuck each other and they were sobbing bitterly
then ammy puts out a ring from his pocket and placed it in riddhima's wedding finger .and put his lips on her .and said love u basket mallik
ab ho gayi tumhaari sagaai ab woh khoothi sagaai mere liye koi maayne nahin rakhti .
And he swiftly flew away from there before anyone could see him
as per ammy's advice ridzy engaged with sid
NEXT DAY TO THEIR ENGAGEMENT
Riddhima was sleeping peacefully in her room remembering AR's first kiss and engagement
suddenly she felt someone in her room
she jumped off her bed and see sid there .


Riddhima: tum yahan??
Sid slowly closed the door from inside start unbuttoning his shirt and move slowly close to riddhima and throws off her dupatta .and grabbed her tightly
riddhima just pushed him back with all his strength and ran away from his his grip . She ran here and there in the room
sid: ab bach ke kahan jaaogi ?

Here in sanjeevani armaan sneaked into the records room were cctv footages are kept . After frantic search he found the cctv footage of the day when medication change incident took place he was shocked to see sid there doing some tampering with patient' report and injected some medicine ..and then he see sid laughing and saying
sid: armaan mallik u r finished . Ab dekhta hoon kaise rahte ho tum riddhima ke paas .kaun bachayega tumhe dr shashank ke gusse ke kahar se
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sid: armaan mallik u r finished . Ab dekhta hoon kaise rahte ho tum riddhima ke paas .kaun bachayega tumhe dr shashank ke gusse ke kahar se ...
Ab mere aur riddhima ke beech ka sabse bada kaanta saaf .
Ab toh riddhima ki body sirf meri hogi. Meri dill ki pyaas ab toh riddhima ko paakara hi boojhegi ussne mujhe nahin armaan ko choona main toh uski life barbaad ka doonga
after seeing all this whole story becomes clear in his mind .

He took his bike and the CD of cctv footage and raced to riddhima's house continuously calling her mobile no. But unreachable

sid broke her mobile when she was trying to call armaan .
Sid : ab toh armaan bhi tumhe mujhse nahin bacha sakta ..
He put riddhima on bed and put himself upon her but riddhima jerked him off away .

She ran away from his grip .then sid throw her away in anger her head struck to the bed's corner very hard everything in front of her become blurred ...but the devil sid still trying to get her body lift her in his arms and put her on bed .after injury she becomes weak and could not resist more and sid placed himself upon her crushing her body agaist him and tore the sleeves of her dress .suddenly.
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The window panes were broken off ...yes it was armaan he broke the glass with his hands and pushed sud devil away from her basket kicked him punched him very badly ..sid was cribbing for help ,,
suddenly the door was slammed by other family members from outside .
Shashank move ahead towards armaan and slapped him hard .when he was trying to hit armaan again his hands were pulled back by riddhima

riddhima : aap yeh kya kar rahe hai jis insaan ne aapki beti ki aur aapki izzat bacahyi uss par haath utha rahe hai aur jisne aapki beti ki izzat lootne ki koshish ki usse izzat de rahe hai .
Dr . Shashank was shocked what the hell riddhima is saying abt sid ?.
Dr.shanky : riddhima ye kya bak rahi ho ?
Riddhima: sach bol rahi hoon dad. Sid tried to assault me .
Armaan : sir ye lijiye ye CD aapko saari sachai bataa dega ...
When armaan was handing over the CD then blood from his hand dropped to the head of riddhima.
Riddhima ki maang toh armaan ke khoon se bhar gayi ..yeh baat riddhima ne toh mehsoos kar liya aur man hi man muskoora uthi ..

Shashank in anger played the CD .THEN
A hard slap on sid 's face and said sid kal se aap sanjeevani ka hissaNahin hai aur aapka resignation aapko mil jaayega .and he took riddhima ' s hand and took out the enagagement ring of sid and threw it on his face ..and then .
Shashank just fallen on armaan's feet .
Armaan lift him up .:
armaan: dr. Shashank ye aap kya kar rahe hai?
Dr. Shanky: armaan mujhe maaf kar do main tumhaare aur riddhima ke pyaar ko samajh hi nahin paaya .main kitna galat tha .aur aaj main samjh gaya hum ki sachhe pyaar mein kitni taaqat hoti hai .pyaar ke bal par poori duniya ko jeeta jaa sakta hai .armaan beta mujhe maaf kar do .plzz.
Armaan : dr. Shashank aap mujhse bade hai aur yeh humaare sanskaar mein nahin ki main badon ko maaf kar sakoon muje toh bas aapka ashirvad chahiye
dr.shashank ; ek shart par main tumhaari shaadi riddhima se karwaa doonga
armaan: kya sir ? Shart!!
Dr. Shashank: yehi ki tum mujhe dr. Shashank nahin papa bulaaoge
armaan: ok dr.sha...sorry opps papa ,
everyone smiled
dr.shashank: kal 9 april ke din armaan aur riddhima ki shaadi ...
Armaan looked towards riddhima and winked .she blushed and he said OYYEHOYYE .

After marriage
riddhima sitting on the bed fully decorated with red rose petals ...whole room was decorated with candles and roses and orchids ..

It was full moon day .the room was lightend by moonlight

armaan entered the room .he slowly closed the door and moved towards riddhima .
And sit besides her
armaan: basket .
Riddhima: haan apple
armaan : main kya tumhaara ghoonghat utha sakta hoon .
Riddhima: meri jaan ko permission ki jaroorat kab se padhne lagi .
Armaan : oyye hoyye main marjaawa .
Riddhima blushed ..
Armaan move towards her and uplift her veil and said : chand chal hat tujhe to jal kar bhasm ho jaana chahiye ye dekhkar ki meri basket toh tumse bhi khoob soorat hai ..

Riddhima smiled
and armaan just kissed her on her cheeks then on her earlobes removing her earrings and riddhima just hugged him tighty he just pened the doris of her choli .and untied the necklace. Riddhia just opened the buttons of his kurta and make him free from it to feel the perfect body by her lips and fingers.armaan just become more passionate after riddhima's this step .he just throws himself upon him and kissed her in her neckline ..and wherever he wanted .he then put on the sheet upon them and slept in each other's embrace .
In the morning riddhima was trying to get uo but see herself in the same sheet of armaan ..and she just blushed .and then move towards armaan who was sleeping just like a kid and kissed his cheeks

.suddenly apple moved his face and the kiss fell on his lips ...the perfect lip lock ...

They spent their life like this but one day. After 1 year
riddhima fell from the stairs .armaan becomes tensed
just then doctor said that riddhima is 1 month pregnant .then armaan lifted her in his hands and kissed her so lovingly and passionately ...
Armaan: basket u completed my life
riddhima: i love u my apple
armaan: mujhe ek beti chahiye bilkun tumhaari tarah
riddhima: mujhe ek beta chahiye bilkool tumhaari tarah .
Armaan; beti
riddhima: beta
riddhima : uska naam kya hoga ?
Armaan : arima
riddhima : beta hua toh ridhaan

after eight months riddhima gives birth to arima .she has just the two perfect eyes like armaan dimples like armaan ...and smile like riddhima
4 years later
armaan and riddhima were in their bedroom just in each other's arms ..
Armaan was kissing riddhima suddenly
they heard some body
arima : dadda ye kya kar rahe ho ?
Armaan: angel aapke liye ek bhaai lane ki tayari kar raha hoon .
Arima: toh continue karo
aur arima goes..
riddhima hit armaan's chest and said
riddhima: arey ab toh kuch sharam karo.ek beti ke baap ho.
Armaan: aap jaise sundar biwi ho toh besharmi humaara birth right hi jaata hai .
Aur waise bhi ab kya sharmaana ab toh beti ki bhi permission mil gayi hai continue karne ki ...
Riddhima : tum nahin sudharoge and kissed him
armaan : aise sudhaarogi toh kabhi nahin sudharoonga. And kissed her with equal passion ...and they live in each other's embrace .

Love u karan singh grover

hope u like it

it was my first ever try in the field of creation.

Wow man wow !! I actually read the whole stuff !!...seemed i was viewing those 80s hindi commercial flicks ...all the masalas were present !!! & Sids saying '' ab Riddhima ki body sirf mera hoga '' wah bhai wah ...what a line ! But mate u shd ve given a more dramatic entry to Armaan ...y use his hand to break the window when he was on a bike? He shd ve entered with his bike breaking the window & ride it over Sid ! ...& then say '' Yo basket yeh lo aa gaya tumhari Apple ...ab is kutte ki khair nahi '' !...( pls pardon my bad hindi ) & Riddhima saying '' mujhe pata tha tum aaoge meri Apple '' !

Originally posted by: Hail_Van_Helsin

Wow man wow !! I actually read the whole stuff !!...seemedi was viewing those 80s hindi commercial flicks ...all the masalas were present !!! & Sidssaying '' ab Riddhima ki body sirf mera hoga '' wah bhai wah ...what a line ! But mate u shd ve given a more dramatic entry to Armaan ...y use his hand to break the window when he was on a bike? He shd ve entered with his bike breaking the window & ride it over Sid ! ...& then say '' Yo basket yeh lo aa gaya tumhari Apple ...ab is kutte ki khair nahi '' !...( pls pardon my bad hindi ) & Riddhima saying '' mujhe pata tha tum aaoge meri Apple ''!

Suhagraat part ...simply mindblowing ...but y did u stop after they got under the sheets ...ouch tht was the main part ...u shd ve explained how Arima was born ! ...& then Armaan telling Arima '' angel aapke liye ek bhai lane ki tayari kar raha hu '' & Arima replying ''toh continue karo !'' u get my full thumbs up man !!! Arima is such a sweetheart & understanding kid !!! & wat more she was born within 8 mnths !!! no signs of prematurity !!!! The date chosen fr Apple & Baskets wedding was also very cleverly put in ...9th April ! clever thinking !

U shd continue writing OS ...& this was yr frst !!...i just cant wait to read the OSs tht u r going to write after u becum a pro !!!...man oh man supaexcited !!!!

hey thanxx for liking it ..but i m really confused on ur comment .u r really saying it was good or just mocking .
Waise let me tell u riddhima was 1 month pregnant so 9-1 =8 ..simple maths..man

anyways thanxx a ton for encouraging me

nice os
lovely...AR's romance was awsome
keep writing...

Originally posted by: sgksg

hey thanxx for liking it ..but i m really confused on ur comment .u r really saying it was good or just mocking .
Waise let me tell u riddhima was 1 month pregnant so 9-1 =8 ..simple maths..man

anyways thanxx a ton for encouraging me

Originally posted by: Hail_Van_Helsin

sorry fr the late reply mate !...wasnt online...anyways simple maths huh ! hell stupid me ...y didnt I utd such a simple calculation !!! sorry sorry !

& I was absolutely nt mocking u ! ...did my comnts sound like tht ! ...dont be confused !

Only the Armaan entry part ...u cud ve added more spicy lines ...like punching , kicking Sid those things were o.k but he cud ve mouthed more lines like ...'' Yehlay kameenay ...aa gaya main Armaan ...ab karunga tera dhulai banke main Salmaan ...dhinka chika dhinka chika dhinka chika re '' ! again pardon me ...my hindi is awefull ! & Shanky falling at Armaans feet ...wow wat a scene ! ...by now u mst be assured Im not mocking u ...see how minutely I read each & every word !

& btw u shd PM my gud frnd Moeen...he goes by the i.d krazykiller ...if u knw him then pls do PM him ...i m sure hes going to enjoy yr OS very much !

Continue writing OS ...I can guarantee u I will surely read them & comment !

& one last thing ...I am sure ur satisfied with wat u wrote ... then thts the most imp thing !!!

any way thanxxx alottt .i will take care of ur advice and will add more and more spice in my next os .
And yes moeen is also a good freind of mine and i will surely do a pm to him .

Nice OS. You should try writing more.

Thanxxx yaaron for encouraging me .
I am thankfull that u all bear my idiotic writing ...but promise that the next ever os written by me will be full of romance masti and fun .
Thanxxx a ton for liking it