My FIRST EVER AR OS : SACCHA PYAAR. - Page 2

Originally posted by: Hail_Van_Helsin

@ bold what was that dude 🤣🤣🤣🤣 never knew you write such super hit dialogues .😉😆

@TM You know since Hail Van Helsin has encouraged you the most I think you should always PM him as soon as you write any FFs or OS . I think he will be more than pleased .

I also read your OS nd I think you need to improve a lot. Please no offense meant. But one thing I loved is Sid ki pitai nd him as a negative character. I read some of the AR ffs nd I see though its AR luvstory but still Sid is portrayed as a good human being. But not so in the case of SR ffs . There Armaan is usually a selfish, psycho & totally evil guy. So I stopped reading the SR ffs. But you turned him evil . Now when you write the next one make him the most heinious guy & get him beaten by Armaan black nd blue.

PS Any help reqd for dialogues please take the help of Van Helsin 😉😆😆