SwaRon SS--Hopes and Desires! Last part on pg 60. - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
heyya...!!
please please please please continue this awesome OS..we cant really afford to miss this
this one is the cutest OS I have ever read so please continue and do pm me wenever u write anything about SwaRon😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Super cute os
Pm me if u continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
hey surbhi firstly sry for bieng late...
abt os it was mindblowing...luvd it...poor swayum...hehehe hw can he sleep on their first night lol...update soon dear..ho sake to aaj
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
sorry, i know i m late!!!!
sharon note made me laughed!!! swayam bichara😆...
hey do continue i would loved to read it!!! it was amazing!!! thanks 4 pm!! & update soon...
ps: my like tab is not working!!! will hit it when it will work!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Ok i dunno how i missed this one ...so first of all sorry for commenting so late...well this is indeed very cute OS.

Naughty Sharon is a treat to watch...poor Swayam and he slept on first night. I say he deserves it 😆

P.S Surbhi do continue and thnx for the PM 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron


Poor swayam I really pity him 😆
Sharon's note was hilarious 😆 🤣
Please turn it into ss



Thanx for commenting..! 😊
yea i vil convert it..!


Originally posted by: ABBY92


LOL...That was a hilarious ending !! And how dare he sleep on his first night with Sharon !! I just loved the whole thing !!



Thank you so much Abby!! 😃

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon


Is there any possibility of making this an SS :P Plzzz. Sonal and Surbhi you have done a wonderful job yaar. The description of swaron dressing was so vivid and I felt they are standing in front of me. Poor swayam he wanted to make his princess talk to him and hahahaha on their first night swayam slept 😆 no wonder she is angry with him 😆😆. surbhiii plz make it an ss plz plz nahi tho teri thread and in box spam karungi.



Awww..thank youu suku!!! 😃
haha plzz dhamki mat de... 😭
i vil convert it into an SS!!

Originally posted by: neetha


res🥳

unres

🤣🤣🤣🤣thank god ma mom is in neighbors house...warna she wud think tat i hav lost ma brain ka screw..🤣🤣🤣

the start was awesome..i was like awwiee..so romantic ma swayam is...how cutely sharon ko mana raha hai...

n the last line

He grabbed it and it read—"Baby if you hadn't slept like a horse on our first night maybe I would have fixed something else too!!"

i started roflin...🤣🤣

only swayam can be this unpredictable..🤣🤣

hats off to u n sonal...amazin concept..woow yaar do make it a ss..plss mere khatir😳



Hahahaha ur brain is precious neetha..dun loose itt!!v😆
thank youu soo much re!!
and yea..i vil make it an SS...tere khaatir 😳

Originally posted by: troublemagnet


Lol..😆

Poor Swayum ..:P

Nice OS :)



Thank you! 😊

Originally posted by: tanukaswaron


awesome os surbhi and sonal !!

naughty sharon and swayam try to manofying sharon was realy nice. :D
if possible plzz convert this os into a ss .



Thank you so much tanuka! 😊
yea sure we vil make it an SS!


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Posted: 13 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: damonelena

Awww...Poor Swayam. :)

I hope now that he knows the reason, he would try to fix it :) :P
Update d next one soon. :D



Thanx for commenting sneha! 😊
ya i vil update soon!


Originally posted by: Swayamd3


Hahahahha!
all the expectations flew Away!!
Hey pretty please Turn it into an OS!! :D



Thanx a lot arshak for commenting...an excellent writer's appreciation is overwhelming! 😃
lol..OS toh already h..i vil convert it into an SS!

Originally posted by: kool kanz


plzz make it an ss soon...v love 2 watch swaron lyk dis..poor swayam and naughty sharon...



Thanx for commenting..! 😊
i vil make it an ss!


[QUOTE=]
NIce one... Naughty sharon and pleading sharon were a treat!! do coti nue and pm me !!
[/QUOTE]

Thank you so much nehal for commenting! I am glad dat u lykd it! 😊
yea i vil surely pm you!


Originally posted by: booksfreak07


Hahaha
The ending was soo funny, I really liked it.



Thank you so much for liking and commenting!
I am glad you liked it! 😃


Originally posted by: meevee


Ha ha ha😊I sure want to read the next part to this, pls make this an SS...Sonal & Surbhi, awsumly written...a nice start, and when u hav that, I'm sure u can definitely capitalize on it...I luvd the humor to bits...



Thank you soo much meera for the encouragement! 😃
Really glad dat u liked it! 😊
yea i vil make it an SS soon!

Originally posted by: shaani2209


Awesome one..do continue..thanks for the pm surbhi...



Thank youu rosh! 😊

Originally posted by: angelofdeathkav


Thank you for the PM Surbhi

I loved the OS!!!!! amazing please continue 😊


Thank youu so much kavi! 😃
I am glad dat u liked it!
i vil surely continue! 😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: tanzz15

Naughty Sharon haan??lykd it vry much,plz mke it an ss..pm me if u update..;)



Thank you and i am glad dat u liked it! 😊
nd yes i vil pm u!


Originally posted by: frankyfio

woow
loved it
do write more n pm me



Thank you so much for liking and commenting! 😊
i vil pm u surely!


Originally posted by: kritzzz_ArSha

amazing do continue it to ss wud luv to read



Thank you for commenting and liking..😊
ya i vil continue it for sure!


Originally posted by: shreyasi28

Thnx fr d pm!!! Awsum OS!! Bechara swayam!!! D touch of fun was grt!! Lovd it!! Kip writing more!!



Thank you shreyasi..glad u lykd it..!! 😊
means a lot!


Originally posted by: jumrulzz

A SERIOUS AMAZING UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DUDE YU BETTTER CNVERT DIS INTO AN SS!!!!
ITS SERIOUSLY AMAZING! :D
IF U TAKE A CENTURY NA..
i will KILL u! 😆🤣

But not officiallly.. ! ☺️!!
kyunki Dis SS is SERIOUSLY beautifulll.. ❤️



Awww...kitni pyaari dhamki di hai jum!! 😃
haayyyeee..aansu aa gye mere..LOL..! 😭
😆
ya i vil convert it for sure...
thank you for liking it mahn! 😊

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK

Good one Surbhi loved this naughty Sharon, and poor Swayam 😆
Waiting for the next update.



Thank you so much sudha for commenting! 😃
It means a lot!



Thank you! 😊


Originally posted by: tashu20

awesome...loved it...do continue it😊



Thanx a lot! 😊
ya i vil def continue it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: mahirahmarium

heyya...!!

please please please please continue this awesome OS..we cant really afford to miss this
this one is the cutest OS I have ever read so please continue and do pm me wenever u write anything about SwaRon😳



Aww..thank youu soo muxh for the amazing comment! 😃
ya i vil surely pm you mahn!
thanx agaiin! 😊

Originally posted by: chimpukli10

hey nyc OS dear..do continue and pm me once you update..



Thank you vaishnavi.. 😊
nd i vil surely pm u!


Originally posted by: D3rocksss

Super cute os
Pm me if u continue



Thank you for liking n commenting! 😊
ya i vil def pm u!


Originally posted by: Luvsd3

hey surbhi firstly sry for bieng late...
abt os it was mindblowing...luvd it...poor swayum...hehehe hw can he sleep on their first night lol...update soon dear..ho sake to aaj



Thank you soo much himani..! 😃
nd dun say sry mahn..relax! 😊
nd i vil update it soon!

Originally posted by: swayamsharon

sorry, i know i m late!!!!
sharon note made me laughed!!! swayam bichara😆...
hey do continue i would loved to read it!!! it was amazing!!! thanks 4 pm!! & update soon...
ps: my like tab is not working!!! will hit it when it will work!!!



Thank you shree for liking nd commenting!! 😃
I am glad that you liked itt!
ya like tab ws behaving weird yestrday! dun bother! 😊


Originally posted by: AmritaluvSwaRon

Ok i dunno how i missed this one ...so first of all sorry for commenting so late...well this is indeed very cute OS.


Naughty Sharon is a treat to watch...poor Swayam and he slept on first night. I say he deserves it 😆

P.S Surbhi do continue and thnx for the PM 😊



Thank you so much amu di for the appreciation! 😃
and dun b sry its totally fine!!
yea i vil surely pm you! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Wow it was an awsum OS👍🏼I like it very much keep posting...👏

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