SwaRon SS--Hopes and Desires! Last part on pg 60.

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beeny

@beeny

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

hey forgot to add
plz do next update soon 'm waiting😃

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Satnam

@Satluvsd3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

surbhi!!! 🤗
well i actually didnt read your SS!!!!!at first...
so got your pm and finally i am freee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😉
so i thought why not start reading 4m today!!!!!!!!!!!
lovely SS!!!!!!!!!!
the 1st part was awesome... poor swayam couldnt make his sharon smile!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆
and 2nd part OMG!!!!our shekhawat mastermind has got a list of ideas to bring a "smile-to die-for" on his SHARON's face
from not-so-meeting of the two palms to
playing phela nasha...😳😳
n the way you presented their thoughts!!
amazing job!! ⭐️ 👏
loved the whole thought convo 😳😆
and finally sharon changing the song to "tum toh tehere pardesi"
lmaooo!!!!!!!!!!! 🤣 couldnt stop laughing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
awww poor swayam!!! 😆
update soon surbhi !!!!!!!
cant wait for the next part!! 😉

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Sreya Roy

@sreya19roy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

OMG 🤣

U R IMPOSSIBLE...this is undoubtedly one of the most HILARIOUS update I've ever read 🤣 🤣 🤣

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Surbhi thnx for turning this into an SS 😊

Swayam Shekhawat how could you sleep on your wedding night and defi he is going to face the consequences. Sharon' reaction when she heard Pehla Nasha and started gawking at him was so cute... mentally cursing herself for staring at him.

OMG she chose nothing else but "Tum toh there pardesi" 🤣 🤣

Awesome update surbhi...update soon and thank you for PM

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tashu20

@tashu20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

thanx for continue it as ss...😊

awesome update...loved it...!!!

poor swayam trying his level best for manofying her but smart sharon😎

& tum toh tehre pardesi😆😆

thanx for pm

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

A big hug from my side for converting this os into a ss🤗

love u for this .

Awesome update surbhi !!

very nicely written 😃

loved how bechara swayam was trying his level best to manophy his wife.

sharon ka bhi jawab nahi , she smartly dismisses all of swayams attempts😆.

sharons answer to swayams pehla nasha was amazingly funny 🤣 🤣

will be waiting for the next part , update soon...

thanks for the pm.

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swayamsharon

@swayamsharon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

thanks 4 converting os into ss!!
lovely update!!!
loved swayam played pehla nasha & blushed, & sharon says his husband will never change!!!
did diva sharon know this type of song, i think swayam ka hi asar hai, but song was truly hilarious🤣...
thanks 4 pm & update nexta soon..