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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome Megha👏😊...update sooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice story so far! Hopefully nothing happens to Riya!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi friends thanks a lot for ur nice comments…… and here is the last part of this ss. Plz comment this time and tell me how was it overall as a story.
PART 4
Rathore, shree and Chotu begin to ask the questions from the girls.
Shree: Aap please humein ye batayenge ki vo log kahan ho sakte hain is jagah par………..
All the girls were crying………. Then one of them replied, pata nahin humeinn to raat ko uthakar ye log pata nahin kab utha le aaye aur phir………. Yahan lakar band kar diya. Par aaj tak is room se agar kisi ko bahr lekar gaye to phir vo vapis nahin aata…….pata nahin khan chale jaate hain?
Ananya: Tantrik unki bali deta hai……….. un logon ke saath milkar jo uske paas apni problems ke liye aate hain.
Rathore: Humein yahan se nikalna padega, shree tum yahan par inka dhyan rakho, main aur chotu dekhte hain ki kahin vo log bhaag na jaayen.
Shree: Yes sir.
On the other hand Arjun went inside that hole, and on walking further, he found himself close to a room……. Then he heard some noises. He tried to find his gun……..but it was fallen somewhere." Oh no! now I have to be careful, first let me see what's going on here". Arjun thought and carefully looked here and there……………. Then he peeped in the hall where he saw the politician, that baba, his female disciple, and other disciple. He noted that except the baba everybody's face was covered.
"Beta jao aur vo kamre mein se pavitra hawan samagri le aayo……" baba ordered to his disciple.
He immediately went ………
And as he came outside, he held his mouth, and one quiet blow by Arjun was enough for him to see the stars in the daylight.
On the other side…….chotu and rathore came back in the basement…
Suddenly……. Rathore noticed something.
"Chotu come here, come here" Rathore said in an astonishment.
"What sir…….." chotu was surprised like hell………… there was a staircase leading them downstairs.
"We have to go" Rathore said and chotu followed him.
In the room, arjun changed his clothes and wore the disciple's clothes, it didn't took him long as it was just a lungi ( a sarong kind of traditional dress for men in india) and then covered his face with a piece of long cloth, which luckily was covering most of his shirtless body, so less chances of being recognized. Suddenly he heard riya's cry which made him shudder, he quickly picked up lemon, hawan samgri and ran into the hall.
There baba had pulled out riya's finger nails. Arjun eyes were almost moist……………. But he controlled himself and quietly gave him the things.
Baba: Ab aap is nimbu ko isi chaku se katiye, aur iske ras ko is ladki ki ungliyon par lagaiye.
Politician does the same…….. riya's heart touching screams vibrate everything in the room.
"Nahin nahin…….. chodo mujhe…… plz plz" riya was repeating the same words again and again.
"Beta ab ise kamre mein lekar jao…….. aur itne dinon ki sewa ka phal tumhe aaj milega…… aaj tum is bali ki shuruat karoge." Baba ordered arjun, unaware of the fact that his 'disciple' was not happy at this offer, but was feeling as if someone was tearing his heart into bits. But then he asked him 'tum kamzor to nahin padoge………..in cheekhon se vichlit to nahin hoge?'
'Aap pareeksha le sakte hain.' Arjun sensed the danger and replied.
" Nahin bas pooch rahe the…….. ab ise lekar jayo." Baba replied.
On the other side downstairs…… rathore and chotu were to reach the hall………..but it wasn't the secret way, there were goons who were ready to pounce upon them.
Riya was screaming hard, but Arjun dragged her in the room and quickly shut the door behind him.
"Stay away……. Stay away………jao plz let me go……" she was too fragile and weak right now and wasn't able to do anything except screaming, crying and pleading. Moreover her pulled out nails, and lemon juice was burning her fingers like hell. She was never tormented in her life so much……… she was thinking that it would have been better if she would died earlier. When arjun saw her, he felt like crying, he couldn't believe that it was the same riya, riya mukherjee, her smiling, confident attractive face came before his eyes. He stepped forward, looked at riya, she tried to move backwards but he held her by her shoulders while she tried constantly to push him away. It was then he looked into her beautiful eyes, usually he avoided it, bcz there was something mesmerizing, distractive about her eyes. But today….
"Riya….. riya………relax relax…..look it's me main……… main hoon……. Arjun…….plz plz look up…….."he said and uncovered his face by removing the cloth.
"Ar………" she was about to say in wonder but he put his hands on her face to prevent saying anything which could be dangerous for her, if they would had heard anything, then there would be definitely a problem. Even without his gun, he could have handled them but until riya was here in this condition, his hands were tied.He had made up his mind……….. now I won't let anybody to harm her anymore. And just then the next moment………….. she hugged him as tightly as she could …….. leaving no distance between them and cried wildly; after 72 hrs. of loneliness, tortures and torments, she felt so safe with him, close to him, in his arms, with him. ………. Her tears rolled down her cheeks uncontrollably and then on his shirtless back……… He put his hand on her waist and other hand to bring her face close to him. He could feel her pain, he felt as if someone is piercing his body as riya cried on his shoulders, her tears which rolled on his back felt like burning acid to him. He felt like crying, his eyes were moist then he hugged her back and then…….. it seemed as if the world stopped, there were no desires left, both of them felt like heaven in the embrace. Then he came back to his senses and said "Riya……..riya it's fine………. Everything is gonna be okay……..fine….i'm here na I'm here na………don't worry please…….. stop crying." Then he heard loud noises outside in the hall, so he comforted riya, left her in the room and rushed outside. When he saw the scenario, he felt a satisfaction inside him. Rathore and chotu were beating the baba, politician and his disciples like hell…….. He also pounced on the baba and started beating crap out of him…. His blows getting fiercer and fiercer as he remembered riya's scream and how he pulled out her nails……… he had seen her beautiful fingers without nails and bleeding……….and tears on her face and the pain.
Suddenly they heard riya's scream and all were frozen. The disciple whom arjun had beaten and changed his clothes, was there reviving his sense and holding riya with a dagger on her neck………….. Everybody's breath was stopped……. Arjun was enraged more than anything…. And the way he was holding her was also so merciless and why he was holding her like that….. his one hand was on her bare waist…….. with an evil animalistic smile……...his face was so close to riya's face, completely touching it…… he was completely infuriated.
"Ab sab apni apni jagah par raho………. Aur humein jaane do varna iski laash lekar jaoge…….." he said.
Politician and baba started to ran from there when arjun quickly picked up a knive and threw it at the guy's leg……..as usual he didn't missed and he cried in pain and left riya as he tried to run with his injured leg. Rathore and chotu followed them up, riya was about to fall when arjun's arms held her………. He picked her up and went inside the room, and made her sit comfortably on the couch…. He was confused a little bit when he saw extreme pain on her face but not when he saw her waist……… when that guy was falling, the knife had cut her waist….. blood was streaming from there…….. he was just shocked……. How much pain she has seen, felt in past 72 hrs…. He went, stroked her hair, calmed her down, held her face and said "everything is gonna be alright now……….. everything."
Riya was still scared…… she was literally shivering……… arjun held her hand and tried to comforted her. He pressed her waist hard to stop the blood…….and tied a cloth on her waist, and sat beside her…….
After two hrs………..
Police was also there and then shree, rathore and chotu entered in the room……….. when they saw riya, they also felt pain. Everybody felt happy too as riya was safe…….
When police checked further it was revealed that it was a group of dhongi baba, who promised success in everything through their black magic and necromancy. It involved tortures, sacrifices etc….. When they checked the accounts…… they found 49 crore in only baba's account, jewels worth 20 crore and other things too….
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it's very beautiful... N was very nice...
Not a complaint dear, but why in each and every OS i read, every1 was torturing, raping or hurting our Riya😆
Waiting for your next story impatiently though...
N finally one day left, tomoro's saturday n finally we can watch Arjun😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: haruhi26

it's very beautiful... N was very nice...

Not a complaint dear, but why in each and every OS i read, every1 was torturing, raping or hurting our Riya😆
Waiting for your next story impatiently though...
N finally one day left, tomoro's saturday n finally we can watch Arjun😉



Bcz she's the soft spot of our crush... ARJUN... thanks for ur compliments😊

And yeah me too waiting for arjun...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetdoc

Wen r u updatin next.



it has been finished... the story is over now
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ok... 😔 ..will u write anth one?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetdoc

Ok... 😔 ..will u write anth one?



yeah..sure dont worry... i'm addicted to them😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: meghasingh



Bcz she's the soft spot of our crush... ARJUN... thanks for ur compliments😊

And yeah me too waiting for arjun...

yep she is z soft spot😳... when you gonna write your next one?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: haruhi26

yep she is z soft spot😳... when you gonna write your next one?



I'm working on it... u guys will be able to read it before sunday for sure...

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