MYSTERIOUS... SS part 4 Pg 5

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scorp1AN

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

beautiful! arjun's care for riya! the pain he felt for riya! awesome! hope to see more of arjun and riya's scenes! please update soon! i am really in love with all the updates! gosh... this is freaking interesting! i really really love it!

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salta

@salta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: arul01
beautiful! arjun's care for riya! the pain he felt for riya! awesome! hope to see more of arjun and riya's scenes! please update soon! i am really in love with all the updates! gosh... this is freaking interesting! i really really love it!

Thanks for loving so much but guys it's the last part of this ss. But i'm def. gonna write more on ariya.

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mushiroxx

@mushiroxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

loved the ending...awww riya's nails... that was horrible...but im glad that arjun felt riya's pain n consoled her, held her in his arms...

the story was really good n the case u chose was bang on...it's a burning issue...such dhongi babas r so common n some dumb people go to them coz they think taht their problems will be solved but in reality they put their own lives at stake...😒 hope such culprits r removed from the society...😡 n ur effort was gr8 yaar...👏
loved ur SS n will be waiting for a new one...😆greedy u know...🤣

so excited for tomorrow...my ariya will be back n that too in full tashan...

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salta

@salta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: mushiroxx
loved the ending...awww riya's nails... that was horrible...but im glad that arjun felt riya's pain n consoled her, held her in his arms...
the story was really good n the case u chose was bang on...it's a burning issue...such dhongi babas r so common n some dumb people go to them coz they think taht their problems will be solved but in reality they put their own lives at stake...😒 hope such culprits r removed from the society...😡 n ur effort was gr8 yaar...👏
loved ur SS n will be waiting for a new one...😆greedy u know...🤣
so excited for tomorrow...my ariya will be back n that too in full tashan...

Thanks a lot for ur awesome comments...made my morning😊

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pravallika

@prava55663

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

good story waiting for the next...Plzz do PM me when you begin next story..

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Priyavishu

@priyavishu18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Nice Story Yaar... Add me to u r list ... Waiting for u r Next Update...

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salta

@salta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: priyavishu18
Nice Story Yaar... Add me to u r list ... Waiting for u r Next Update...

the story is over now dear... if u want pm for my next works then send me a friend request.

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

it was so nice and beautifully written

superb

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cooljaya11

@cooljaya11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

it was amazing dear

plz pm me whenever u update next os or ff

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Pisces_Gurl

@Pisces_Gurl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Aawww...the last part b/w arjun n riya was so touching...n teary... 😭
Again waiting to c much of Ariya in the show also...
Grea t imaginations..n u greatly put thm in these updates...

I guess got addicted to ur imaginationz n updats.. 😛