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Hi guys thanks a lot''' for your likes and positive comments. Here's the next part.
MYSTERIOUS: PART 2 (a)
Until then there was no sign of riya or anything about her'. Everybody was tensed like hell..
" Humein ek baar us road par phir se check karna chahiye jahan se riya ko last bar suna tha" Arjun suggested. Everybody agreed and went there for their investigation.
" Jab humne riya ko last bar suna tha, to peeche traffic ki aawaz bahut zyada thi, aur aise mein koi bhi zabardasti use nahin le ja sakta" rathore said.
" Kisi ne road cross karne ka bahana banaya aur phir''.." Shree said.
"Matlab vo ya to koi senior citizen hoga ya phir koi aisa jo blind hone ka natak kar raha hai''.."Chotu said.
"Nahin vo jo bhi hai, blind hone ka natak kar raha tha''."
"Tum ye baat aise kaise keh sakte ho?" rathore asked'.?
"Kyonki rathore koi senior citizen agar hota bhi to bhi vo riya ko jabardasti nahin le ja sakta, aur ek andha insaan ye bole ki mujhe is jagah cho dijiye, to koi use mana nahin karega'''.. riya khud kafi door han tak to zaroor, jab tak ye bheedbhad wala area hai''''samjhe ya samjhayoon?" Arjun explained.
"To humein is area ki phir se checking karni hogi''''.. "Rathore said.
And the ETF started in their investigation. There was a huge area around that place which was quite solitary and with dense jungle. Including Riya 28 girls were missing until now''' it was really a tremendous problem now. When they were in jungle arjun saw something''.
"Rathore'.. Riya yahan par thi''.. yahan laya gaya tha use'' "
"Kya hua'.. saaf saaf bolo" Dekho Rathore''. Arjun showed him a red color hairpin with a flower on it. When arjun held it''. He had a flashback of his first meeting with her as well as other moments with her related to this pin."Ye riya ki hairpin hai'.."
"Matlab riya yahan par ho sakti hai''. Aaspass Humein dekhna hoga"
"Yahan koi na koi building khandhar zaroor hoga'''."
"Aisa kyon" Chotu asked.
"Kyonki bina kisi building ke iss jungle mein koi bhi 28 logon ko kaise rakh sakta hai''"
"Sir Sir dekhiye'''."Shree pointed towards a piece of cloth'''"ye to riya ki jacket ka piece hai'"
"Aur ye riya ne khud jaanbhoojhkar dale hain inko dekhkar saaf pata chal raha hai'''"
"Taki yeh humein rasta bata sakein'''."Rathore completed.

They found such pieces and reached to a place... it was quit a damaged huge palace...everybody was stunned, as well as surprised too...and there was a ray of hope unaware of the fact that it was too late.

Part 2(b)

Guys here is the remained update for today... hope u all enjoy.

All of them quickly entered the place, slowly, quietly''..

"We have to search the whole place''. Arjun tum is side dekho, chotu tum udhar, shree tum upar or main yahan andar dekhta hoon.

On the other hand, in a dark room, riya found herself tied to a chair''' she could hardly breath because of bad smell, and she felt vomiting right then. She tried to remember what has happened, it was still like an incomplete, blurred story in her mind. Then it started to become clear'''When that man who was pretending to be blind, asked me for help, I helped him, actually probably, he was one of the culprits'.. asked me to take him in the jungle, and on the way he fainted me using anesthesia, but I was successful in tricking him, I wasn't completely out of my wits''''.then I tore pieces from my jacket, spread them''. But on reaching somewhere he had doubt that I was in sense'. Then he hit a stick on my head''' and now I even don't know if I am at the same place or not''. And yeah I had seen an earring there''. That means he's the person behind all this''' Riya thought although her head was still aching like hell.

Arjun, Chotu,Shree and Rathore searched the whole place'''all they found out were''. Not the least terrible things or scenes they had ever seen or imagined'''''dried Blood stains, fresh blood stains everywhere, bits of clothes, knives dipped in blood, human bones, body parts like fingers, nails, teeth''' all were in a state of deep shock.

"Kisi insaan nahin monster ka kaam lagta hai''' sir" shree said after analyzing them.

"Saaf saaf kaho shree kya kehna chahte ho, hum sabko pata hai ki ye criminal insaan kehlane layak nahin hai."Arjun said.

"Sir ye sab body parts zinda ladkiyon ke kate, ukhade, tode gaye the''. Possibly torture ka ek tarika'..aur"Shree was having a hard time now''.. he even couldn't talk properly, he was used to see dead bodies, blood etc. but it was the most brutal case he has ever worked on, but the most disturbing thing was that riya could be the victim of this brutality''''' mere thought of this was enough to send shivers down spine for everybody.

"Aur '.. aur kya''shree bolo, humare paas waqt kum hai'''yahan par abhi humein 12 dead bodies mili hain''''matlab abhi16 ladkiyan zinda hain'''..vo job hi hai, dead bodies chod gaya hai or zinda ladkiyon ko le gaya hai'.. hum abhi bhi riya ko bacha sakte hain."

"Sir in sabhi ladkiyon ka repeatedly rape hua hai, zinda rehte hi inke body parts kate gaye hain aur sabhi ki death extremely blood loss se hui hai''.. in sabki bodies mein se kuch internal organs'. Kidney, liver'etc. gayab hain. Organs nikalne ke baad inhe aise hi chod diya gaya hai'' kuch cases mein is condition ke baad bhi rape hai''.. or phir eventually death ho gayi." His voice was choked and everybody could see the pain on each other's face.

"Kisi serial killer ka kaam hai jo ek cannibal bhi hai shayad''." Rathore said.
"Koi aisa jo jaadu mantra mei bhi yakin rakhta hai'''.. hum ye bodies basement mein se lekar aaye hain'.. aur jab maine vahan par checking ki to vahan hawankund, kuch moortiyan, neemboo(lemon) jaise cheezein bhi milin. He explained to everybody.

"Sawal ya hai ki hum use pakde kaise''''. Isse pehle ab kuch aur bura ho jaaye'' humein har halat mein us darinde ko uski jagah pahunchana hoga.
Edited by meghasingh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Guys sorry for so short update... will update next part tiil the evening😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wonderful!! Very very nice... Can't wait to read more... Please update soon! Totally interesting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nyc part...waitin for evening now :):)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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goshhh this is so trilling yaar
i feel so horrible
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

goshhh this is so trilling yaar

i feel so horrible
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Thanks... even i felt terrified when i read it after completing it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very thrilling, waiting for your update😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
plz continue iam waiting...👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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THANKS EVERYBODY...🤗 FOR YOUR NICE FEEDBACK INSTEAD OF ROTTEN TOMATOES EGGS AND JUTE CHAPPALS😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow it's very good and the concept is brilliant. Thank you for sharing.

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