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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG that was scary...😳 hope ETF reaches riya in time...the kidnappers sure r cannibals...😡 arjun help ur love yar...😆
nicely written megha n it's actually scary...👏 well done...update soon...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mushiroxx

OMG that was scary...😳 hope ETF reaches riya in time...the kidnappers sure r cannibals...😡 arjun help ur love yar...😆

nicely written megha n it's actually scary...👏 well done...update soon...😉



Thanks a lot...😊 u know what when i read it, after completing it, even i felt a shrill...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey frndz... here is the part 3. of my ss... dont forget to give ur feedback...my inspiration😊


PART 3

Everybody searched thoroughly the whole place, it was really a tough job for everyone, not because it was a large building, but after seeing the remaining signs of barbarous activities. They felt as if the devil himself has stayed there or it was the deepest circle of Dante's hell.
Suddenly Arjun called Rathore "Rathore, Rathore……… probably humein ek link mil gaya……...look at this" and handed a newspaper to him.
"What's this?" asked Rathore.
" Dhyan se dekho…….. mera doubt sahi nikla…… ye 'dhanvantri' baba ka advertisement…… ho na ho……… yahi baba hai in karnamon ke peeche.." explained Arjun.
"Sir aap bilkul sahi keh rahe hain…. Ye dekhiye alag alag newspaper or sab mein ek similarity hai….. yeh ad, aur to aur contact no. bhi hai……." Chotu said.
" Address to yahan ka nahin hai………… aur ho bhi nahin sakta, par sawal ye hai ki vo abhi kahan ho sakte hain." Rathore said.
" Kahin aaspaas hi hain……. Kuch to choot raha hai rathore…….. is halat mein vo log yahan se door nahin ja sakte………. Iss jungle mein unhe vo rakh nahin sakte, aur bahr niklne ke liye unhe poora jungle cross karna padega……. Unke liye possible nahin hai." Arjun said.
" Yahan to kuch nahin hai………. Par kyonki yeh koi mahal lagta hai, humne aaspaas bhi to kuch toote phoote makan, ghar dekhe the…….. shayad vahan par koi surag mil jaaye." Rathore said.
" Dekhna to padega….." and they ran outwards to check out……… while they didn't noticed that someone was watching them. As they rushed outside the shadow also followed them.
There was a series of small rooms in a line around the place, everybody dispersed in different directions and looked in the rooms. Arjun was looking around the place in the backyard while a misfortune occurred with shree and rathore. They entered a room which was quite larger than that……. And there were girls, fainted, unconscious. While they looked towards them, somebody closed the door.
Shree rushed to the door, and shouted but useless……… Then the girls gained a little bit of consciousness……… Nahin nahin, plz leave me……..leave me papa jane do mujhe………. Aisa kuch nahin hota…….. agar mein mar bhi jati hoon, to usse aapke elections ka kya connection hai……… Suddenly Ananya, daughter of the politician, murmured. Rathore and shree exclaimed, when they went close to her….
"Nahin nahin door raho mujhse………… door raho" she could hardly say these words.
"Relax, relax………… hum un logon mein se nahin hain…….. hum to yahan par culprits ko pakdne aaye hain……ETF se"……… shree went and consoled her. "Believe us hum tum logon ki help ke liye hain……."
"Matlab aap log papa ke liye kaam nahin kar rahe ho…….." Ananya asked.
"Wait a minute……… tumhara matlab…….. ki is sab ke peeche tumhare dad….. Rajkumar chauhan ka haath hai?" rathore asked.
"Haan……… sabki nahin……… par meri kidnapping mein to papa ka haath hai" she said while crying. Rathore and shree were more confused and shocked more than before now, and were quite confused.
On the other hand, in the dark room, where riya was tied to the chair, few people entered and started saying something. There were the same politician who was involved in his own daughter abduction, that baba 'Dhanwatri' , and his two disciples(one was a girl).
Rajkumar (Politician): Babaji aapne khud kaha tha……… ki pooja aaj hona zaruri hai, to phir ab aap aise kaise mana kar sakte hain…..?
Baba: Dekhiye hum samajhte hain, par abhi yahan ETF aayi hui hai, aur aise mein pooja poori karna hum sabhi ke liye uchit nahin hai……..Aur vaise bhi humne jin kamro mein ladkiyon ko rakha hai…… unmein to abhi ETF ke do log band hain.
Rajkumar: Dekhiye mujhe ye saari pooja poori chahiye……. Aur vo bhi jo time aapne bataya tha uske hi anusar. Aur abhi ke liye is ladki ki bali hogi… jis kaam ke liye main apni khud ki beti ki jaan le sakta hoon………. Kal akhiri pooja hogi aur vo maregi…… aur main in elections mein zaroor jeet jaunga. Aur rahi baat ETF ki to unmein se koi zinda nahin bachega…….. kisi ko unki laash tak nahin milegi..
Baba: Theek hai………. Taiyari shuru karo…….(turns toward his female disciple) aaj akhiri pooja se pehli pooja hai……….. ise theek se purna vidhi vidhaan se taiyar karo.
Girl disciple: Ji guruji.
She drags riya, who tries to resist but feel too weak and unconscious. Girl puts water on her and dresses her in a white color saree. She carries her in a room where there was a hawan kund, few idols, and such other things, along with clean, shining knives, daggers etc.
On the other side, Arjun was searching when he stepped forward, he felt as if ………… after few moments he found himself in a deep dugout. When he looked upwards, he saw sky as a round circle………. Oh dammit.. he had fallen in a dry well just now…. At this crucial moment, when everybody was feeling so down, everything is so messed up….. but thank god! The well was full of dry leaves……and he was perfectly fine………….. he looked around himself……… and found a big hole in the wall of the well…………… wow, probably it was a secret way……..hidden from outer world. Now it was the single ray of hope for the girls, for justice, for riya.
On the other hand chotu was involved in a fight with some of the politician's goons and when he beat all of them up, they ran towards the same room where shree and rathore were closed. For the first time lady luck was with the ETF in this case, chotu beat them hard, and freed shree and rathore.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nyc part dear. Update sooon...nd agle part mei plz arjun riya ko milao...cant wait ny more...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetdoc

Nyc part dear. Update sooon...nd agle part mei plz arjun riya ko milao...cant wait ny more...

yes yaar please in dono ko mila do
even if in the serial we have to wait for long time atleast yahaan who mill jaye
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaveriw2008


yes yaar please in dono ko mila do
even if in the serial we have to wait for long time atleast yahaan who mill jaye


Sahi kaha...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh so politician kidnapping his own daughter... hope arjun reaches riya in time...😳
nice update megha...👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update. Please Arjun Riya ko jaldi milao. I can't wait for next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetdoc

Nyc part dear. Update sooon...nd agle part mei plz arjun riya ko milao...cant wait ny more...




okay...thanks and ariya will b together as next part is gonna be last one.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks it's really good do update the next one soon waiting thank u once again

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