Determination...conclusion page27

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Hey guys....dont have much to do at work today so thought of writing a fanfic that i thought it...i got inspired by a novel i read and some of ur fanfics...hope u guys like it....i will only continue if u like it

Bani has left Jai Walia….when she left Jai she didn't know she was pregnant and she found out 2 months later that she was 3 months pregnant…Jai doesn't know that Bani was pregnant….

…they were married for a good year and Bani was very happy…full of life and not a care in the world….until Roshni showed up…ex-flame of her husband and now a business associate with whom Jai had sighned some new deals…Jai's concern was only Business but Roshni had other things in mind…the first to get rid of his wife!!!….Bani would never doubt her husband (12 years her senior) she was too much in love with him….he was arrogant stubborn and a ruthless business man…Bani was fresh graduate of high school when she had met him at a new years party and a month later had accepted his marriage proposal and married him….she was only 18 than….nothing In life made her insecured….. she was carefree as a bird and Jai's pride….until Roshni showed up …what happened that she left Jai was still a mystery

Back to present

Bani walked out of the lift…s.hit shit shit she said…"aaj meh phir late"…Mrs John toh mujhe aaj mardegi…..uff..yeh traffic aur garmi…mauritaus could get so hot at times……she got in her car and went beyond speed limits to make it home…..as she stepped inside a toddler came rushing to her…"ma ma ma" he said….Bani saw her….the days fatigue leaving her body…leaving her scrap book, papers and laptop close by on the sofa she got on her knees and opened her arms to a big hug to her 13 months old baby….."aaja aaja mera baacha mama ke paas"…smiling she took him in her arms…!!!

Aah there u are madam…said Mrs John

Bani: im sorry Thea (meaning aunty) "traffic and than there was the last deal I had to seal"….

Mrs John was her sons nanny….Bani had found her on the streets when the poor ladies sons had thrown her out of the house….and she had nothing to do..no where to go…….Bani was 8 months pregnant than…Thea had taken good care of her during the last stages of her pregnancy and she remained with Bani ever since as Jashiv's nona (grand-mother)…Jashiv is Jai and Banis son….

Its okay hooney (she stressed)…I know I know..but u know I gotta go to church noo..u foget again (she said in her spanish english…making Bani smile….

Sorry thea we wil personally drop u….what say babba…!!!

Later in the evening….it was summer and the weather had got so hot and daylight was till 9pm these days…..mum and baby dropped Thea off and Bani took Jashiv to the park for the evening….it was Friday and she has most awaited the weekend….

Jashiv was busy playing with his lego set……… Bani layed her head the the tree trunk they were sitting near and looked at her son….carbon copy of her husband she thought…what would Jai say if he saw him….…she closed her eyes…..everything just seemed so fresh in her mind…..his smell…his touch…his feeling…his presence…."hey bhagwan"…meh kiu nahi use bhula pati…why was life so hard on her she questioned…she was so young…merely 22….

*******That day nearly 2 years to go she had decided to make lunch for her hubby…she had recently learned how to cook (after all she was taking cooking classes ) and wanted to impress Jai….Jai always loved her childish behaviour…..he seemed to get mad at everything but Bani….he was too much in love and happy….atleast that's what she thought…..

She remembered taking a deep breath how she was about to enter his cabin when she found the door open and heard with her own ears…..

[…..She was always awkward with Roshni but upon questioning Jai (which he hated….no one could question the authority of her husband)….she was assured that Roshni was only business and nothing else….she dismissed the thoughts but was still not cormfotable with her working with her husband…the late nights ..the lunch hours..the business trips…it was all getting to her….Roshni had many times hinted on her and Jai 'so call business relationship" to Bani..and this was alwys when Jai wasn't around and that just added fuel to Banis anger and feeling towards the whole situation….

Whenever Bani tried talking to Jai he would touch her and one thing would lead to another and her thoughts and questions would get lost in the passion and heat of their love…..]

aS bani was about to enter….

Roshni: who are you trying to kid Jai you don't love that little school girl

Jai: that's my wife u talking about Roshni (very sternly he said to her…to watch ur mouth)

Roshni: yeh toh mujhe bhi pata hai Jai that she is ur wife….scarcastically….i mean common Jai saabhi ko pata hai..u married her because she was lively…spontanesous …and unknown to this business world….she would get her fame…weath and name out of this marriage and u ur freedom….u didn't want a wife who was as smart as you right Jai..warna business kaise karte tum….i mean Bani ko koi problem nahi tum kya karte ho….kaha jate ho..kiske (stressing on this ) saath jate ho….etc etc…u know Jai….

Jai knew talking to Roshni was just pointless so he didn't try and defend Bani's honour…he knew why he married Bani…damn from the first moment he had seen her…all he imagined to do was stip her naked and make her his…even till today Bani stirs that animal in him…..what would Rohsni know about love and passion….thank God he didn't marry her….

Roshni: kaha khogaye Jai…I mean jaab Bani ko yeh saab bother nahi karta toh im sure agar meh aur tum kuch din u know pleasure ke liye and not business kahi dur chale toh….

Jai: Roshni tum

Roshni didn't let him finish…she went closer and put and hand on his neck and other on his lips…common Jai…past ko relive karte hai…I still havnt forgotten what u can do to me in bed….

Jai was loosing his patience….

Just than Bani had had enough….she didn't know that Jai had such relationships with Roshni in the past…all he said was she was always interested in him and there were nothing more than friends….but worse of all she couldn't take Jai not defending all that Roshni said about her to him…..kya isilye Jai neh mujse shadi ki…..because I don't know nothing…..because I like to live my life differently than those business woman in business suits ….kya Jai mujse pyar nahi karte…with this Bani left the office to go home…she went to their room and startd crying…she cried and cried

In the meantime in the office…:

Jai: roshni maine thumare ex husband ke saath yeh deal ki thi….mujhe nahi pata tha that u are married or rather were married to him orelse I would have never signed Walia group with his name…but now that this deal is working out so good I don't want to spoil it with behaviour such as urs….i married Bani because I love her and because she is not a ruthless selfcenterd u know what like you…..if u don't mind I have a lot to do and a very eager wife at home who I want to go to…so if u excuse me….gesturing her to leave his office

A miffed rohsni leaves the room…"no Jai roshni doesn't let go of what she wants"…aaj nahi phir kabhi…u will come to me….with that she smiles and leave for lunch

Jai got home at midnight to find his room dark and cold

Bani????.........Bani????....babe where are you???????.....he took his tie off went towards his study …seeing Tony he asked ….Bani ko dheka kya???....

Toni: nahi sir..woh toh sham se apne hi kamre meh hai…..aapko lunch kaisa laga sir…

Jai : kya

Toni: lunch….madam ne bade hi pyar se aapke liye banakar legai thi…..

Jai: Bani neh banaya..knowing very well his darling wife hated cooking…but had started taking classes to impress him….Bani aur cooking kya Tony…pahleez…with a smile he leaves for his room again to find Bani

Bani??????????

Bani had cut her wrist and was sitting at the window…..Jai didn't see the cut but walked up to his wife and as about to hug her when (only the bedside lamp was lit)

Bani: toh aap agye

Bani???? Said a surprised Jai…usually his wife is all hyper and jumps onto him whatever the time of the day it was….Jai loved coming home to that everyday….

Bani: started shouting and crying at the sametime….im good for nothing hanah…meh aapke life meh sirf ek wife ke need fulfil karti hu…u married me for all that selfish reasons Roshni was saying

Jai: Bani what are you saying very angry now…he didn't like to be questioned at all…

Bani: I know everything …u married me because I am innocent to your stupid business world and because u needed a wife like me who wouldn't question u on anything u do…..

Jai was fuming by now……he didn't know what came over Bani….but than he remembered Tone mentioning her bringing lunch and Roshni being in his cabin…..oh shit!!!...he knew that his wife wouldn't reason out…she was very impulsive and wouldn't calm at anything…..being the hyper girl she was…

Bani meri baath sunno…trying to calm her down….but Bani was far from it…

BAni: mujhe kuch nahi sunna…u have to cut all business ties with that roshni witch..u have to send her back to wherever she came from…I don't care I want her out of our lives…

Bani meh….Jai was mad by now….but tying to calm her…

Bani: nahi u tell me now u will get rid of this business deal….god knows what u do with her in closed doors and ur business trips…..Bani was mad …raging with anger …she couldn't even feel the cut on her wrist…she was a hysteria case…

Jai: Bani I have invested a lot of money in this deal and im not going out of it because of some wifey jealousy and tantrums u throwing my way…do u get me…(he himself could not believe Bani saying all this)….u better get rid of ur childish tantrums and come out of it….

He moved forward to hold her …he knew one way to shut her up…..

Before that Bani lifted her hand up…it was bleeding by now….and the blood ws all over the floor…Jai was shocked….he saw this and swore under his breath….moving towards her

Bani: childish tantrums….wifey jealousy…..tumhe lagta hai ki meh….before she could continue…she was about to fall…she had lost a lot of blood…Jai swithched the main light on the room and saw Bani's condition…dammit Bani…holding her…yeh kya kiya tumne..pagal ho…..shit….

Hit took her to the bathroom…put towels on the cut and called Vinay his friend and doctor…….

Vinay did the necessary doctor stuff and gave Bani and injection to sleep…..Jai, Bani ko maine kabhi aise nahi dekha…kya hua….

Jai: kya batao yaar…maine bhi Bani ko aise nahi dheka….its all because of that…

Vinay: Rohsn!!!!

Jai: yeah u know her and how she can be

Vinay: why don't u cut al relations with her…look at Bani yaar

Jai: I have invested a lot of money in this deal

Vinay: kya paisa Bani se important hai Jai…think about it….she will be alright…the cut wasn't that deep just lost lot of blood…she will be fit and fine in the mrng…..take care n get some sleep…oh and Jai…..paise aur business saab kuch nahi hai….think about it…winks and leaves…sometimes his friend could be so stubborn….*******

Reality struck Bani back to the present…she got out of her thoughts and looked at her now tired son….almost sleeping and it was getting dark now…..she wrapped up everything and headed for home….Mrs John had prepared a nice dinner…and fed jashiv…Bani not hungry again…left her food untouched and went to settle her only life to sleep….Jashiv slept so peacefully…..she looked at her son and thought ….beta kash mujhe bhi aise hi neend ati….tere jaisa…kitna khush hai tu apni is duniya meh…..

Bani left for bed……

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Posted: 19 years ago
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OH WOW!! that was amazing... i luv your writing... please please please continue soon 😳 😊
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aww dame good fanfic
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woooow..... its coool.... 👏

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wow...wonderful fanfic! can't wait to read the next part 😃
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ohhhh thanks guys ...here goes more parts.....wow imagine when Jai finds out his also a father...he doesnt know that yet!!

Next few days was a busy for Bani …she had joined this company as as assistant to the marketing executive and now she was his right hand…and elderly figure but whom she respected very much…..

Mr mithal said….hame yeh deal jitna hai….this group of industries are very big and for the first time they have decided to open up their chain of hotels in Mauritaus….we have to get their marketing assignment….

Bani: don't worry sir…I will make the proposal the best for them that they cannot resist…..

Mr mithal knew he could trust this girl…he saw that determination in her from the first day he had hired her…he also knew that she never smiled from her eyes other than the times she mentions her baby!!...who she was where she came from he didn't care but in her he found a grand-daughter he always wanted…..

Bani knew this deal was important to Mr Mithal…she loved the old man..he reminded her of Jai so much and that is why she loved hanging around the old man….one thing Jai n him have in common is the stubbornness…..she smiled gathered the reports and left for her office wondering who this company was…..

Walia's Retrieve was the new project….as soon as Bani read the name….she couldn't believe her eyes…..no this is not happening Bani …..breathe breathe and read again…im sure u read something wrong in the spelling

Again she opened the file and read…..Walia's Retrieve and Dreams….Walia Group of Industries would like to expend their new chain of resorts in the beautiful sights of Mauritaus and ……the intro went on and on…..Bani didn't know what to do….she went to the last page……Mr Jai Walia will personally pursue with this project….just reading his name made her all wobbly and sick to the pit of her stomach..just traced his name with her hands and could feel the same tingling feeling that his touch usually made….…..nahi …aisa nahi ho sakta…she cant do this…no way…she cannot handle this project….mithal ji se baath karni hogi…I cant do this project…..no way…..

Just than Mithal walked in….Bani everything alright…..a very dry throad bAni squeaked …Yes sir absolutely…..

Bani: Sir

Mithal: yes

Bani: yeh project…umm kisne inspire kit hi…..i mean why our team

Mithal: Walia Group of Industries are very famous throughout India but they hav nothing in Mauritaus….last year in the business awards our firm got the best Marketing Facilitator thanks to you Bani and that's what brought his attention to our company…Dreams Ltd and Ambition are the only two contenders to fight for this project….we have to get this Bani…this will increase our profit margin to the next level….even I was thinking of expanding Dreams Ltd into Mumbai and Delhi now

Mr Mithal had done so much for Bani how could she say no to his dream…..its because of him that she has a job …and a great salary…a house to live in and her self respect….how can she not do this for this man….

Bani: very determined….great sir…we will surely get this project

Bani laid her head back to her chair…..swung her chair to her window and went back to that dreadful morning again….

Bani had woken up early that mrng…not to find Jai anywhere…..upon asking Tony she found out that Jai had to leave early that mrng for a business trip to Shaghai for 2 days…..she couldn't believe her ears…upon calling at work she had found out that the Roshni him and few other associates had to leave all of a sudden to due some business problems occurring ….and he had left a message for her on their home number when she would enquire….

Bani played the message:

His voice came thru speaker ….giving her the tingling sensation he always did…..Good Mornign Baby…I hope u are feeling much better…..im sorry I had to leave early due to some business problems at work but I will be back in no time to u my sugar…honey u don't have to worry about anything okay…take care and go do some shopping if that makes u feel better…I will see u soon….lov you….J

What ….shopping that supposed to make me feel better….she knew what she had to do that instant…she had to leave this place…this house …him…she cannot be part of a realationship where there is no trust….crying and having a huge headache she packed her bags…..without thinking where she would go and what she would do……she called Tony…..told him to give al the servants leave today and same for him and they all to return to work tomrw…she knew that she had to play very smart because his husband had contacts in high places and could easily find her…..with that she went to the bank and took all money available on her credit card some 20,000 dollars and left with cash…she knew if she used credit else where her husband would get it traced…..she left town….Bani caught trains to many places under various different names and finally reached the airport in nanital…not knowing whre to go…a miserable tired Bani was lost in this huge and lonely world……...thats where she met Mr Mithal …returning from holiday back to maritaus….travelling night and day for two straight nights had its toll on her and she collapsed infront of him right at the ticket counter….Mr Mithal being the rich man he was got her to mauritaus with him and took care of her….thats when Bani found out she was close to 2 months pregnant……Mithal and his elderly wife having no kids of their own treated Bani as family and understood her problem….Bani had told them everything other than that she was a Walia…….

One thing lead to another and now she was part of Dreams Ltd as a marketing right hand to Mr Mithal…..she was like the creative head in the team…Bani was very determined to make something out of herserf…during her pregnancy she did night school and got certificates for the various many subjects she could think of…she was a success in her area of work….7 months later she gave birth to a beautiful baby boy whom she named Jashiv….Ja from Jai's name and Shiv because it was her belief in Shiv ji that everything worked out for her in her current life…..and her son was one thing safe in her life with her….

The phone rang….ring ……..ring ring….the third ring brought Bani to reality….she picked it up

Yes simi …she said to her secretary…..

On the other side of the phone was no other than the man himself…he had known that voice that instant he heard it…..that same softness….tenderness …concern…god he craved for her like crazy!!!11………..

Jai didn't know what happened that day …he knew Bani's jealousy was purely crazy…he knew that she had cut her hands to get his attention…and he had…he promised himself to finish this last problem in Shanghai and than he was takin his wife to her family in Jaipur for a vacation n than the beautiful Goa for a second honeymoon………….instead of the normal 2 days it took him a week and he didn't have time to even call Bani…the funny thing neither did she…usually she would disturb him anytime of the day……he remembered the time when she called him all mrng and when he couldn't answer she had shown up at his board meeting …demanding his team to release her husband because she needed to have lunch with him….he was fuious that day but u cannot be furious too long at Bani….gosh he missed her…he smiled very sadly remembering her …her beautiful smile…her chitchat that would never stop….her enigma ….her whole presence that he caught the first time he had seen at that new years party….it seemed so far away now……he wanted to cry but he couldn't…..

He had returned to an empty house with no note or call or anything….his servants didn't know anything…..her account wasn't touched other than the 20,000 something she had widthrawn…….nothing no trace of her…it was like she had disappeared to thin air…..life had become so empty for him….Jai was a lost soul…..he didn't know what to do….none of her family knew whre she was…..nobody……a year went by nothing........

Jai was nothing without Bani…he needed her…Vinay's words came back to his mind…you were right buddy….money is not everything…..what do I do…..the police wre good for nothing…..the detectives he had hired,…nothing no trace of his wife…he didn't even want to think if she was dead or if something had happened to her…..

Jai had threatened Roshni to take her distance from him….he couldn't fire her out of the project because she lead the deal for the team and her staying onto the project was equally as important…but any other ties he cut from her…they had business lunch or meetings but all he did was talk business……Jai Walia had become a very tough man…
The headlines in newpapers televisions had all questioned his wifes sudden disappearance and his media relators had assured the public that she was fine and had gone abroad for futher studies…while Jai concentrated on Business…..only Jai knew what life was like

9 months into the second year of Bani gone…he had met the winner of the marketing creator of the year at the business awards where he really saw what a beautiful place maritaus was……….while talking to him….discussions were made and the he dediced that his business should expand to Maritaus… he himself will take this project and work in the beautiful outskirts of the country……

Jai was furious…he was tyring to get hold of Mithal but everytime Mithal came as busy….he really wanted both Dreams Ltd and Ambition to show what they had to offer to make who the marketer will be for his new project……..he was furious…..he talked to Mithals secretary…and was later transferred to his right hand woman who was no less than Mithal and who in future will be handling this project……..

Bani: hello sim ???.....whose this???

Bani looked at the phone a bit curious but for some reason she didn't hang up….Jai on the other side couldn't believe his luck…just than Sim Bani's secretary walked in…..

Sim: Bani …

Bani: sim koi phone par hai but kuch khe nahi raha

Sim: koi bhouth hi rude person hai Bani …..he was insisting on talking to Mr Mithal but Mr Mithal toh busy hai meetings meh…nina (mr mithals secretary) told him several time this time he insisted on talking to somebody so she transferred to you ….sim had a pleading look and Bani said, acha no worries meh dekti hu

She took the phone: hello sir…are you there

Click the phone went dead…all Jai needed to know was where Bani was….

….thank you bhagwan…Mrs Bani Walia im coming to get you this time…Jai had a solid plan in line!!!!…



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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow excellent part... i'm interested to see what Jai does now.. please continue soon 👏 👏
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wow your stories mind blowing...abseloutlly loved it!..plz continue soon!
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wonderful
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i luved it
pls cont soon
can't wait to read what happens next
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Posted: 19 years ago
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superb story.loved it.plz cont soon. 😊

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