Determination...conclusion page27 - Page 4

plzz continue soon, it was great... 👏

dame good parts dear
cant wait for the next part
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Dun dun dun dun!...wow hun.........that was awesome!

Can't wait for the next part!😛

oh god u rock ...............awsome , amazing plzzzzzzzzzz do continue sooooooooooooooooon 👏

ohhh gawd how can u stop there.......... 😭

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its awesome........simply awesome...... 👏

👏 👏 awsome parts
please please continue soon
thanx

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wow i just read the 4parts today its just amazing
can't wait for jai's reaction!
please continue soon

I Can't wait any longer!!! you have to continue 😆 plz

WHERE IS D REST?!!! OMG OMG OMG DONT LEAVE ME IN THIS SUSPENCE!!!! I'LL DIEEEEEEEEEEEEE PLZ CONTINUE SOOOONNNNNNNNN PLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
*gets down on knees and begs like a lil puppy*

Thanks all so much for ur lovly words...sorry wasnt online yesterday or the weekend...so got a chance to update today......hope u like it...

love u all

Part 5:

The nurse left....

Jai to himself…mera beta…Mera bEta…MERA BETA….he was over-whelmed with emotions and took the name tag in this hand…Jashiv B Walia…my son…his caressed the name and looked at the bundle busy playing…seemed to have a running nose….Jai put his hand forward and picked him up…he had a fever…..MY SON.!!!....he kissed him all over and started to cry...

How could Bani not tell me...how could she keep this away from me....he hugged him...kissed him....touched him all over...but much more than that...he loved Bani more..she kept the most beautiful thing in their life safe and sound with her......he was getting so mad at her ...why would she keep his child away from him....did she hate Jai so much.....

The nurse looked and thought…both parents love their child so much….

Jai was so happy so happy that he wanted to kill Bani…how dare she keep him away from his son….Bani u and my son are going home with me period…!!!!! Jai was so mad

He went and saw Mr Sharma and found out everything….he sighned a blank cheque and gave it to the doc and told him….anything for my boy and ASAP….he called his secretary and told her to arrange for the best childrens doc and get him to fly to maritaus...NOW!!!!!….Mr Walia was going to get his boy attended by the best……

He was sittng at he window watching his boy play when he saw Bani enter the ward….bAni couldn't see him coz he was on the other side….Jai saw that at the sight of the child Bani's face glowed and she was so happy and radiant..jsut like when they made love for the first time…it was special..he had tears in his eyes…you left me yet u love my child….why Bani why cant u trust me…I love you and only you and u kept me away from the worlds greatest happiness why Bani….Bani huggd her baby and started to cry…..........

later on....the nurse gave him sedative and told her to go home and rest as the baby will be out all night….

Bani kissed Jashiv and left….crying …..God abb meh kya karu??...she had tried all avenues but nothing would bring that amount up….she started to cry again…she had only one alternative…..and she knew that was the only way she could save her child..yet maybe loose him forever…she had to tell Jai!!...he is the only one who can come up with that money and much more for her baby…..........magar ek daar Bani ko kha ja raha tha...!!!!!!!! will Jai want his child from me...worse whould he take her only precious thing in life away from her!!!