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Okay uhm.. read part 1. Can I comment on that for now and part 2 tomorrow please? Right now I just want to eat and then go to sleep 😳
H a p p y b e l a t e d b i r t h d a y 😛🤗
Soo... Here come's your birthday gift 🤣
Ps: Before I begin,
Part 1:
Fabulously written. So attached to reality. Can just connect with both of them. Mostly Kria and how she must be feeling while living a perfectly imperfect life 😛 The emotions, description, attachment and everything was perfect for it's balance.
At times, I kept on getting confused. 🤣 LOL silly reason actually. I kept on missing a line or reading the line above 😆 Then I would go whaaattt? And reread the paragraph 🤣 The way you've written in first person point of view... kya kahu.. I just love it when one explains the feelings in first person pov.
I can proudly say, "I've inspired you well." 😎 🤣 I did see a glimpse of my style in how you were describing the situation and feeling. Glad to see someone pick that up 😉
Baatcutter 😍 😍 Isn't this simply just a perfect name. I can blush so hard hearing Rey call her that! The ending of part 1, by far, has the be the best. Rey is such a cutie! The way he made her realize and was waiting for her outside as if knowing that she will come. 😍
Will read the next super soon... but tomorrow.. As said, today just going to have early dinner and go to sleep 😃
Kumkum Bhagya
Arjun
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