virman virika new ff excel college New Promo pg 31

Hey guyz
I'm new at this and this is my first post
so plz ignore my mistakes

The story is about virmaan n virika
it is slightly different from the serial
it is about their luv stories n their college lives


Part 1- pg 1
Part 2- pg 1
Part 3- pg 2

Part 4- pg 3
Part 5- Pg 5
the story begins in Hrishekesh, Jeevika and Maanvi are packing their luggage to leave for Mumbai
Beeji: Jeevika beta zara sambhal ke jaana aur Maanvi ka khayal rakna. Tujhe to pata hai na ke uska bachpana abhi tak gaya nahi

Jeevika: beeji aap bilkul fikar mat kijye. Maanvi ko main hamesha apni aankhon ke saamne rakhoon gi. Uski jinta mat kijye aap

Beeji: mujhe pata hai tu uska bohot khayal rakhe gi. Aur ha uski dekhbaal ke chakar mein khud ka khayal rakhna mat bhool Jana. Apna bhi khayal rakhna beta


Jeevika: ji beeji
Maanvi goes up to beeji
Maanvi: beeji main koi choti bachi nahi hoon ab. Main athaara saal (18 years) ki ho chuki hoon. Main apna khayal khud rak sakti hoon
Beeji: Jeevika Maanvi beta tum dono samajdaar ho iss liye main tum dono ko Mumbai bhej rahi hoon apni parhayi ke liye. Lekin ek baat main tum dono ko kehdoon...larko se door rehna
Maanvi: beeji AAP fikar mat karein main toh uss line pe jauon gi nahi...lekin Di ka pata nahi ke kab kissi se nazrein mil jayein
she teased Jeevika
Jeevika slapped her on her head
Jeevika: chup kar...(she turned to beeji) beeji aap hum par bharosa rakhein...hum DONO aisa koi kadam nahi uthayein ge jisse aapko yaan humare parivaar ko sharminda hona paray
Beeji: mujhe tum par poora bharosa hai beta

Jeevika and Maanvi took their family's blessings and were about to go when Dabbu entered the scene

Dabbu: Jeevika Di Maanvi Di aap log mujhse mile bina jaa rahe ho
Jeevika: arre hum tujhe kaise bhool sakte hain Dabbu? Tu to humara laadla bhai hai
Dabbu: Maanvi Di aap na jab vaapas ao ge na tho mere liye khoob laddoo le ke aana
Maanvi hold Dabbu by the shoulders
Maanvi: yaar Dabbay tujhe khaane ke ilaava aur kuch nahi dikhta kya? Jab dekho bas laddoo laddoo laddoo. Iss baar na main tere liye ek sundar susheel larki le Ker aoungi kya kehta hai!?
Dabbu: (blushes) kya Maanvi Di aap bhi kuch bhi bol te ho
everyone starts laughing

Maanvi and Jeevika leave for Mumbai

(<font color="#0000CC">i'm not gonna go into much detail about how they reach Mumbai so just gonna skip that part</font>)

Maanvi and Jeevika settled down in their room in the hostel
Maanvi: wow di kitna bara room hai,
Jeevika: haan Mannu room toh bohot bara hai aur bohot khoobsurat bhi, chalo atleast humare safar ka start toh acha hai na
Maanvi: woh toh hai di, kyun ki hum ab azaad panchi hain
Jeevika: matlab?
Maanvi: matlab yeh ke ab hum kuch bhi kar sakte hain... jab humara mann chahe so sakte hain, kuch bhi kar sakte hain kyun ki yahan beeji nahin hain na so we are free
she put her arm around Jeevika's shoulder
Maanvi: sirf main aur meri pyaari di
Jeevika: acha meri shaitani behen ab jaake fresh ho jao tab tak main beeji ko phone karti hoon, unho ne kahan tha to call her as soon as we reach Mumbai aur ab toh hum hostel bhi bohonch gaye hain
Maanvi: haan aap beeji ko phone karein aur main abhi aati hoon
maanvi left the room
Jeevika talked to beeji on the phone and told her that they had a safe journey.


It was 10:00 pm Jeevika and Maanvi were sitting on their bed talking about how their first day in college would be like...
Maanvi: di
Jeevika turned to face Maanvi
Maanvi: aap ko kya lagta hai? i mean humara first day kaisa hoga? zindagi mein pehli baar nervous ho rahi hoon
Jeevika: haan Mannu nervous toh main bhi bohot hoon, lekin i don't think ke humein darne ki zarurat hai, tujhe pata hai ki jis college mein hum jayein ge wahan ragging strictly bann hai
Maanvi sighed in relief

Maanvi: thank god Di. Atleast ek problem toh solve ho gayi ab bas humein subha tak wait karna hoga
Jeevika: haan
Maanvi moved a bit closer to Jeevika n put her arm in Jeevika's
Maanvi: waise Di ek baat puchun?
Jeevika looked at Maanvi narrowing her eyes
Maanvi: kya aap ko lagta hai ke beeji ka Dar kabhi sach hoga?
Jeevika: tu kya keh rahi hai mannu I don't understand
asked a confused Jeevika
Maanvi: yaad hai ki beeji ne kya kaha tha... Stay away from boys
Maanvi reminded Jeevika with a cheeky smile andJeevika understood where she was going with this
Jeevika: haan yaad hai mujhe...aur humara vaada bhi yaad hai (she pulled Maanvi'z ear)
Maanvi: ouch! Ok sorry Di main toh bas mazak kar rahi thi
both were silent for few seconds then suddenly started laughing
Jeevika looked up at the wall clock and gasped

Jeevika: o God! Gyaara baj Gaye (its eleven o clock!) mannu humein subha saat (seven) baje uthna hai
Maanvi: kya! Asked a shocked maanvi saat baje? Par Di itni subha subha kaise uthein ge sirf aath ghante so sakte hain?? Meri subha toh baaran baje hoti hai
said maanvi disappointed
Jeevika smiled at her sister
Jeevika: well ab aadat daal lo jaldi uthne ki kyun ki ab humein roz itne baje uthna parei ga. Challo ab so jao
o goodnight
Maanvi: goodnight Di
both sisters went to sleep


It was 7:15 am Maanvi was still asleep
Jeevika: mannu get up! Hum late ho jayein ge
Jeevika said nudging Maanvi to get up
Maanvi: bas paanch minute aur Di
Maanvi moaned
Jeevika got annoyed with her behavior
Jeevika: toh tu aise nahi mane gi?? Teek hai
She picked up a jug of cold water and poured it on Maanvi
Maanvi jumped out of bed ''Diii!!'' she shrieked
Jeevika started laughing
Jeevika: laathon ke booth baaton se nahi maante... Ab jaake jaldi se taiyaar ho jao late ho rahe hain
Maanvi stomped to the bathroom...

Jeevika and Maanvi were ready...
Jeevika was wearing a red embroidered churidar dress and Maanvi was wearing a pink knee length churidar dress with hair open
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Part 2

They reached the college gates
Maanvi: wow di! kitna bara gate hai. agar gate itna bara hai toh imagine ke andar se college kitna bara hoga!
Jeevika: haan wo toh hai. aur yeh jaanne ke liye ke college kitna bara hai humein andar jana chahiye. toh chalein?
maanvi agreed in excitement and both sisters entered the college.

Jeevika looked at her timetable to check what class she's got

Jeevika: oh no Mannu! meri class toh 15 minutes mein start hai lekin mujhe toh yeh bhi nahi pata ke kahan hai!

Jeevika looked at her sister who was looking in the other direction. she tapped Maanvi on her shoulder.
Jeevika: Mannu i'm talking to u. tu sun bhi rahi hai!?
Maanvi: di yeh sab choro na. woh dekho
she pointed to a red lambhorgini
which was parked near the gates and they saw two handsome hunks coming out from the car.


Maanvi: wow Di what a car!
Jeevika: haan aur woh ladka...
maanvi looked at her sister stunned
Maanvi: Di... Kaun sa ladka?? Right ya left wala??
She teased jeevika
Jeevika: nahi... Woh...kuch nahi
she blushed. Then she realised she had 5 minz until her 1st class started.
Jeevika: mannu main late ho rahi hoon. I need to look for my class I don't wanna be late on my first day. Ok bye.
Jeevika rushed off to look for her class leaving maanvi calling her from behind.

Maanvi: o god ab main kya karoon?? Ab toh Di bhi chali gayi.
Maanvi got scared as she didn't know where to go. Maanvi was walking not looking at where she was going and suddenly she tripped over a stone. she closed her eyes really tight and was expecting a painful fall but instead she felt two strong arms had a grip on her. One arm around her waist and the other gripping on her arm. She opened her eyes and saw a handsome guy in front of her, she quickly pushed him off her

Maanvi: get off me! Tumhari himat kaise hui mujhe chune ki!?
Guy: excuse me! First of all tumhe mujhe thanks kehna chahiye tumhe bacha ne ke liybut instead tum mujpe chilla rahi ho??
Maanvi: meri jooti tumhe thanks bole gi! Maine tumhe nahi bulaya tha to help me! Tum larke kabhi apni harkaton se baaz nahi ao ge!
Guy: what? What the hell are you saying?? Tum bohot ajeeb ho yaar. Just chill babe its not a big deal
Maanvi was now furious
Maanvi: kya kaha tumne!? How dare you call me babe! Tumhari itni himat you...you chep!

Guy: what did you call me!?
Maanvi: you heard me. Chep!
Guy: watch it ded futiya! Tumhe pata bhi hai tum kisse baat kar rahi ho? Do u even know who I am?? I'm Virat Singh Vadhera
he said proudly

Maanvi: Virat, Samrat, Yuvraj whatever. I don't care. Tum koi Hrithik Roshan nahi ho jo main tumhari aarti utaarun

then Maanvi realized something
Maanvi: ek minute. Tum wahi ho na jo thori Der pehle USS gari mein the??
Virat nodded yes
Maanvi: bechari gari najane kiske palle par gayi hai
Maanvi said under her breath
Virat: kya kaha??
Maanvi: jo tumne suna
she snapped back at him
Virat: you're so weird
Maanvi: not more than you
Virat: stop it![BRMaanvi: you stop it!

Virat: ur so lucky tum mere samne Kari ho ke kuch bhi keh rahi ho aur main tumhe kuch nahi keh raha.
Maanvi: haan main toh Mari jaa rahi hoon tumse baat karne liye. She said sarcastically

Virat got irritated with her attitude.
Virat: waise bhi tum jaisi middle class larkion se koi umeed rak bhi nahi sakte
he snapped very harshly. But Maanvi did not hesitate to answer him back
Maanvi: excuse me tum kehna kya chahte ho?? How dare you! Tum kya samajte ho apne aap ko? Aur waise bhi kamzekam humari koi izat toh hoti hai. she pointed at Virat. Tum jaise high society walon se toh better zindagi hoti hai
Virat got furious
Maanvi: kyun. Kya hua?? Sachayi bardaash nahi ho rahi??

Virat: listen you... He pointed his index finger at her in a warning way

they were in a heated argument. But suddenly one of Virat's friend came who made it just in time to stop the argument.

Kunal: yaar Virat chor na. Plz just stop it both of you
both Maanvi and Virat were giving each other daggers
Kunal saw this
Kunal: hii I'm Kunal, Virat's friend
he introduced himself to Maanvi forwarding his hand and also to change the topic
She shaked hands with him but her focus was still on Virat.
Kunal: so you new?? He tried to break the tension
Maanvi: yeah. Actually main kal hi Mumbai ayi thi apni Di ke saath. The college bell rang.
Kunal: thats the bell. Apka pehli class kya hai??
Maanvi took out her timetable to check her class
Maanvi: History. Lekin mujhe nahi pata ke class kahan hai
she hesitated
Kunal: dont worry main apko leke jata hoon...
Virat nudged Kunal narrowing his eyes. Kunal looked at Virat and then quickly changed his decision
I mean main apko directions bata sakta hoon because I have a lot of work to do
Go straight then left then up the stairs and there you are.
Maanvi: thanks. She smiled at him and gave a I'll deal with u later look to Virat and went off to her class

After Maanvi left both Kunal and Virat burst out laughing and gave each other high five
Virat: you're too good yaar.
Kunal: aakhir dost kiska hoon
Virat put his arm around Kunal as they were walking
Virat: waise I think that you should become an actor. Too good man
Kunal: arrey she was just so easy going. Maine toh tujhe bachane ke liye yeh naatak kiya yaar. Waise main dekhraha tha. She was giving a lot attitude to u right??
virat moved his arm away and had a serious face
Virat: lekin mujhe aise logon ko jawab bhi Dena aata hai. Usse kya lagta hai?? Ke woh kuch bhi bakwaas kare gi and I'll keep quiet?? No way dude
Kunal: tu kya karne wala hai dude??
Virat: main Virat Singh Vadhera hoon. Aur mere saath koi bhi batameezi kare main chup nahi bethun ga. Ab tu dekh. Agar Maine USS larki ko barbaad nahi kiya toh mera naam bhi Virat nahi
he said with an evil grin on his face
Kunal praised him for his over confidence and both friends went off...

What do you guys think Virat will do to Maanvi?? Plz write ur thoughts..

GUYZ I'M SORRY I DIDN'T INTRODUCE VIREN IN PART 2 I JUST FELT THAT IT WOULD HAVE BEEN LONGER THAN IT SHOULD. BUT I PROMISE THAT I WILL INTRODUCE HIM IN THE NEXT PART.

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Thnxx 4 commenting I'll update soon

Part 3

It was break time in college. Jeevika wanted to go to the library but she didn't know where to go. Suddenly someone tapped her on her back. She turned around and saw a handsome guy wearing Nike shirt and a black leather jacket and had the most sweetest smile on his face.

Guy: need any help??
Jeevika smiled back at him
Jeevika: woh actually I'm looking for the Library kuch books borrow karni thi but I can't seem to find it
Guy: exactly kitni books borrow karni hai apne??
She didn't expect him to ask that but she still answered
Jeevika: bas ek hi. Of mice and men

The guy made a guilty face and said
Guy: actually woh book Maine borrow ki hain. Sorry
Jeevika: its ok main baad mein borrow karloon gi
Now they were walking and talking

Then he suddenly stopped
Guy: main bhi na so stupid. Aapse kitni Der baat kar raha hoon and I didnt even introduce myself. By the way I'm Viren

He put his hand forward
Jeevika: hii I'm Jeevika
They both shook hands
They started walking together again
Viren: so Jeevika you new here??
Jeevika: haan main kal hi apni behen ke saath Mumbai shift hui hoon
Viren was delighted to hear this
Viren: phir toh mujhe bahana mil gaya hai apke saath time spend karne ka
Jeevika was stunned at his reaction
Jeevika: ji?? Kya matlab?? She stopped walking
Viren quickly changed his meaning
Viren: I mean ke aap yahan new hain toh ofcourse koi toh hona chahiye na apko yeh sheher dikhane ke liye.
Jeevika: o acha.
Viren sighed in relief as she didn't catch onto his real meaning.
Viren: so friends??
He smiled at her
Jeevika: friends
She smiled back and shook hands

Viren: waise Jeevika. Aap kahan se hain. I mean where do u live??
Jeevika: main Hrishekesh se hoon. Aur aap??
Viren: I'm from Chandigarh. Actually main yahan apne chote bhai ke saath aya hoon.
Jeevika smiled: aur main apni behen ke saath ayi hoon. Actually yeh mera second year hai college mein aur meri behen Maanvi ka pehla.


The bell rang and it was time for the next lesson.
Jeevika checked her timetable for her next lesson
Viren: what have u got??
He asked curiously
Jeevika: chemistry. Lekin mujhe nahi pata where my class is
She hesitated. Viren took her timetable to see what room she was in
Viren: aapki class toh meri class ke opposite hai. Don't worry I'll take you
He smiled and virika went off

They reached outside their classes
Viren: yeh aapki class aur wahan (he pointed in the opposite direction) meri class
Jeevika: thank you so much. Ab main chalti hoon
She was about to go when viren grabbed her hand. She looked back at him
Viren: waise...humari chemistry bhi itni buri nahi hai. Right??
He winked at her and went to his class leaving a blushing Jeevika. She went to her class.

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college had ended at 4:00 pm, Jeevika was coming out of her class when viren spotted her
Viren: Jeevika
she turned around and saw him walking towards her
Viren: aap kahan ja rahe ho??
Jeevika looked at him with confusion
Jeevika: viren ji college khatam ho gaya hai toh obviously main hostel jaa rahi hoon
viren slapped his head for his dumb question.
Viren: sorry. Actually I wanted to say that main apko drop kar deta hoon
Jeevika hesitated to answer. Should she say yes or ni. She couldn't decide.
Jeevika: lekin viren ji main mannu ka wait kar rahi hoon aur hum dono aapke saath...
Viren: no problem. Main aap dono ko drop kar Doon ga

just then Virat came
Virat: bhai main...
he stopped and looked at Jeevika
Virat: yeh kaun hai?
he asked rudely. Viren nudged him
Viren: yeh Jeevika hai. Kal hi Mumbai ayi hai apni behen Maanvi ke saath
Virat: oh ok. Hii
he forward his hand
Jeevika: hii
virat started laughing and both viren and jeevika looked at him with confusion
Viren: Virat tu itna has kyun raha hai yaar??
Virat: woh kya hai na ke aaj mujhe ek aur larki mili thi aur woh bhi Mumbai kal hi ayi hai apni behen ke saath
Jeevika: shayad aap meri behen se mile hoge
Virat: no way. I dont think ke woh aapki behen hogi. I mean woh bohot batameez thi. Aur aap agar bhai ki girlfriend hain toh phir aap achi hi hogi
Viren: chup kar Virat. Hum sirf dost hain
Jeevika blushed.

Virat remembered why he had come to Viren
Virat: oh yeah bhai. Main yahan apko bataane aya tha that I won't be able to go home with you today. Woh actually mujhe Maya ke saath kahin Jana hai. So you can go if u want
Viren: chal teek hai lekin jaldi aa jana
Virat: ok bye!

as soon as Virat left. Maanvi entered
Maanvi: Di main apka kabse wait...
she stopped when she saw viren
Maanvi: arre Di yeh toh wahi hai na jinhe aap subha itni ghur ghur ke dekh rahi thi??
Jeevika: nahi mannu tujhe yaad hai na main woh gari ko dekh rahi thi
Jeevika said narrowing her eyes at Maanvi to shut up. But ofcourse Maanvi was not gonna shut up
Maanvi: acha?? Lekin apne toh kaha tha ke woh larka bhi acha hai...
viren could see Jeevika blushing so he interrupted
he cleared his throat
Viren: hii. You must be Maanvi. I'm Viren
Maanvi: haan main Maanvi hoon. And its nice to meet you viren.
Viren: waise tumse mil kar bohot khushi hui. Bohot zinda dil larki ho
Maanvi: thanks lekin aap itni bhi taareef mat karein meri warna kya pata ke Di mujhse hi jealous ho jayein
she nudged Jeevika ''chup kar'' jeevika said
Viren: by the way main aap dono ko drop kar raha hoon toh chalein??
Maanvi: ofcourse chalo



After dropping Jeevika and Maanvi, Viren went straight home.
he sat down on the sofa and sighed. Virat saw a smile on his big brother's face
Virat: kya baat hai bhai. Aaj aap bohot muskura rahe ho. Aisa kya jadu kar diya Jeevika ne??
Virat nudged Viren teasing him
Viren: yaar kuch nahi Virat
Virat: kuch nahi?? Bhai even main apse pehle ghar bohonch gaya. Aap. Pehle kabhi itne late nahi hue toh phir aaj kuch khaas vaja??

Viren got a cushion and chased Virat around the whole room.
Virat: ok bhai bas. Sorry sorry
Virat said panting
Both brothers sat down on the sofa
Virat: bhai mere paas ek idea hai
Viren listened curiously ''kya''
Virat: u know har saal ki tarha ISS saal bhi there are new students in our college mera matlab hai ki juniors are nervous about how their life in college will be like right??
Viren: haan par whats your point??
Virat: bhai I think ke humein juniors ke liye ek party rakni chahiye. Aur aap Jeevika ko bhi invite kar lein
Viren: not a bad idea lekin Jeevika junior nahi hai she'z in second year
Virat: lekin uski behen toh hai na. Kya naam tha uska mansi janki...
Viren: Maanvi
viren corrected him
Virat: haan haan whatever her name is who cares. Anyway my point is that woh Jeevika ko saath le ke aa sakti hai.

Viren had a big smile on his face
Viren: great! Wow its gonna be fun
Virat: yeah maza toh bohot aaye ga. Aur uss ded futiya ko bhi pata chal jaye ga ke aise logo ko kaise treat kiya jata hai
he said with an evil smile
Viren looked at his brother and asked him ''tujhe kya hua??''
virat came out of his fantasy ''kuch nahi bhai woh I'm just looking forward to show these juniors ke Mumbai mein log kya kar sakte hain''
Viren: arre haan. Woh uss larki ko bhi invite karna jiske bare mein tu Jeevika ko bata raha tha. I mean she'z also new
Virat: usse main kaise bhool sakta hoon?? Khaas ussi ke liye hi toh party rak raha hoon
he said again with an evil smile but viren did not notice as he was too busy thinking about the party

Viren: anyways main Jeevika ko phone karke bata deta hoon and then we're off to bed.
viren rang jeevika and invited her and maanvi...

later on...
Jeevika sat besides Maanvi on the bed
Jeevika: mannu. Viren ji ne hum dono ko invite kiya hai party mein
Maanvi's eyes nearly popped out ''kya! Party?? Nahi Di plz main koi party sharty mein nahi jaoun gi
Jeevika: mannu viren ji ne humein invite kiya hai aur agar tu aise mana kar degi toh unhe bura lag jayega
Maanvi sighed ''teek hai Di I'll go for u...and for your viren JI'' she teased

after a while Jeevika noticed that Maanvi was so quiet
Jeevika: mannu kya hua tujhe. Tu itni chup kyun hai??
Maanvi sighed
Maanvi: kya bataon Di?? Aaj mujhe ek larka mila aur usne mere status pe sawal uthaya toh phir mujhe gussa aa gaya aur Maine bhi jawab diya
Jeevika: kya? Mannu tujhe jawab nahi Dena chahiye tha aise
Maanvi: Di usse sunana zaruri tha. Par shayad main kuch zada bol gayi. Actually mujhe thora bura lag raha hai. Mujhe aise baat nahi karni chahiye thi. Main usse sorry kahun gi
Jeevika: haan mannu
Maanvi: par Di aise sorry bolne se shayad woh nahi maane ga. I mean woh high society mein hai toh main...uske liye ek sorry present lun!?
she said in enthusiasm
Jeevika laughed at her sister's enthusiasm and hugged her for her nature.
Jeevika: teek hai hum kal hi Jake lete hain ok?? Ab so jao

both sisters went to sleep.

GUYZ PLZ TELL ME HOW WAS IT?? I WILL UPDATE PART 4 SOON

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