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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lost and lonely coz you're the only one
That knows me and I can't be without you
Lost and lonely coz you're the only one
That knows me and I can't be without you


It had been a month since kriya came back to her dil, dosti and dance. But when she reached ST. Louis to meet her friends and her love all accused her and said bad things to her (excluding rey). He was standing in a far away corner in a delima that should he be happy or should he be angry...


Hai kya yeh jo tere mere darmiyaan hai
Andekhi ansuni koi dastaan hai
Hai kya yeh jo tere mere darmiyaan hai
Andekhi ansuni koi dastaan hai
Lagne lagi, ab zindagi khaali



He went to Fire exit. It was his daily routine. Since that day when kriya returned he always used to go over there and cry his heart out. He always used to ask his baatcutter's universe ji that was he that bad that she left him...??? why did she left him...? wasn't he capable of her love and even friendship that she left him...???



Lagne lagi har saans bhi khaali (lost and lonely)
Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere (lost and lonely)
Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere (lost and lonely)
Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere (lost and lonely)
Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere (lost and lonely)


He beat the wall as hard as he could and again started crying bitterly. He was least bothered that his hand was bleeding. The same questions were ringing in his mind. He was guilty that he didnt said anything in her favour. Yes he wanted to say in her favour. he wanted them to stop their rubbish crap and listen to her. He saw that she was trying to give an explanation but none of then bothered to listen to what she has to say.


Ajnabi se huye kyun pal saare
Yeh nazar se nazar yeh milaate hi nahin
Ik gani dehaayi cha gayi hai
Manzilein raaston mein hi gum hone lagi
Ho gayi ansuni har dua ab meri
Reh gayi ankahi bin tere (lost and lonely)
Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere (lost and lonely)
Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere (lost and lonely)
Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere (lost and lonely)
Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere (lost and lonely)


He saw her face which was stained with tears. His heart ached to see that condition of hers. How he wished to let away all her sorrow but sigh* he cant do that. All those memories started to appear infront of his eyes (good one's). He knew she lied to him that day saying she dont love him. He knew she can't do that and she dont meant it. He knew it all. It was just that hhe want her to say what the truth is...!!!


Raah mein roshni ni hai kyun haath choda
Iss taraf shaam ne kyun hai apna muh moda
Yun ke har subah ik bereham si baat ban gayi
Hai kya yeh jo tere mere darmiyaan hai
Andekhi ansuni koi dastaan hai


Next day he again came to fire exit but this time he saw her. He saw her sleeping over there with dried tears on her face. He had never talked to anyone since the day she came back not even sharon. Whenever she used to come to him he used to shout on her. Not only her he even shouted on swayam. He wasn't the rey which they knew...!!!!


Lagne lagi, ab zindagi khaali khaali
Lagne lagi har saans bhi khaali (lost and lonely)
Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere (lost and lonely)
Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere (lost and lonely)
Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere (lost and lonely)
Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere (lost and lonely)
Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere (lost and lonely)
Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere .. lost and lonely ..
lost and lonely'lost and lonely


He cleared her tears and cursed himself as he knew that this was all b'coz of him.




*End*


Sorry for a sad one


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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
hmmm awesome k
lovely ya thoda sa sad tha
but its ok
how u explain rey's feeling
its amazing
and song choice is fab...one of my fav song
continue kar na ise...
plzzz
Edited by Kriti_rox - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kriti_rox

hmmm awesome k

lovely ya thoda sa sad tha
but its ok
how u explain rey's feeling
its amazing
and song choice is fab...one of my fav song
continue kar na ise...
plzzz


mood of hei re
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Posted: 13 years ago
#4
acch tha


as rey knew his baatcutter
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Posted: 13 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: Kriti_rox

hmmm awesome k

lovely ya thoda sa sad tha
but its ok
how u explain rey's feeling
its amazing
and song choice is fab...one of my fav song
continue kar na ise...
plzzz


sahi mein continuation chahiye???

baaki chodke isi pe lag jaaun phir 😛

soch lo 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#6
This is sooo SADD yett sooo beautifulll ahh loved it<3
whever you write do pm me:)

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