BOUNDLESS LUV maaneet SS..PART 7 pg 17..26/sept/12

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

congrats...

CS
interesting...

prologue
so nice...
cont soon dear...

PS - what about CHILDHOOD SWEETHEARTS?

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Moody_Barbie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

interesting...

would love to read

Cont. Soon

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punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Interesting prologue
Update soon

Can you give links to your other works

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princes939

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: punam2712
Interesting prologue
Update soon

Can you give links to your other works

LINK 😊

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kkiddoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

nice start continue soon dear

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Mitu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Hey i like concept
I have a name

boundless love

like story say how they love each other after 8year seperation

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singh24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Nice concept dear...😛

plz cont..

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Gurti.love

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Awsome!!!!
Waiting 4 next!!!!!
UPDATE SOON 😃

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maanluver

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

amazing prologue n cs

cont soon

waiting eagerly

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princes939

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Geet's house in hp:
It was sunday..a girl sleeping on bed with her hairs scatered all over her head. When her mom screaming from kitchen "geet uth dus baj gaye hai"
But stil no movement from geet. Mom came in her room moving the curtains from the window so sunshine could wake her up..geet"hmm kya mom aj sunday ha na itne jaldi kau utha dya?" mom"jaldi utho packin krni ha tm mumbai ja rhi ho" geet jumped from bed in exictment amd screamed "reallly??"and huged her mom "arey bas bas.tere papa or mein kafi time se soch rhe the ke ab time aa gaya ha..tu apne do saal ki parhai ab mumbai mein hi kare gi" geet"tw kya ap ne dadi or maan ko bata diya?"
Mom "han dadi ko pata ha lekin maan kuch kam ke silsile mein india se bahir gaya ha kuch din mein wapis aye ga itne time ke lye tu dadi ke sat rhe gi or dadi ne tera admision waha bhot ache college mein kra diya ha."
Geet became sad that maan wasnt at mumbai but then her thought made her happy st"itne saal wait kiya ha ap kuch din hi sahi" and started packing..she took out maans and her pic and kised maan on the pic

it was pic of maaneet ven they were young"maan very soon we vil be together"she bid bye to her mom dad and her dad left her on bus stand.
She reached mumbai..she was very tried..then she saw a man holding a board on which her name was writen..she guesed the dadi would have send the driver. She reached khurana mension..it was like a palace to her..she rang the bell..a servant opened the door..she was abt to enter when dadi came and geet was abt to take blesings by feet when dadi huged her "ap geet..kesi hai ap?ap janti nae hai kitna khush hai hum ap ko dekh kr"
Geet also got emotional "dadi ap nae janti mein ne app ko kitna miss kiya"
Dadi welcomed geet and showed her guest room and asked her to freshen up and have some sleep as she looked tried. She over sleeped..when she woke up "ot teri..saat baj gae or mein abhi tak soo rhi hon. Dadi mere bare mein kya soche gi..jadi se neche jati hon"
Geet when to dadi who was in living room readin magzine "sorry dadi mein kuch ziyada hi so gai wo actualy mein raste mein itna thak..."dadi didnt let her complete "ayre koi baat nae yeh ap ka hi ghr ha ap jb tak bhe soe or wase bhe ap itna thaki hoi aye thi mein ne socha ap ko distrub nae krti" geet and dadi talked so much. Dadi told her that after two days she had to join colege. They had diner and slept.
Precap:
New college..maan entry!!

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