U 4get me but ur heart stil remembers{MG ss}done!!

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U FORGET ME BUT UR HEART STILL REMEMBERS ME..MG ss(COMPLETED)


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Posted: 13 years ago
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INDEX

PART 1

PART 2

PART 3

PART 4

PART 5

PART 6

PART 7

PART 8

PART 9

PART 10

(COMPLETED)

Edited by princes939 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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My first ever ss on our beloved MAANEET!!!!Please guys coment and like!!And bare with me..not a good writter..sorry for the mistakes..If u guys will respond then i will continue!!!And as am new writer dont expect me to update soon..!!I will try to update asap!!

The story begins from maan in the hospital after what pammi did..he had a memory loss but till now no one knows..!!

PART 1


The next day geet comes to the hospital when she comes to know abt maan is fine now.when she reached hospital she comes to know that maan has already discharged..she gets angry on him that he didnt even inform her but den calms down that now he is fine...
(From here my ss starts)
When geet reaches home dadi ma was siting in the living room..she went to her "dadima maan kaha hai,mein un ko lene gai hospital lene gai or doctor ne bataya ke wo discharge ho gae hai,yeh bhe koi baat hoi mein itni pershan thi or ek bar bhe nae bataya" dadi smiled at her her complaining face and said "arey geet shant ho jae ap ke maan apne room mein hai jaye or mil lijae"
She made her way to her room and mumered "abhi pochti hon"
She entered her room..maan was hand was fractured and he was trying to take off his shirt..her anger few away she smiled and made her away to him. She tried to help him taking stirt from his hand "maan ap bhe na,chale choriye mein ap ki shirt nikal deti hon"with that she was jerked away from maan..his face was all red due to anger "kya maan maan laga rakha ha,tmhari himat kese hoi.."but geet cut him off thought maan is teasing her..but geet is geet wo phele se maan pr gusa thi or ab she came in her sherni mood "mr.khurana ziyada bolne ki zorot nae ha(she pointed her finger on him) ek tw bina bataye ghr aa gae..aa rhi thi na mein lene...jb se hospital se aye hai bhot chirchire hogaye ha..ab agr ap ne mujhe manane ki koshish bhe ki tw bhe mein itni asani se nae mane wali" with that she fumed off from the room in anger. Maan mumered in anger "samjti kya ha apne ap ko..how dare she!!lagta ha dadi ma ne nayi maid rakhi ha lekin itni batamize..aj hi ise nikalwata hon"..fuming in anger he calls adi "helo adi"adi sense anger in his voice he stumered "go..oodd mo..rnni..g s..sir" "adi mr.sharma ki file le kr ghr ao" "pr sir us project ko khatam hoe ek saal hogaya ha..latest project mr.dobirial ka ha..us ki file le kr ao..us project ka kam bhot pendening ha" maan got confused but then asked adi to bring that file he is going to start his work on that project. Maan was confused so he forgot abt geet.
Here geet come to living room dadi, dev and nandini was siting here (In my ss there is NO lucky preto or mamaji..and dev and nandani r married..all know abt it exept maan because of his memory loss)
All r talking casualy..geet comes and sits with dadi..geet murming "dusht danav kahi ke pata nae kau itna tang kr rhe hai..itne tym baad aye hai tw socha koi pyari batein kre ge pr nae wo tw msk hai na..lekin mein bhe geet msk hon..."her murmings was interpted by dadima"atey bete kya hoa..jb se aye hai gum som si hai..kya soch rhi hai?kahi ap ke dusht danav ap ko phr tw nae sata rhi?". Geet"or nae tw kya dadima abhi itni din baad ghr aye hai or abhi se mujhe tang krne lag gaye" dadima smiles then strighned her face seeing her angry "aray ap dono ki tu tu mein mein tw har waqt chalti rehti ha ab ap dono ke bech nae hi pare tw acha hoga"geet made a baby face..geet and dadi sawdev and nandani who was lost in there on world and started gigling with that they came from there world..both were red due to embrasment..nandani "didi mein abhi khana lagwati hon"she ran in the kitchen..geet called nakul "nakul kamre se maan ko khane ke lye bola laye"dadi"nakul adi bhe aya ha maan ke saat adi ko bhe lunch ke lye bolaye"
Nakul went to maans room and called them..while geet got a call from her massi..she couldnt ignor the call..all were having dinnr while geet was talking to her massi in the balcony..when she came all already had there dinnr..dadi came and said
"geet bete aye mein ap hi ka wait kr rhi thi aj hum ap ko khana serve kre ge"geet smiled and had her dinner.


Precap
Maan"phele mere ghr mein aye phr kamre mein or ab himat tw dekho mere bed pr so rhi ha"



MY FIRST TRY...!!!plzz comment and like!!!

NEXT :PART 2
Edited by princes939 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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first at your first post .. good job... will u pm mee dear the same ...
Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats...

part 1
wow super start...
cont soon dear...
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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heey congarts on ur first try dear...
part 1
awesome part...
love it...
continue soon & add me in ur pm list ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats...

part 1
wow super start...
cont soon dear...
PLZZ PM ME WHEN U UPDATEEE
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing start...
precap luks interesting...

do pm the next part sent u request accept it plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on new ff
awesome dear
continue soon
add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Soo less coments and likes...i expected more.. 😭
Still giving next part!!I have already written till part 4 but i womt give till i get good response..plzzz like and coment...!!THANKS to them who have liked had coment..!!

PART 2



Maan was doing his loaded work in his study room..while geet after dinner made her way to room..found maan is no where in the room..then thought mayb he is working. Made her way to study room..she peeped though the door slowly and saw him working and made a angry face and started complaining to her babaji looking up "kya babaji maan ko kuch tw aqal de ke bivi ko bhe kuch time de magar nae wo tw msk hai na,abhi batati hon"she entered and spoke "maan"maan ignored it controling himself from being angry..geet again spoke his name little loud and streched his name "Maaan mujhe neend nae aa rhi" maan turned to her..maan"maan tm mujhe maan bolao gi?"stil calming himself
Geet "tw kya bolao?sweetheart kaho..theek ha mujhe kya itraz hoga..sweetheart mujhe neend nae aa rhi..please sbha apna dusht danav wala roop dhal lena or abhi yeh kam chore or room mein chale sone"saying that she closed his laptop..maan mumered "himat tw dekho is ki jb se ghr pr ayi ha mere pe ayse rule kr rhi ha jase meri bivi ho"...maan"kya kaha tm ne sweetheart,abhi batata hon" he jerked her closer to the wall..maan was so closed to her that he felt her breathing..he went close to her ear..both lost in east other..maan didnt even notice when his hands went to her wrist and geet hands on his shoulders then deept into his hair puling him closer..both lost in each othr and when there lips were abt to meet suddenly there was sound of coughing and gigling..both came back to there senses and turned there face to the door dev was standing there his hands on his eyes saying"sorry mein ne kuch nae dekha"and gigling..sudenly both jerked each othr away geet red all blushing and maan was like why he did how can he do this..he turned to see geet she was blushing..he was like what IS SHE BLUSHING!!!then his eyes went to her sindoor and black chain..he widened his eyes OMG SHE IS MARRIED..she is so shameless!! Maan was lost in himself thinking wat he did..while geet excused herself out of the room and made her way to her bed room.
Dev "bro" maan came out of his thoughts "han"..dev "wo bro mein khe rha tha ke abhi ap hospital se discharge hoe hai u need rest tw kuch din ke lye mein office sambal leta hon" maan "nae dev mein bilkul theek hon..wase bhe adi se meri baat hoi ha bhot pendening work ha lekin tm chaho tw meri kuch projects mein help kr skte ho" dev "theek ha bro gud night" maan" gud night".
Maan when to his room..lights were swiched off he didnt bothered to swich on..he changed himself into his vest and trouser and when to bed..he didnt notice that there was geet on the other side..he pulled the blanket and was abt to sleep when he felt soft body against himself waping him in her embace..he widened his eyes and he swiched on the lamp which was in the side table.
He was shocked to see geet..he was abt to remove her arms when she got distured by light..she unwaped her arms and tured other side..!!
Maan suddenly got up from bed.
Maan mumered "WHAT THE HELL!!yeh mere bed pr!!"
Maan face tured into red..he was hell angry.Maan"phele mere ghr mein aye phr kamre mein or ab himat tw dekho mere bed pr so rhi ha" maan tried to wake her "suno..hello" them mumered "kya nam tha is ka" then again tried to wake her taping her shoulders..geet puled his hand put it under her head and mumered in sleepy way "maan please sone dijeye na please badmashi na kre" maan heard her and mumered "badmashi..what the hell..!!is ko lagta ha msk badmashi kr rha ha or wo bhe ek shaadi shuda ke saat..yeh pagal larki mere kamre mein kya kr rhi ha"
In anger he went to washroom to cool down his anger and have bath.
While having bath he was thinking what has his life turned into after the acident..then remember his and geets close scene in the study room.
He closed his eyes in furstation..!!how could he!!and that too with a married women..!!
In anger he punched hard on the mirror..blood started coming from his hand..mirror was broken up into peices!!after having bath he when to room..saw geet sleeping peacefuly he went to guest room and tried hard to sleep..at around 3 he slept.


Precap:
Geet in hospital


NEXT :PART 3
Edited by princes939 - 13 years ago

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