''Mohabat ka aghaaz hai''update at pg 30

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Now it has been since 2 months that ''Nazraana'' has got ended and Naina is feeling sad as she never wanted that the show got ended but as the days are rolling on Naina is missing more n more the show on the other end ''SHARIKH''is also missing the show badly but somewhat he is getting busy in one thing or another as first he visted his Family n than he was also offered for the new show but things are rolling in his mind aswell weather he do this or not but he was adviced by Naina to move on his carrier but he somewat nt feeling gud becuz he wants to work wid naina in anycase.
(This is the story scatch)
Its 6 am in the morning when Naina phone was ringing it was no other than Sher she was a bit shocked to see his phone call in that early morning but she picked up the phone and than
S:hi tumhe subha subha tang kardia na?
N:Nai tumhe aisa kun laga main bus tumhare call is waqt dekh kar dar gae the aur kuch nai
S:nai wu maine tumhe kuch batane ke liye call ki hai maine tumhe batay tha na ke mujhe ek show offer hua hai aur uske liye mujhe Beiging bhi jana tha tu wu mujhe abhi pata chala hai ke uske shooting parsun se start hurae hai aur mere pass kal ka din he hai yahn par
(Naina was feeling sad)
N:Oh yeh tu bht ache khabar di tumne tumhare flight kab ke hai?
S:abhi he sab kuch bata dia tu surprise kaise dunn ga
N:surprise tum kis surprise ki baat karae hu?
S:Agar surprise bata dia tu surprise kaisa
N:Acha pher tum mujhe ye batao hum kab mil raen hain
S:tum ajj free huge?
N:Haan tumhare liye main hamesha free hi hute hun
S:acha ye tu bht ache baat hai pher my jahlli main tumse ajj dophar mei ek baje milugaa kunki main sara din tumhare sath bitana chata hun
N:phir main tyar rahunge
S:ek baat yaad rakahana main hi tumhe pick karunga
N:nai tum rehne du main khud ajaoge aur phir ghar pe bhi subku pata chal jaye ga ke main tumhare sath jarae hun
S:Naina tu ismei kya hua sab ku ek na ek din tu ye pata chalana hi hai našŸ˜‰
N:wu jab pata chalega tu chalega but abhi main nai chate ke kisi ku bhi hamre bare mei ye pata chale
S:tum jante hu na ajj kal har koi humse yehi sawaal karaha hai ke kya hum waqyiye mei ek sath hain ya nai par tum hamesha baat ku chupate hu aisa kun?
N:bus main nai chate ke koi abhi hamre relationship ke bare mei jane kunki main abhi in sab cheezun ku face nai karsakte mujhe bhi waqt chaiye
S:acha tum plz aisa na suchu tum ye sab churu aur ye bato tum ku raat mei neend ajate hai ?
N:ye kaisa sawaal hai?
S:bus yehi sawaal hai mera kunki maine tumhare status check kia tha tumne hi likha hua tha na sleepless nites aur tum jante hu tumhare fans ne tu iska matlab hi samjh lia ke ye wajha sirf mei hi hunnn tum mere he bare mei sochte hu aur neend nai ate tumku pher
N:Tumna bht naughty hugae hu main ab phone rakh rae hunn
S:acha theek hai tum araam karu par yaad rakahna ke tumhe mujhe se milna hai ek baje
N:Hann baba main yaad rakhunge
S:ok than bye my jhalli my love
N:bye luv u 2


All are welcome to give me andas and tamataars this is my first time Iam writing any short story if u like it than I will continue it other wise I will stop



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Posted: 13 years ago
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oyay hoyay yeh tou humaray love birds ki kahan hai cntinue plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow..nice..aajkal sab real life stories RS SS main likthe hain...niceee
Edited by anamika_0 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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reality chk written really well do cntinue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow dear so lovely!!!loved their convo...their deep love,their pain,his naughtiness,her shyness,their determinations all are included in this short RS.too good.please continue
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Originally posted by: asihaseen

wow dear so lovely!!!loved their convo...their deep love,their pain,his naughtiness,her shyness,their determinations all are included in this short RS.too good.please continue

u r comments means alot to me thanks for liking😊
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Originally posted by: silla

oyay hoyay yeh tou humaray love birds ki kahan hai cntinue plzzz

thanks for liking
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Now its 10 am in the morning when Naina alarm clock starts sounding
Naina was very sleepy she dnt wants to get up but all of sudden she remembered that today she has to meet Sharikh so after that she quickly gets up and goes in for fresh in up now it is 11:30 am and she is freshed in up she was wearing a beautiful black top and jeans she is looking adorable after that she goes out of her room.
(here m is for Naina's mom)
M:beta ajj subha subha tyar huke kahan jare hu?
N:MAA wu main apne dostun ke sath movie dekhane jare hunnn
(actually she was lying to her)
M:Beta itni subha subha kun thore dear tak chale jana
N:Maa main wu actually sab dostun ne plan hi istarah bana lia tu maine kuch kaha nai pher
(meanwhile her phone starts ringing it was no other than Sharikh call she didnt accept the call)
N:Maa main jaraen hunn mere dost mujhe pick up karne ai hai
M:nashta tu karke jao
N:Nai main wahan hi kuch kha lunge
(she dnt wants Sharikh 2 wait now)
N:achaa Maa main chalte hunn ab
M:ok Beta bye khayal rakhana apna
(her Mom bade her bye)
Now She is going downstairs where Sharikh is waiting for her desparately He was wearing a white shirt and jeans looking as hot as u can imagine
S:hi naina
(they gave eachother side kiss and a small hug)
N:hi chalein?
(Shahrikh opens his car door for her and let her in)
N:thanks
S:U R welcome
(now in car)
N:Tum kis surprise ki baat karahe they?
S:ohuuu itni be cahnni likn abhi tumhe thora wait karna padega
N:ye galat baat hai tumne hi tu kaha tha main bataunga
S:han tu maine kab mana kia hai batana se bataunga naa par abhi thore der ke baad
N:acha theek hai par ye batao ke hum ja kahan rehein hain?
S:jahan tumkahu main bus ajj ka ek pal bhi tumhare bina nai bitna chata
N:Mai bhi
S:Aisa karte hain ke hum pehle ice cream kahtae hian
N:haan mujhe bhi bht bhuk lag rae hai
S:kun tum nashata karke nai ai?
N:actually wu tum agaye tu main nashata nai kar pae
S:chalo pher hum kuch aur kahtae hain
N:nai nai hum ice cream hi kahte hain
(in car Naina pour her head on Sharikhs Shoulder)
S:ok
(they stopped near ice craem parlour and ordred ice cream and have it)
N:Wu tumhare lips ke pass ice cream lag gae hai
S:yahan yahan!
N:nai wu wahan
(Naina removed her ice cream from his lips and meanwhile he kissed her finger Naina shys)
N:ye kya karahe hu?
S:kya kya karha hunn main?(wid naught smile)
N:tumhe pata hai
S:ice craem pasand ai?
N:haan bht pasand ai
(now they moved ahead from the ice cream parlour)
S:Main tumhare sath apne zindge ke sab se haseen pal bitana chata hunn take jab wahan dur hunnn tu mere pass tumhare khubusurat yaadein hun
N:mere dil mei tu sirf aur sirf tum hu har pal har lamha
S:Main tumhe ajj aik aise jagha leke jana chata hunnn jahan par sirf tum aur main hunn
N:main soch bhi nai sakte the ajj main is taraha tumhare sath hunge tumne mujhe bht khushi de hai
S:ye khushi tumhare liye main har waqt tyar rakhana chata hunn jise tumhare labun pe muskhurahat aye hasi khlele


will continue wid surprise he planned for her!
hope u liked my try!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks😊
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