''Mohabat ka aghaaz hai''update at pg 30 - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
iska agla update kab milega... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
N:wase main yeh soch rae hunn tumahre choice itni ache kabse hugaye hai pehle tu kabhi aisa khubusauraat gift nai dia?
S:acha...g tu kya tum wu heart bracelet bhool gae hu?😉
N:nai...baba acha tumne apni pics tu dekhain hinn nai?
S:Pics dekh ke kya karuge jab banda app ki khidmat mei hazir hai Mam..
N:Nai kun bhana nai chalega mujhe tu abhi dekhane hain pics
(Naina starts hitting his shoulder and starts compelling him to show her the pics)
S:acha tu yahaan par mere ahmiat kam hai aur mere pics ke zyaada hai?
N:haan yehi samjh luuu 😉
(he brought his camera and started showing his pics to her suddenly in one pic her mouth remained wide open)
N:Ye kyaa hai Sharikh?
S:kya ?
N:ye dekhu !
S:tumne ye pic bhi dekh li isliye main tumhe nai dekha raha tha
N:haha
(Naina starts laughing becuz in that pic Sharikh was having lolly pop in his mouth in the swimming pool he was looking funny in that pic)
N:ohuuu...so sorry 😆wase ye pic ka kya raaz hai?
S:Ab bus mujhe wapis de du warna main naraz hujaoga
N:aise kaise naraaz hujaoge main tumhe kabhi naraaz nai karsakte
(Sharikh ku kuch naughty sujata hai and he said main tu ab naraaz hunnn mana lunn mujh ku)
N:par kun?😕
S:Tum mujhe mana rae hu tu theekh hai warna main jaraha hunnn
(Naina came closer to him held his hand and said Iam sorry)
S:Tumhare haan sorry aisa kaha jata hai?
(He was now full on in naughty mood)
N:haan hamre haan tu aise hi kaha jata hai...
S:Main jaraha hunn
(He stands to leave Naina pulled him back and both came closer they shared an eye lock coming closer suddenly bell rang ting ting naina atonce left from there saying Priya huge mai dekhte hunn jake Sharikh understood she has became shy she opened the door it was Priya Naina was getting pink )
P:Kya karahe thi😉
N:kuch bhi tu nai tum abhi gaye
P:Time dekha hai appne abhi bhi na ate main
N:maine aisa kab kaha
P:haan ab app ku behan ki kahan parwah app ku apne wu ju mil gaye hain
(Naina hits her saying pagli tumhe main kya kabhi bhul sakte hunn meanwhile Sharikh also came there)
S:kya batein huraen hain Behanun mei?
N:wu Behnun ki batein hain tumhe kun batyaein
P:Haan g hune wale Jija g app ku hum ye batein nai bata sakte
S:acha g na batain Naina main ab chalta hunn Ghar bhi itne dinun se band tah bht dhull hugaye hugee safai waighara karne parege main chalta hunn
N:Kya main tumhare sath aonn madad hujayege
P:bilkul nai Naina itni raat ku main tumhe kahin nai jane dunge😆
(actually she was teasing her)
N:Priya usku help ki zururat huge
S:nai Naina main karlunga wase bhi bht raat hugaye hai tum ab jao ge tu wapis kab aoge
P:Dekhein na hune wale Jija G Abhi app ke biwi bane nai aur ghar ki fikar abhi se hune lag gaye hai
S:naina sach mei iski zururat nai main karlun ga tum ruku yehein hinn
(Naina actually wants to go with him )
P:acha jayein main tu sirf mazaak karae thi likin ab wapis kab ayeinge ?
N:tum fikar mat karna main 2 ghante tak ajonge driver ku call kardunge wu mujhe pick karlega
S:Isiki kya zururat hai Naina main hunn na main tumhe churr dunga
N:nai iske zururarat nai main call kardunge Driver ku
P:acha ab ye bhass app raste mei bhi continue kar sakte hain ab jayein warna main phir jane nai dunge apni Didi ku
(Sharikh wid that cute smile nai itna bahra risk nai le sakta main main chalta hunn ab both leave from there in stairs Sharikh tu Naina kya ab tum mere bina waqiye hi nai rha sakte)

To be continued
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banfasha thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
I think this time my update is not s gud!
😕
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: banfasha

I think this time my update is not s gud!

😕

no dear it is lovely...
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Posted: 12 years ago
this is superb awwsome dea..👏 loving it..❤️ do continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow awesome!!!their convo is the most attractive thing in ur RS.please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asihaseen

wow awesome!!!their convo is the most attractive thing in ur RS.please continue soon

really!
😛
asihaseen thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

yea,really cutest😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice story line ...plzz update early next part...cant waittt
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Posted: 12 years ago
N:haan nai rha sakte ab khush?
S:Haan bhut khush😊
(they reached now Sharikh's apartment Sharikh opened the door as he opened it there was complete darkness Naina hold Sharikh's arm Sharikh switched on the light)
S:Tum daar gaye the kya?
N:nai main kun darne lage jab tum mere sath hu😉
(as they entered more they can see alot of dust on evertyhing )
S:Tum baitho main sab saaf karta hunn tab tak
N:pagal hugaye hu kya?main yahan baithane thora ai hunn main tu tumahre help karwane ai hunn tum mujhe bata du duster kahan hai main tab tak dusting kar dete Hunn
S:Acha theek hai but mujhe ye acha nai lag raha tum is tarah ye sab😕
N:kun?Kya ye mera Ghar nai😉
S:hai naaa
(they both hugged eachother)
N:Sharikh ab mujhe duster de bhi du main zyaada dear yahan nai rha sakte mujhe ghar bhi jaana hai tumhe tu paata hai Priya mera wait kaare huge
S:acha main deta Hunn (He gave duster tu her and both clean up all the mess )
S:sab hugaya thank u Naina agar tumna ate tu main ye sab itni jalde nai kar pataa(holdng Naina's hand and admiring her)
N:Koi baat nai mujhe ye sab karna acha lagata hai acha ab main chalte hunnn
S:nai main tumhe aise nai jane dunga wait main abhi Pizza order karta hunn
N:Sharikh is ki koi zururat nai rehne du
S:maine tumse pocha is ki zururta hai ke nai
(He orders the pizza)
S:aoo Naina main tumhe apni shopping dekhata Hunn N:han dekhao na main bhi dekhun tumne kya kya lia?
(He brought his bag and start showing his shopping meanwhile he was showing the things to her a a photo frame in which Naina pic was came in his hand)
N:ye kya hai S:Kuch bhi tu nai
N:Ab dekaho bhi mujhe
(He showed it to her)
N:tum ye kun leke gaye they?
S:ye bhi koi pocheane wali baat hai main apni Jhalli ku wahan kaise na leke jaata
N:Tum na bht sweet hu and uski cheeks ku dubate huye
S:Aur tum bhi
(Meanwhile Pizza Man came knocked on the door he Brought the pizza)
S:pizza bhi agaya main plates laata hunn N:hmmm
(They both ate pizza after that)
N:ab main chalte hunnn driver ku call krdete hunn wu mujhe le ke jaye ga
S:Nai main tumhe uske sath nai jane dunga
N:aur wu kun Mr?
S:ab main tumhara mangetaar hunn aise kaise kisi ke sath bhi jane dunga wu bhi itne raat ku?
N:acha Baba tum bht ziddi hu
S:wu tu main hunnn and Smiles😆
S:Ohuuu main ek cheez tu bhul he gaya
N:kya ?
S:ruku andar ao tu
(they eneterd the apartment again)
S:tumhe kya laga main tumhare liye wahan se sirf ek necklace he laya hunn?
N:haan😕
(He brought a bag and gave it to Naina)
N:ye kya hai Sharikh?
S:ye tumhare liye hai
N:ismei kya hai
S:Ismei kuch gifts hain tumahre liye
N:sharikh kya zururat thi insab ki
S:Ye mera pyaar hai tum he nai chaye tu wapis de du making angry face😭
N:nai...ye tu mere liye bht khass hain
(and kissed on Sharikh's Cheeks)
S:thank u
N:wu kisliye?
(Sharikh too kissed her cheeks and said isliye and they both leave)




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