''Mohabat ka aghaaz hai''update at pg 30

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asihaseen

@asihaseen

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

very nice update.what will be his surprise?!

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banfasha

@banfasha

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

well wait for taht it will be something u will loved!

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banfasha

@banfasha

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Now they reached a beautiful place which is surrounded by all greenery and the weather is also amazing a weather which is very romantic before getting outside the car Shahrikh put blind fold on Naina's eyes so She couldnt see wat surprises he made for her.

N:y u have put this blind fold on my eyes?

S:I have put this blind fold so u can feel special

(Sharikh brought Naina's out of the car holding her hand)

S:Now I am going to remove the blind fold are u ready for it

(very excited Naina)

N:yea Iam

(he removed the blind fold when she opens the eyes she is shocked to see such a beautifully decroted place with all the candles and ballons it was a kind of small cottage in which it was all decorated there was also a table n chair on which their was two glasses and wine)

N:Ohhh u all did this?

S:yea do u liked my surprise?

(Naina hugged Sharikh and she was unable to speak she was feeling so overwhelmed with all that)

S:my sweet heart I have done this all for u so I can tell u how much I love u U r My life my everything

(kissing on her forhead)

N:Iam feeling so lucky today u made my day

S:actually real surprise is abhi baki

N:curiously asks him about that?

(asking her to sit on the chair he put forward the chair for her and let her sit on it)

S:So do u like to drink something?

N:hmmm

(HE Removed the cap of wine bottle it sizzles and pour it in the glasses)

S:I want to say something to u

N:yea kahu na...

S:main ne ajj socha ke tumhe apni dil ki baat pure tarah bat he dunn

N:pure tarah kya matlab tumne abhi tak mujhse kuch chupaya hai?

(She is a bit confused now)😕

S:wu maine tum, se mere zindage ka bht bara sach chupaya hai aisa sach jise tum janke shaid mujhse bht dur cahle jao

(She is like crying)😭

N:tum aise kun kha rae hu?

S:main tumhe ye sach nai batana chata tha but kya karun mujhe ek na ek din tu ye sach batana he huga na

N:Plz tum aise na kahu

(wid naught smile He irritates her more)

S:Acha agar tum janan he cahhte hu tu pehle apni ankhein band karu

N:Ab ye kaisa mazaak hai mere yahan JAAN jarae hai

S:mere jaan ke jann kaise jasakte hai?😉

N:Tumne mujhe yahan isliye bulaya tha?

S:aree aree naraaz kun hurae hu acha apni ankhein band karu

(She make faces and atlast closes her eyes Sharikh brought out a beautiful diamond ring from his pocket and helds Naina's hand and make her wear that ring Naina opens her eyes she actually now understands wat actually happens to her she was blushing like hell)

S:Kaisa laga mera surprise>?

N:agar tum isku surprise kehte hu tu main nai jante ke zindage ke khushe kisi kehte hain

(all this make her so emotional having tears in her eyes She hugged him so tightly and he kisses her cheeks)

S:Main tumhe jane se pehle ek yaad dena chata tha ek aise yaad jise tumhe mere kami mehsoos na hu

N:Main ajj bht khush hunn itni khush ke mujhe kahin mere he nazaar na lag jaye

S:Aise koi baat nai hai ye khushian tum desrve karte hu aur main ek sahe waqt ka wait karaha tah tumhe ye khushi dene ke liye

N:tumhe pata nai ke pechle dinun se mere maan mei kaise kaise ajeeb sawaal durr rahe they ek apl ke liye u mujhe laga shaid maine tumhe hamesha ke liye kho dia hai

S:tum ne aisa socha bhi kaise agar tum ne ainda se aisa socha bhi tu amin tumse kabhi baat nai karunga

N:Tum aise na kahu wu din jab ayega main mar jaonge

(uske lips pe hath rakhte huye tumne ainda se aise baat bhi ki tu...hugged her again)

S:chalo ab hum chalein ke raat bhi yehein bitani hai??wid naught smile

N:acha tu ye baat hai chalo theek ahi pher par pher mere MOM ku tumhe samjha dena ke unki Bete kahan gayab thi

S:tumhe yaad hai jab hum ekhte shooting kia karte they tu akasar raat mei kahin na kahin chale jaya karte they n tumhare ghar walun ku lagta tha Bache shooting pe masruuf hai...

N:sharikh ab bus bhi karuuu

(then they left that place it was almost 9 pm when they left)

Hope u liked this continuation Iam not making it so much romantic but I tried my level best to do it!

Edited by banfasha - 13 years ago

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annasweety

@annasweety

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

lovely plz update more God bless u dear

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banfasha

@banfasha

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: annasweety
lovely plz update more God bless u dear

thank u very😊 much!

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banfasha

@banfasha

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: anamika_0
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it will be continued!😊

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banfasha

@banfasha

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

After leaving that palce now they are in car and starts disscussing!

S:Tumhe ajj maine apna bana hi lia..

N:Main tumhare us din se hi hunn jab maine aur tumne ek dosre se pehle mulaqaat ki thi

S:par sahaid tab hum is feeling se waqif nai they ke akhir ye pyar kya huta hai tumse milne se pehle main ne na tu kabhi aisa kisi ke liye mehsoos kia na hi kabhi kisi ku us nazaar se dekha

N:tum nai jante main tu tumse bhi zyada anjaan thi in sabse maine tu kabhi kis larke dost tak nai banaya tha par tumse milne ke baad najaane mujhe kya hugaya ke main khud ku sambhaal nai paye wu larke ju asulluun(limits)ke bat karte the wu ajj is kadar badl jaye ge main khud bhi nai jante thi ye

S:Acha tu tum kahana chate hu ke ye sab mere wajha se hua hai haan?

N:haan ye sab tumne hi kia hai par aisa karke tumne muhe mere zindagi ka sab se acha ashaaas dia hai

(holding her hand he was driving the car gave her a sweet smile)

S:Aur tumne mujhe... kash ye lamhe yehen kahin thar jayein main nai chahta ke ye waqt agae guzre kunki pher mujhe tumse judaa huna parega

N:tum aise na kahu tum har wqat mere sath aur main tumahre sath hunn jab bhi tum ankh band karuge tu tum ku mere kami mehsoos nai huge

(he was smiling and admiring her... Naina to Sharikh agae dekhu tum drive kar hae hu)

S:hmmm...jab tum aise batein karte hu tu main apni nazrein tumse kaise hata sakta hunn?

N:Acha tum mujhe ab gahr choor du subha ke main ainn hui hunn MAA bhi pareshaan hurae hunge?

S:Tum ne phone pe bata tu dia tha ke tum thore dear tak ajoge

N:wu tu theek hai but ab bht raat hugaye hai

S:abhi tu humne kuch khaya bhi nai chalo na kahin jakar kuch kahte hain?

(Naina just nod they reached Macdonald and took burgers)

N:Sharikh main tumse kuch kahna chate hunn

(eating burger he nods haan kahu na)

N:tum bura tu nai manuge?

S:kun tum aisa kya kahana chate hu ju main bura manuga?

N:Wu main wu main

S:haan kahu na

N:Sharikh mai ye ring apne pass nai rakh sakte

S:Kya??😲

N:tum mujhe galat mat samjhu but main abhi ye ring apne pass nai rakh sakte tum jante huna ghar pe abhi kisi ku hamre bare mei kuch nai pata?

S:TU?

N:tu main nai chate ke koi bhi ye ring dekh kar sawaal kare

S:TU tum ye ring kahin chupa dena ya kha dena ke maine khareede hai

N:Wu tu theek hai par main nai chate ke main aisa karunn main us din haqq ke sath tumse ye ring wapis lunge jis din sab hamre bare mei jaan jaye gein

S:Naina tum jante hu na ye ring maine tumhe isliye di hai ke jab main yahan nai aur Beiging mei hu tu tum hare pass mere yaad hu...

N:Main khud bhi nai cahte ke main ye ring ik lamhe ke liye bhi apni ungle se utaronn par...

S:par war kuch nai tum ye ring apne pass rakhu

(atlast She agrees)

N:Acha tumhare tu subha 5 baje ki flight hai aur tum abhi tak mere sath hi hu tumne packing waighara nai karne aur pher araam bhi tu zururi hai tumhare liye itna lamba safar ju huga

S:Mam Mam sunye tu sahe

(She was giving him instructions continuolsy becux She is worried about him)

S:Ab tum mere bhi sunuge

N:haan bulu

S:Maine apni packing bhi karle hai aur mujhe thakawaat Ghar pe huge jab main tumhare sath hunnn tu mujhe thakawaat tu kya mujhe pata bhi nai chalta waqt kaise guxar gaya

(She was smiling)

N:Acha ab chalo yahan se ghar pe bhi jana hai

(they moved from there In car now)

S:Ab jab tak main yahan nai hunga tum mujhese waada karu tum yahan par khush rahuge aur haste rahuege udaas nai huge

(tears almost enrolled Naina's Eyes Sharikh noticed that he too having lil tears in his Eyes maine kaha na tum raooge nai haste rahuge and they wiped eachother tears)😭

N:Haan main nai runn ge main khush rahunge kunki mere pass tum na huke bhi hamesha pass hi hute hu

(now they raeched Naina's building its the time for them now to say bye both dnt want to say this they kept on sitting in the car for sometimes after that they came out of the car)

N:Bye Sharikh

S:BYE

(They moved ahead to their respective sides)

N:TO Her Self main kaise rahunnge tumhare bina

S:TO himself main tumhare bina nai rha sakta

(both turned and looked eachother and ran and hugged eachother)

N:Main tumhere bina nai rha sakte

S:tu kya main tumhare bina rha sakta hunn

(they realsed the hug)

N:likin ab tumhe jana huga par tum wada karu mujhe bhulge nai aur mujhe din mei ek baar zurur call karuge...

S:Ek bar sirf ek baar main tu apne Jhalii ku har wqat call karunga

N:acha agar har waqt phone pe lage rahe tu kaam kaun karegea?