''Mohabat ka aghaaz hai''update at pg 30 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -diva-shamya-

awwsome dea.. loved it.. thanx for the pm.. do continue soon.. 👏

Thanks for liking ...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I will make the next update on monday on sunday so sorry to all who have to wait ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb dr 👏 cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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fir kya hua ??? update early dear plzzz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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After cutting the call now Naina's Mom entered the room.
M:beta tum abhi tak jag rae huu????
N:Haan main bus sone hi jarae the
M:Ajj tu tum pher bht thakh gae huge aur tumhe chaiye tum ab araam karlu
N:Haan main bus sone hi lage thi
M:Naina mai tumse kuch kahna cha rae the mujhe nai pata yeh sahi waqt hai ye sab kahane ke liye likin ajj jab tumhare dost ka phone aya tumhare jane ke baad tu mujhe laga ke mujhe tumse ab yeh pochana chaiye...
(Naina was confused ke akhirr uski dost ne aisa kya kha dia ju Mere Maa mujhse yunn kha rae hain)
N:Jiii Maaa app kahiye na
M:ajj jab tum chale gaye the tu thore dear ke baad rohini ka phone ayya usne mujhe bataya ke tum phone pick nai karae maine us ku kaha ke wu tu ajj tum loogun ke sath hi haina tu usne kaha nai Anty
(Naina was embarassed now ke uski choori pakre gayae aur she dnt know wat to say now)
N:maa main unhi ke sath jane wale the phir...
(Naina was trying to make a excuse now but her Mother intruppted her by saying)
M:Naina tum jante hu ke maine ya pher tumahre Papa ne kabhi bhi tumahre milne milana e pe nazaar nai rakhe tum jise chao mil sakte hu mujhe bura tu bus is wajha se laga ke tumne mujhse jhoot bola
(Naina was like😭)
N:Naii Maaa main appse kabhi jhoot nai bol sakte par par!!!
M:acha Beta abb sojao raat kafe hugae hai aur tum thakh bhi gae huge
(her Mom was on the edge of her room suddenly Naina called her from the back)
N:Maaa
M:haan bolo
(Naina moved towards her Mom and hugged her)
N:Main mai app ku kuch batana chate hunn
M:naina raat bht hugae hai kal bata dena
N:Nai Maa agar maine abhi naa bataya tu mujhe sare raat neend nai ayege
(they moved towards the balcony of Naina's room pehle they stared eachother for a moment after that)
N:Main nai jante mujhe app ku ye baat kis tarah batane chaiye likn agar maine nai bataye tu mujhe chain bhi nai ayega
(actually her Mom knows that she likes Sharikh aur ajj bhi wu uske sath hi thi but she dnt wants to express that to her that time)
M:tumhe kuch kahne ki zururta nai and consoles her
N:main wu ajj (she is stumbling wid her words)
M:Main jante hunn ajj tum Sharikh ke sath the
(She was surprised ke how her MOM knows this)
N:Maa apku kaise pata
M:Beta tumhare ye ju ankhein haina ye ek khule kitab ki tarah hain ye sab bata dete hain aur inhu ne tu mujhe bht pehle hi ye bata dia tha ke ye kya kahana chate hain ye kisku dekhana chate hainn
(Naina was embarssed now😳)
N:Kya aisa hi hai mere ankhein kya sab bata dete hainn
M:Haan aisa hi hai aur main yehe chate the ke tum khud mujhse is baree mei baat karu kunki mai tumhare khushi chate hunnn
(Naina was feeling so blessed to have a Mother like her who appreciates her in every walk of life and now in her love tooo)
N:U r best!
M:Acha acha theek hai ab zyadaa mazke lagane ki xururat nai and She giggled😆
N:app mujh pe hans rae hainn
M:nai nai main tu apne massom bache pe haans rae hunn and she laughed more
N:main app ku kuch aur bhi batana chate hunn
(now when Naina realized that her Mother is very supportive to her She thought it wrong to hide from her about her engagement with Sharikh but still daar tu tha kahin na kahin)
M:Haan bolo na'
(She say it in a one breath)
Maine shahrikh se engagement karle
(Her mom was shocked 😲 ke isne ek dum ye kya kha dia)
M:Kya ye sab kab??????
(Than Naina explained her everthing and than)
M:tumhe pata hai ke main aur tumhare Papa bhi yehe chate they ke tum aur Sharikh ek sath hujao kunki hume sharikh bht pasand hai wu ek bht he acha Larka hai
N:kya waqiye Papa bhi ?
M:Haan Beta tumhare Papa ne mujh se khud ek din ye baat ki thi
(Naina was so happy ke usku samjh nai aya ke wu hawaon mei urr rae hai ya zameen pe hai)
N:I Love u soo muchhh
M:Acha ab baki batein kal karen?????Sujao
N:Theekh hai mai sujate hunnn
(and her mother kissed her forehead and give her blessings Naina was so over joyed k jis baat ku batane se wu itna hichkicha rae the ajj wohe baat usne itni asaani se kha de aur na sirf kha de balke usku uske liye razamaande bhi milgae meanwhile She thought nothing and called her love to give him the superb news)


To be continued

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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Waw superb awsome update, loved it, plz do continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: -diva-shamya-

Waw superb awsome update, loved it, plz do continue soon..

thank u soo much😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
phir 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏
Edited by anamika_0 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
amaazziiinggg!!!! 😃

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