MG FF DEMON'S ANGEL Last Pt&Epilogue28/1/2013 P-98 - Page 12

Janu me 2nd.
Blockbaster update.

Nice part...
Finaklly maharaj ki aakhe khul gayi... Good ab bete k prem ka bhoot utar jayega ...
Feeling really bad for geet ..bciz of him she is suffering so much...
So he entered d place where he belinged... N nw he is on mission to save geet... Hope he remembers his real moto... N changes...

wow so maan is going towards thakshak to defeat him lovely dear am so much interested...do continue soon shona...👏

sorry didnt know you had updated so many chapeters you see i just saw what it said on the firsr page so was asking for update
good thing you sent me a pm or wouldnt have known about your new chapters
oh my god maan has turned into complete beast man that was lucky that geet was saved from his lust
and now he is even cursed which means he will never have her
hello how could he do this to the one who is his soulmate
man this is sad that he turned into such a beast
dude if i were you i would concentrate on getting her to be alive you better not fail her dude
cheers for pm

both parts are best

maan wants 2 do anything 2 save her
superb update
continue

wowww bahut achha part ranimaa

toh ab yuvraj apni mishty ke liye aushdhi ki khoj me jaayega

per dono dur ho gaye ..

*DEMON'S ANGEL*

PART - 10

MAAN sit on his horse nd Aditya on hs. Both tuk deir horse 2 d direction. Maan madly run hs horse nd Aditya follows hm both doesnt talk 2 each other 4 1ce. Coz both hates each other.
ADITYA:mujhe lgta hai tume maanchitr(map)1 bar firr se dekhna chahiye coz hum pichhle kai ghanto se chal rahe hai lekin Darukh van ka kuch ata pta nai hai.

MAAN:ab tm hume bataoge ki hume kya krna hai?

ADITYA:ha coz tm bina soche samjhe apna ghoda dudaye ja rahe ho.

MAAN:him aise hi kam krte hai tume nai psnd to qapis laut jao.

ADITYA:laut jata agr mahaguru ka adesh na hota.

Maan nevr listn ny1 so he run fst,bt cluelsly. Aftr sevral hours of running deir horses tired nd sun start setting down.so dey decided 2 tak rest 4 a while. Aditya wnt nd collect sm woods to lignite d fire. He cook food 4 dem. Although he hates hm bt he cnt denied d orders of Mahaguru. Maan dosnt lyk d food,bt seeing no choice he ate.

Aditya:tm so jao main pehra dunga.

MAAN:hme tumari madat ki koi avashyakta nai hai.

ADITYA:main ye sb..

MAAN:pta hai mahaguru k kehne pe kr rae ho.

Both r stubborn so no1 slept. Both awked bt slowly2 both's eyelids bcm heavy wid sleep nd both went 2 dreamland. Maan ws in own world,where he saw Geetakshi was playing in water nd he reached 2 hr. Geetakshi felt shyied. Maan snaked hs strong arm around hr deligate waist nd tagged hr soft petite figure 2 hs strong frame. He squeezed hr waist in hs fingers she whimpered at hs advancment nd clenched hs broad shoulders nd dug hr nails in hs bare skin. Maan moved 2 hr ears nd bite nd suck hr earlobes. She shuddred in hs arms. Maan moved 2 hr soft pink lips nd slammed hs hungry lips on hr. Hr lips seemed heavenly 2 hm. He sucked d sweet honey juice of hr. But suddnly she bite on hs neck vry sharply. Maan realy felt d pain nd slowly2 opned hs dizzy eyes.

Maan:ye humari griva(neck)me sach me dard kyu ho rha hai,hum 2 sapna dekh rahe the na?

Wen he opend hs eyes fully,he found hmslf tied in ropes nd many horrer luking tribal people having red eyes nd black faces r,standing around hm wid deir sharp weapons. Aditya ws alredy in deir grip nd dey made hm stand on hs feet. Maan glared dem all bt dey dnt scared of hm.

MAAN:kon ho tm sb,or tumari himmat kaise hui hume is tarah bandhne ki?

Tribal man:ise sardar k pas le chalo wo hi iski akal thikane lagayenge.

Maan tried hard bt nt able 2 free hmslf. Tribal men dragged dem 2 deir place nd present both in frnt of deir head,who was a aged man nd all r standing bending position in hs honour.

T.Man:sardar ye 2 hume jungle me mile.

T.Head saw dem carefully:inhe pinjare me daal do.ab inki wajah se kal humare do admi bach jayenge.

ADITYA:lekin hmara kasoor kya hai?

T.Head:yahi ki tm manushya(human) ho or hr puranmashi ko hme Jhingara ko do manushya bhent(gift)krne hote hai.is bar tm 2 k aane se humare kabile k 2 logo k pran bach jayenge.

MAAN:ye Jhingara kon hai?or hume uska chara kyu banaya ja raha hai.

T.Head:Jhingara 1 jinn hai jo manushya ka maas khata hai.ab kal hum tm 2 ko uske hawale karenge.le jao or daal do kaidkhane me.

His men folloewd hs order nd throw dem in dark jail.

MAAN:ye sb tmhari galti hai.tm to sone nai wale the na fir kyu so gaye?

ADITYA:ye meri nai tumari bewajah akad ka nateeja hai.agr tumne maanchitr ko dekha hota to hm yaha nai faste or agr raat me bari bari se sote to ye sb nai hota.

MAAN:is waqt mujhe humse zada Geetakshi ki chinta ho rai hai.agr use dwa samay pe na mili to wo marr jayegi.kisi b trah yaha se niklna hi hoga pehle hi 7 me se 1 dinn brbad ho chuka hai.

ADITYA:waise wo bach b gai to b konsa fayda hai uska.tm jaisa janwar uska shikar krne ki tak me hai ye main achho trah janta hu.

MAAN punched hm in angr nd he 2 ans hm.bt he overpowerd Adi.

MAAN:tmari himmat kaise hui humse aise bat krne ki?

ADITYA:sach kadwa hota hai.ya to keh do ye jhoot hai?tume sirf uska shareer chahiye apni wasna(Lust) purti ki liye.

Dont know how bt hs words trembeled hs soul. He hav no ans 2 hs assicuations. He leve hm jerkly. Both bcm silent dnt want 2 talk 2 ech othr. In mid night Maan trying 2 found d way of escaping.

ADITYA:ye tm kya kr rae ho?

MAAN shut hs mouth wid hs hands nd whispered:shhh. Dekho filhal apna jhagda bhulkr yaha se niklne ki sochte hai.

ADITYA:magar kaise?

MAAN:mahaguru ne kaha tha tm kisi b janwar ka roop le skte ho.to kya tum kisi chhote janwar ka rup leke is kaid se bhar ja skte ho firr wo chabi le aana or drwaja khol dena or hum dono yaha se bhag jayenge.

Aditya agreed wid hm. He cnverted hmslf in2 a small cat nd com out through d distance between d bars. He strt searchng d keys of d door. Finaly he found a guard who hv d keys. Aditya cm 2 hs identity nd made hm unconcious.he stole d keys nd freed Maan also. Both fought wid d security guards nd cm out of deir grip. Both start running from dere...

chalo they have finally set off huh
but will he be able to save her from the poison even if he does will it make any difference
well of course it will after all she is his other half of soul naa so she has to be alive to defeat takshak at any costs
they got caught out because of their fighting huh
well one hopes they manage to get away from there without further problems
cheers for pm