Maneet SS- Kaafilaa. PART 10/ Pg 88/ JUN 13 PM L8R - Page 15

wonderful part!!!! ab tho suspence aur bhi jyaada hogayaa... wat happend in the past??????😕 geet had no money for food... felt very sad for geet...hopin that everythng vl b 5n soon!!!!! waitin eagerly 4 the nxt part... thnx 4 the pm...

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Pls contionue soon

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Me noticed that some of you have got a doubt so me clearing it- Maan had not thrown Geet out, he had asked Geet to leave the house but Geet had left with all her belongings so she had her credit cards with her!!!

Here's a long update for you dears!!! Hope you like it!!! Me has no intention of hurting or insulting anyone still if you feel me did it in this update, am sorry in advance!!!

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PART - 4

"Ghar chalein???"

These two words acted as a balm on the deep wounds instilled in Geet's heart specially they covered up for the two words that had stabbed her heart….

"Get out…"

She could never forget those two words that came out from her Maan's mouth shattering her soul. But today when Maan ever so lovingly said "Ghar chalein", she forgot all her sorrows temporarily!!!

She kept looking at him in awe while Maan scooped her in his arms and started making his way towards the car!!! Many people gave them looks some even whistled while others grimaced at the PDA but Maan didn't bother at all and kept looking at his life in his arms, who was turning redder by the second!!!

Maan settled her in the car making sure she is comfortable and sat on the other side asking the driver to make a move…

KHURANA MANSION

Geet had slept after a while in the car and even Maan didn't bother her, as he knew how essential this rest was for her. The doctor had advised him to let Geet stay in the hospital for a few more days to keep her under observation but Maan had insisted to discharge her immediately due to security reasons. He by now knew how unsafe Geet was given the circumstances and he was not going to take any risk until he knew the whole matter.

Even after reaching home, he didn't wake her up rather he scooped her in his arms once again and carried her in his arms all the way up to THEIR bedroom. He laid her down in the plush bed and after drawing a comforter on her and adjusting the room temperature just as she liked, he made his way towards the kitchen to get something for her to eat. He knew he had to be very careful and particular about everything specially her food habits…

He took a glass of apple juice and asked the servant to prepare cheese and paneer omelet, Geet's favorite…

He entered the room only to see Geet awake and looking around bewildered as if seeing the room for the first time then she noticed him and kept looking at him as if he was a ghost…

"Kya hua Geet???"

He asked finally breaking her staring session and noticed the heat creeping up her neck which made him chuckle…

"Wo… wo… Main yahan… wo… kaise…"

Geet struggled to form a sentence getting choked with emotions and Maan exactly knew why, he didn't say anything just kept the glass on the side table, and gathered her in a hug… After a while he could feel his shirt getting wet due to her tears, he felt helpless to see her in this state and he could do nothing… so he did what he was best at, he diverted her mind…

"Uhh Geet… Tumhe pata hai agle hafte kya hai???"

"Huh????? N… Nahi…" Geet muttered wondering where did this come from and at the same time thinking if she forgot his birthday, their anniversary or any important date!!

"Arrey Geet, agley haftey INDEPENDENCE DAY hai!!!"

She looked at him immediately, forgetting that she was crying a while back, they kept looking at each other and then burst out laughing remembering their last one!!!

PAST

Maan was watching a program dedicated to freedom fighters and was deeply involved in it while Geet was getting thoroughly bored… She hated history anyway since she used to always suck at it!!!

"Hey babaji!!! Kehne ko to aaj independence day hai par mere liye toh aaj 'JAIL DAY' hai!! Yeh Maan khud to kahi jaana nahi chahtey chhuti honey ke bawjood aur mujhe bhi jaaaney nahi de rahey bass lagey hue hai iss kambhakt T.V. ke peechey…." Geet muttered to her favorite Babaji staring at the ceiling!!!

"Maan… aapko inn topi waale uncle mein kya achchha lag raha hai???" She finally asked fed up with him!!!

"Arrey Geet, tum nahi pata yeh kaun hai??? He is Subhash Chandra Bose… A great GREAAAT freedom fighter… Didn't you read his famous punch line in history…Tum mujhe khoon do main tumhe aazaadi dunga!!!"

"Ummm…. Maan… Uhh…"

"Abb kya hua Geet… Abb tumhe kya samajh mein nahi aaya…"

"I understood par mujhe aap sey yeh puchhna thha ki are you sure he was a freedom fighter…"

"Haan… Kyun…" He asked confused…

"Uhh nahi abb why will a freedom fighter need blood??? He must be a VAMPIRE!!!"

"WHATTT!!!!" Maan exclaimed, at loss of words!!!

Needless to say after that poor Maan couldn't ever watch any freedom fighter specially Subhash Chandra Bose without imagining fangs and them actually drinking people's blood!!!

PRESENT

Both of them were still laughing at the extremely funny memory!!! When the servant knocked on their door!!!

"Come in!!"

"Sir, Ma'am ke liye Omelet…"

"Hmm… theek hai rakh do…"

Maan dismissed the servant after that and turned to Geet and gave her the glass of juice, she made a baby face but one glare from Maan and she started drinking it like a good baby!! Maan kept the plate of omelet in front of her and she started devouring it without any fuss as she realized she was indeed hungry…

Maan's phone beeped thus announcing the arrival of an E-mail… He looked at the mail and his expressions changed…

"Geet… Tum khaana khao main abhi ekk important phone call karke aata hoon… Aur haan juice khatam ho jaana chaiyeh OK???"

She nodded and Maan left but not before dropping a kiss on her forehead…

MAAN's Study

Maan locked the door of his study securely and called up his personal manager cum right hand immediately…

"Yes Rohan… are you sure about it??"

"Jee sir… Bilkul pakki khabar hai… Pehle mujhe bhi kaafi doubt hua tha isliye maine double confirm kiya hai sir…"

"Hmm doubt toh mujhe bhi kal hua tha jab doctor ne mujhe wo sab bataya tha… parr yeh baat itni gehri hogi aisa maine sapne main bhi nahi socha tha…"

"Jee sir… but this is for sure… Geet Ma'am kissi ki kaid main thi aur lag bhag ekk haftey pehey hi wo waha sey chhuti hongi…"

"Main uss insaan ko chhodunga nahi Rohan… Tum immediately apni saari resources lagaa do… Ok… Aur haan tumhe yeh baat pata kaise lagi??"

"Sir.. Main yahi baat aapko khud sey batana chahta tha issliye main ne e-mail mein iss cheez ka zikar nahi kiya??"

"Kya cheez??"

"Geet Ma'am hamare hi lokhandwala ke paas jo burnt factory hai uss mein bandi banayi gayi thhi…"

"WHATTT??? HOW THE HELL IS THIS POSSIBLE??? AUR HAM MEIN SE KISSI KO PATA KAISE NAHI CHALA??"

"Please shaant ho jaiye sir… Darasal… uss factory mein pichhle kuchh mahino sey kissi ka aana jaan nahi hai… abhi parso hi hamara insurance claim paas hua tha iss liye kal main waha par gaya tha check karney ke liye ki around kitni labour humein chaiyeh hogi, par waha par…"

"WAHA PAR KYA???"

"Waha par mujhe kissi aurat ke dupaatey ka tukda mila aur ekk chair bhi jiss par rassiyan lagi hui thhi.. mujhe doubt hua toh maine waha ke chowkidaar ko bulaya… ussne pehle toh kuchh nahi bataya parr phir ussne aakhir main apna muh khol diya aur ussi ne bataya ki Geet ma'am yaha par lag bhag 3 hafte thhi par phir wo kaha gayi kissi ko pata nahi chala… Maine ussko police ke hawaley kar diya hai sir…"

Maan didn't know how to react to this piece of information, his Geet was held as a hostage in a burnt down factory, in fact his own factory and he had no freaking clue about it??? What type of a man he was??? He was hell angry at himself but still his logical part of brain finally made him speak…

"Who is behind all this Rohan???"

"Sir I think aap bhi jaantey hai ki aisa kaun kar sakta hai…"

"Yes... Tar this time I won't just assume… Mujhe proofs chaiyeh…"

"Jee sir… kaam ho jaayega…"

"Good and thanks Rohan…"

"Nahi Maan… don't thank me… you are my boss but before that you are my best friend and even before that Geet is my sister… Can I come and see her in evening???"

"You are always welcome Rohan… See you in evening… But haan uske saamne iss sab ka zikar mat karna… Okay???"

"Off course… Bye!!!"

"Bye!!"

Maan hung up the phone and sank in his majestic chair… He held his face between his palms and sighed in despair… After a few minutes he got up resolutely and clenched his jaw…

"I wont leave you SAVITRI DEVI… You dared to play with MSK's life… I will destroy you… completely!!!"

He composed himself and made his way towards his room… No No his and Geet's room, THEIR room!!!

THEIR BEDROOM

Maan entered the room only to see Geet struggling to get off the bed… He immediately went towards her and held her in place…

"What the hell are you trying to do Geet???" Maan blasted on her…

"Wo main… wo.. paani…"

Maan saw the side table and saw the glass as well as pitcher on the side table were empty, he shook his head at his superwoman wife who loved delving in stunts rather than asking some one for help… He still remembered the driving incident!!!

PAST

Maan was running a high temperature and Geet was getting very worried… She decided to take Maan to the doctor as she was not able to contact their family doctor since morning and Maan's condition was worsening…

"Kaka… Kaka!! Driver bhaiya ko boliye gaadi nakalein…"

"Bitiya wo to ek haftey ki chutti par hai…"

"Kya… Aur Mohan bhaiya???"

"Beta wo bhi aaj kaam par nahi aaya…"

"Haaye abb to ekk hi raasta hai… Kaka meri madad kijiye…"

"Jee bitiya…"

Poor Maan was carried to the car with Geet supporting him from one side and Kaka from the other…

He was in a semi-dazed state when he was deposited in the front seat of the car and buckled up… But all his dizziness went out of the window when he saw Geet settling herself on the driver seat and taking a deep breath while starting the ignition…

"G… G…ggg… Gggeet… T..tum c…cccar chalaogi????" Maan gulped…

"Jee Maan… but chinta not… Mujhe car chalaani aati hai… 12^th ke baad summer vacation mein sikhi thi… wo bas reverse lene mein thoda problem hai aur thoda turning mein dikkat parr aap chill karo I am a good driver, I drive absolutely safe…"

"G… G…" He was unable to say anything more and the car zoomed out of the mansion at a speed on more than 75km/h narrowly missing the poor chowkidar who was opening the gates… Poor guy almost missed out on a meeting with Babaji!!! Today he knew how it felt to be like an auspicious Nariyal (coconut) , the one which people flatten with their new cars!!!

Missing nearly 20 cars, 35 motorbikes and innumerable cyclists they finally screeched before the city hospital… Maan didn't know about his fever but he was sure he would be having a high BP problem and maybe even a heart attack!!!

Geet was absolutely right, She was an excellent driver, completely safe for herself just a threat to others in fact every poor soul on the road!!!

The doctor gave him some mild anti-biotic but he requested her to admit him as he knew that if he had to go once again with Geet, giving credit to her awesome driving skills he would anyway be on hospital bed soon so why not now!!!

After innumerable requests and finally threats, the doctor finally admitted him for some superficial tests, and the hospital staff witnessed for the first time, a person who was super excited to get admitted in a hospital…

Geet was worried sick and made the doctor half mad but what will the poor doctor say when she himself had no reply!!!

PRESENT

"Mujhe nahi bula sakti thi???" He asked softly wiping the tears that were about to drop from those beautiful hazels due to his shouting!!!

Geet looked down and didn't say anything, Maan went to the other side of the room and got her a bottle of water from their mini fridge and gave her a glass of chilled water, just as she liked…

She drank it taking small sips…

"I am sorry Geet…"

"Jee???" Geet looked up startled!!!

"Maine tumhare saath jo kiya wo maafi ke layak to nahi parr…"

Geet didn't let him speak anything further and kept a finger on his lips and shook her head signaling him to not speak anything… Maan removed her finger and continued…

"Nahi Geet aaj agar main tumhe ya baby mein sey kissi ko bhi kho deta to main marr jaata Geet…"

"MAAAN…." Geet shouted on him as he spoke of his death… She then sighed and took his hand and kept it slowly on her tummy…

"Baby and mamma both love you papa!!!!"

That was it, Maan broke down completely and hugged Geet from her waist and kissed her tummy lovingly, dropping his tears at the same time…

"Love you too baby…" Maan spoke hoarsely…

"Sirf baby??? Mamma nahi???" Geet pouted earning a chuckle from Maan…

"Hmm baby ki mumma… Abb sochna padega…" Maan said tapping a finger on his temple as if thinking deeply….

"Maan…" Geet whined tuning her head away from him…

"LOVE YOU SWEETHEART…" Maan shouted in her ear while Geet stilled totally shocked, as she didn't expect this…

Maan started laughing loudly and took Geet in a bear hug silently promising Geet and his baby…

"Jiss jiss ke karan tum dono ne itna dukh jhela hai, jo hamare zindagi ke khubsurat Kaafilaa mein kaanta bana hai, uss ko agar maine uski jad sey nahi nikala, agar uss ke wajood ko maine khatam nahi kara to mera naam bhi Maan Singh Khurana nahi…"

PRECAP

SAVITRI DEVI and MAAN

AAMNA-SAAMNA

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Me also wants to know if you want me to write more of this SS, actually this SS was going to come to an end in maximus 2 chapters but if you like it then me can extend the story to around 10-15 chapters, with cute cute past moments!! as you wish dears!!!

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yeh kya ruchs is mein savitri devi ko hi villan banaadiya...😲

Netaji part was Awesum!
Me want more chpters plz!

Very hilarious and lovely update

ye kya savitri devi ko negative hi bana diya...anyways awesome update...

Simply superb!! Maan taking care of Geet and their sweet past moments!!! actually waiting to see the revenge part...