Maneet SS- Kaafilaa. PART 10/ Pg 88/ JUN 13 PM L8R

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Hi thanks 4 da pm n intense emotional update! Maaneet really love each other! SD negative! Maaneet scenes with the baby were wonderful! Well written! update soon

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angelic_cute

@angelic_cute

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

loved it

awesome part was the driving of geet

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Dona

@Donnaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

awesome update

savtri devi ko negative bana dia

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Jeba Rahman

@the_chosen_one

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

its simply awesome.
past incidents was hilarious.
me want more parts.

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mandymore

@mandymore

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

awsome prt..netaji ko vampire bana dia😆

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

trying not to puke on my laptop here I am

first of all love your banner you made

Jail day

"Maan… aapko inn topi waale uncle mein kya achchha lag raha hai???" Hawww maan likes topi waale uncles bechari geet ka ab kya hoga

wah ruchi you really payed attention in your history classvampire good one Geetdadi how could make dadi bad No ruchi you can' t do that poor maan itna darr geet se that he decided to stay theirsochna padega

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#157

awesome part

geet kidnapped n kept in his own factory..maan will not leave the person

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d_sonia

@d_sonia

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Awesome update loved it
Haye Maaneet moments were cute
And flashback was mindblowing... Absolutely loved it
Eagarly waiting for next...
Contionue soon

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Sara Khanna

@$ara_$hachi

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#159

Ruchs, hell ya. Me want another 10-15 parts. Aise kaise khatam hone du. You are just like ANSHRA, turning to be a excellent writer. Every word, title, dialogue, EVERYTHING is turning amazing. That was indeed a long and twisty update. And you know, how much i LOVE it.

Dadima?? This thing is not getting out of my head. Geet had suffered THAT much and he wasn't aware. Ab toh past ke baare mey aur exicted hu. I knew from starting, mera Maan can never be a cheap guy. He is sometimes angry, stubborn, arrogant or short tempered but never a coward or looser, to behave cheap. Glad, the family is back. But boy, car driving and independance day scene was damn funny. He know very well, how to handle her. Overall, superb. Waiting for precap part. Like rohan too. Geet ne yeh baat chupayi kyu? And did she know the real culprit?

Do cont soon and do PM me.