SS:Waiting for you...*apologise*

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Posted: 13 years ago
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  1. Heyy! Manveerians
As you all know I am new to this forum and read your FF , SS , OS .
That encourage me and I dared to write the SS Waiting for you .


Uday has returned back from london after 5 years and go to his niece school to pick her up.He loves him a lot more than Unnati.
The car arrived at school and he is waiting for his niece. He is observing school inside his car.Then,he saw a boy surrounded by many girls with red rose in their hand and boy with white rose.
The boy reminded him his childhood days.Suddenly,he saw her niece with yellow rose and give it to the boy and he also gives him a yellow rose.Then they share cards with each other. His niece saw his car and come towards it .

I will cntinue if u lyke it.

❤️ Sanya

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice but short and confusing😕 please update the part soon and tell us the character sketch please but this little part was interesting please update soon😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vampire12345678

nice but short and confusing😕 please update the part soon and tell us the character sketch please but this little part was interesting please update soon😃


It is confusing because it has some suspenses and secret to be unfold .
Character Sketch is same as the serial but the story is of 5 years later.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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story is nice...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Pls continue soon. The prolouge is realy interesting. I guess the little boy is Manveer's son. UV don't know it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I will try 2 update i8 in nite .
Thnks for ur cmmnts
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arieltabi

Pls continue soon. The prolouge is realy interesting. I guess the little boy is Manveer's son. UV don't know it.

You will know this in the Chapter
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Posted: 13 years ago
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His niece is coming at the direction of his car.Then Uday open the door and she hugged him.

His niece : Mama sa aap kab laute apko pata hai hum ne apko bahut miss kiya aur humara gift wo bhi nahi laye.

Uday : Wait a minute Vini baby you completely like your mother .

Little boy: Vini come here I have something for you.

Vini : Mamu sa ek minute main abhi ayi.

Then the boy give him a Hannah Montana hamper and the girl in excitement hugged him.

Vini invited his friend to meet his Uday mama.

The boy attracts Uday too much. He is feeling some bond with the boy.

Boy: Hello ! Uncle
Uday : Hello beta . What is your name ?
Boy : My name is Udyamveer.Rajkumar Udyamveer Singh
Uday : Well ! My name is
The boy cuts him off' Yuvraj Udayveer Singh . Am I right
Uday: You are absolutely right Udyam . How do you know me ?
Udyam : Who doesn't know you Uncle and you are too Rajwada .rite
Uday nodded in yes
Hum rajwade hain aur humko sabhi rajwadon ko jan na chahiye haina.
Uday smiled at his talks because he is talking like him when he was child.
Udyam : Uncle this is for you
He handed a red rose to Uday.
Uday :Thank You beta
Then a maid says from distance " Rajkumar Udyam apki mom apka car mein wait kar rahi hain.
Udyam : Ok Bye Uncle Mom humara wait kar rahi hain
Uday : Accha jao beta . Bye
Udyam runs in the direction of his mom's car and waves his hand to Uday. Uday also sits in his car and leave for his hotel.

Udyam : Mom aap jab tak bahar nahi ayengi main andar nahi jaunga.
Then the car door open and Manyata comes out.
Manyata : Ab to aaoge na . Udyam nods in yes and Manyata picks him in his arms.

At the road Manyata and Uday's car stopped side by side but they don't see each other only Vini and Udyam see each other and as they going to say anything the car moved in the diffrent direction.

Uday's Hotel

Unnati hugs his Dada and welcomes him.

Uday: Unnati tum kab ayi ?
Unnati : abhi thodi der pehle dada aaj aap kuch late nahi ho gaye.
Vini: Mom hum nana saheb se milkar aa rahe hai tab tak aap mama sa se bat karo.
Unnati : haan to dada ap ky keh rahe the.
Uday : wo kya hua na Unnati aj hum Vini ki ek friend se mile Udyam
Unnati was shocked to hear his name and say' Dada aap Udyam se mile the.
Uday : haan Unnati bahut cute hai .pata hai wo ladka hume humari bachpan ki yad dila deta hai.This boy is good for Vini .Tumhara kya khyal hai.
Unnati: dada magar wo dono to bhai behen hai
Uday : kya ? Unnati : I mean dada bhai behen jaise hai.

Then Unnati's phone ring and vijay name flashed on it.
Unnati go out of the room and pick the phone : Boliye Vijay kuch kam tha kya . Vijay : haan Unnati hum m bhai se milne aye hai tum bhi a jao Unnati: haan Vijay hum a rahe hai aur hume bhi Manyata se bahut zaroori bat karni hai.Vijay: kya bat hai unnati tum pareshan ho. Unnati :
Vijay hum aap ko ake sab batate hain
End of the chapter
Hope you like it and Plez comment also .If anyone wants pm send me buddy request.

❤️
Sanya🤗

Precap : Manyata knows about Uday's arrival and mystery of Udyam's birth is also solved.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh my god this was fantastical i mean now i understand the plot it is like manveer seoarate manyata was pregnant but uday did not know and now they will meet again this plot is awesome please continue soon this update was super duper nice
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start
please update soon
and pm me as well

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