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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsum update sanya 😃 plz do cont soon and add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey sanya i really liked ur story dear...plz PM me if u can when u update next!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: mahara23

ya its not boring no need to thnkxx if u want too thankxx so plzzz give post the next part plzzz

Tommorrow is my last exam , After it i will try 2 upd8 nxt part on Wednesday. Then u hve 2 accpt my Thanx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -JEHAN-

hey sanya i really liked ur story dear...plz PM me if u can when u update next!!


Hi ! Jehan Plez send me buddy request then I can easily send you pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PLIZ UPDATE SOON:pNOW I REALLY CANT WAIT.PLIZ PLIZ PLIZ PLIZ PLIZ CONT SOON DEAR:p(aur mat tarpao)u said that u will update Wednesday but now itz Friday dear.so pliz cont soon n pm me if u can:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swini01

PLIZ UPDATE SOON:pNOW I REALLY CANT WAIT.PLIZ PLIZ PLIZ PLIZ PLIZ CONT SOON DEAR:p(aur mat tarpao)u said that u will update Wednesday but now itz Friday dear.so pliz cont soon n pm me if u can:)


Dear , I am going to Mathura today at the ocassion of janmasthami with my family and when I will reach at the hotel , I will try to Update.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: san.gar


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<font size="4">Dear , I am going to Mathura today at the ocassion of janmasthami with my family </font>and when I will reach at the hotel , I will try to Update.


ok dear 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
Manyata pick the baby in her hands and kissed his forhead and the baby smiled like his dad. Manyata's tears started to fallen down and
the background music
Abhi mujh me kahin baki hai thodi si zindagi
Jagi Dhadkan nayi jaana jinda hoon main to abhi
Kuch aisi lagan is lamhe hai
ye lamha kahan tha mera
ab hai samne ise choo lu jara
mar jaon ya jee lun zara
khushiyan chum lu ya ro lu jara
mar jaon ya jee lu zara
Manyata take the baby into the room full of her and Uday pictures
Abhi mujh me kahin baki thodi si hai zindagi
Music
She see her and Uday pic and stand infront of her and Uday pic


and remember her and Uday dance.


dhoop me jalte hue tan ko chhaya ped ki mil gayi

Manyata remembers when Brijraj gives her punishment to stand at the terrace and she fall , then Uday pick her in his arms
ruthe bacche ki hasi jaise phuslane se fir khil gayi
She see her baby and the baby is smiling and to see her baby she also giggles with tears.
kuch aisa hi mehsoos dil ko ab ho raha hai
varso ke purane zakhm pe marham laga sa hai
kuch aisa raham is lamhe pe hai
Manyata hugged her baby tightly
ye lamha kaha tha mera
ab hai samne ise choo lu zara
mar jao ya jee lu jara
khushiyan chum lu ya ro lu jara
mar jao ya jeelu zara

Music

Manyata on the bed feeding her baby amd rembering Uday.

dor se tuti patang jaise
ye zindagani meri
aaj ho kal ho mera na ho
har din yeh kahani meri
ek bandhan naya piche se ab mujhko bulaye
( watching her baby)
ane wal kal ki kyo fikar mujhko sata jaye
ek aisi chubhan is lamhe me hai
ye lamha kaha tha mera
ab hai saamne is chu lu zara
mar jaon ya jee lu zara
khushiyan chum lu ya rolu zara
mar jaon ya jee lu jara

Then A maid come and Manyata come out from her flashbacks

Maid: Yuvrani aap se milne koi aya hai
M : aap chaliye hum aate hai

On the other hand Unnati and Vijay take Udyam to Uday niwas .
Vini : Udyam bhai aap yahan
Udyam : tumhe frndship band bandhne hume yahi ana pada , nahi to vo ladkiyan hume pagal kar deti
Vini : Bhai you are too much.
They both hugged each other.
Unnati laughed to see them because they are talking like her and Uday when they are child.
Udyam tie a band in the hand of Vini.

Uday : Rajkumar Udayam aur Rajkumari Vinti ,aap dono bhi humare dost ho ,aap hume nahi bandhoge
Udyam : Hum aap ko zaroor bandhege Dad , I mean Uncle .
Sorry aaj hume apne Dad ki bahut yad aa rahi hai, isliye galti se...
Uday : Its OK beta

Udyam tie a band of Love you Dad by mistake to Uday and Uday also didn't notice this.
Uday give him a Soft toy of Tom in Tom and Jerry
Udyam : Uncle is ka Jerry kahan hai
Uday : Wo beta aise insan ke pas hai jis se kabhi hum bahut pyar karte the
Udyam : iska Jerry to
Unnati: Udyam chalo tumhari Mom ka phone aya tha wo tumhe bula rahi thi
Udyam : OK Uncle hum chalte hai
Bye
Uday smiled at him.

In the way
Udyam : Bua saa apne humare dad ko deka tha
Unnati : Haan beta kyon
Udyam : wo kaise lagte the
Unnati : Ek dum tumhare jaise lagte hai
Vini : Bhai aap ne apne Dad wala friendship band ni dhikaya
Udyam : Haan Chotu hum tumhe dikhate hai
Udyam see all bands but didn't find .
Udyam : Shayad hum ne wo Uncle ko pehna diya ,koi bat nahi
Chalo chalte hain

Precap : Manyata and Uday do the project together


Guys Hope you like this and if u lyke share your views

Sanya😊






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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Awsum update sanya!!! loved it!!! awww...u had to pick this song only yaar!!! made me almost cry!!! love this song!!!

Fanstastic chapter yaar...cont. soon :):):)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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love ur concept... i am wondering when will uday find that udyam is his son and wat will be his reaction to that..
waiting for d next update.. pls update soon n make it a long one😊😊

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