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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
loved it!!! continue soon :):)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Unnati reaches at Manyata 's home . She does not live in the same palace but make a new for her.
When Unnati reaches ,She found Vijay at the door.
Unnati : Apne Manyata ko dada ke India vapas aane ke bare me bata diya kya?
Vijay : Nahi abi tak to nahi kyon batao ...wiese bhin tum phone par kafi pareshan lag rahi thi...Kya hua Unnati ?
Unnati : Vijay Dada Udyam se mile the
Vijay : What ?
Unnati : Haan woh Vini ke school me .
Suddenly , Manyata comes there and ask : Kya hua Vini ke school mein.
Unnati : Manyata hume tumhe ek bahut zaroori bat batani hai
Manyata : Haan bolo Unnati
Unnati : Manyata ... Dada India vapas aa gaye hain aur yahi nahi wo Udyam se bhi mil chuke hain, Manyata ab behtar yahi hoga ki hum Dada ko sab sach - sach bata de.
Manyata started little weeping at this.Then Suddenly ,Udyam comes.
Udyam : Mom aap kyo ro rahi hain
Unnati : Woh apki mom ko apki badi nani saa ki bahut yad aa rahi hai isliye. Beta aaj aap apni Bua Saa ke sath chaloge, kyonki apki behen apko bahut yad kar rahi hai...Plez
Udyam : apko plez kehne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai,hum ap ke sath zaroor chalenge
Vijay : to chalein Udyam : ok
Vijay and Unnati take Udyam with him because he know Manyata need some time alone.
When Udyam go , Manyata comes into her room and and sts on the bed and remember all the moments that changed her life.


Manyata is locked inside her room and no one was at home. The day is passed ,Its night time and Manyata is completely tired and thirsty.
Uday is returned back at home and hear some sounds from Manyata's room.He immediately rushed into room and open the door and see Manyata's condition . He calls out for servant but no one hears him.Finally he decided to bring water for Manyata and help her to sit and drinking water ...
Uday : Manyata are you alright ?
Manyata nods in yes and Uday make her sit on bed
Manyata : Uday I am sorry , jo bhi maine kiya wo bilkul sahi nahi tha , mujhe apni shaadi wale din aise nahi jaana chahiye tha magar mera yakin mano Uday main us Akash ko yahi samjhane gayi thi ki meri shadi tum se ho rahi hai or main sirf tum se pyar karti hu sirf tum se . no -one can take ur place in my life , I love you Uday
Manyata is lttle crying at this and Uday cant see her tears .
He puts finger on Manyata 's face and calm down her .
Uday : shhh ! Princess ro mat Plez , hum tumhare aansu nahi dekh sakte kyonki hum bhi tum se bahut pyar karte hain...

To be continued
Guys! This is Part 1 of Chapter 2 and I will post next part on the Sunday Morning
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Sanya 🤗

Edited by san.gar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
Guys I need yor help
Do i make next part hot or it will be lights off ... u know what i mean
Guys plez give ur suggestions
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
make it hot dear it was good but make the next part long alsoo 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
Wow dear nie one.n pliz make it hot.cont soon n pm me if u can.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swini01

Wow dear nie one.n pliz make it hot.cont soon n pm me if u can.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
NICE UPDATE 👍🏼AND MAKE IT HOWT DEAR☺️ PLZ UPDATE NEXT PART ASAP AND PLZ PM ME IF U CAN
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
awesome and wonderful dear i can actually figure out the plot abit it is very nice and please update soon and thanks for the pm i loved this update vijaybhai and unnati are so supportive they will play the cupid again right😉 pleas update soon and please make the update hot😳 at the ned i would just say mindblowing update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
i loved it...plz upd8 soon o n yeah make it hawt d next upd8😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Awesome update! N plzz make the next part hot 😳

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