Finding The Light (VirMan) PART 40 FINISHED! - Page 14

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Chapter Fourteen ' Lost Identity

Beeji paced up and down the room in apprehension. After what had may have been an hour, her son Madan entered, a worried look appeared as he look at his troubled mother.

"Ma, is everything alright?" He asked politely.

"What is alright, Madan? Everything is going wrong!" She sighed before sitting down on a chair. Defeated, she buried her face into her hands and let out a deep breath.

"Did Maanvi call?" Madan instantly knew that this was going to be about Maanvi; he loved his niece to pieces and thus was always worried about her ever since she left the house.

"No, and I don't want to call her." She looked up at her son, "Madan, what do I say to her?"

Madan stood in silence unsure of what to reply.

"What kind of a Beeji am I?" She said, stopping a tear leave her eye. "Keeping her granddaughter away from what she wants to know."

"Ma, what you're doing is justified. This is better for Maanvi, and after all this is what her parents wanted right?" Madan knelt down and placed his hands into his mother's, for assurance.

"Yes, that's true. But what can I do? I can't bear to see my grandchild alone in an unknown city."

"But look on the bright side, Ma. Maanvi is safe, and she's with a family right? As soon as she's finished her business, she'll come back."

"But for how long? How long will she look for the truth? So many years we have hidden it away from her, because we know that she'll only blame herself." A tear flowed from her eye. "Remember when Maanvi accidently hurt Daboo whilst playing? They were pretending and joking about but remember how even then the young Maanvi blamed herself for everything? Even when Daboo knew that she wasn't at fault, she still blamed herself? This is what will happen, Madan. I'm scared what she'll do when she finds out."

"No, mother. Maanvi will not find out. That's why we're allowing her to stay at Chandigarh, as long she's there, she'll never find out. And she'll come home when she's tired, don't worry. She's a strong girl."

"That's what I'm scared of. What if in between all this, Maanvi loses herself?"

"Ma, you don't worry. Give Maanvi a call, see how she is."

"Yes, I'll do that."

Madan left the room and Beeji closed her eyes. Flashbacks of the young Maanvi came to her mind. A young baby, just born had entered the house, the proud parents surprise an astonished Beeji as the baby gurgled and smiled. They had nicknamed the unnamed baby, Maanvi and have since been the apple of their eyes. The father played every night with Maanvi, wanting to cherish these memories whilst the mother looked on at her daughter, the daughter she longed for so many years and her wish had come true, at the expense of another.

Author's Note: Okay for those that say this is really short well, I have to say that the way I write is mainly third person's perspective of a character (does that make sense?) And because this chapter was Beeji's perspective, I didn't want to say too much in case too much is given away (do I still make sense - lol?) Anyways, hope you enjoyed. And please do comment! It motivates me to right! :)

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